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| "The Choices Made" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: smartjock [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 13:21 CDT
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Inuyashsa on a date... intriging.. Rin has Sessy back, yay!! Could Sessy be getting softer like his brother? hehehe
| Reviewed By: smartjock [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 13:19 CDT
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Inuyashsa on a date... intriging.. Rin has Sessy back, yay!! Could Sessy be getting softer like his brother? hehehe
| Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 11, 2005 23:35 CDT
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hm...when I first read this story, I was scared it would be Inu-Kik and Sess-Kag, which almost never seems realistic because everyone is OOC. You pulled it off without that, proving that I, a savage Kag-Inu fan, can enjoy a dash of Sess-Kag. Even better, you've turned this into Sess-Kik and Inu-Kag. I actually like the Sess-Kik pairing. So this is great, cool story. WARNING, SHAMLESS ADVERTISING PUB FOR MM.ORG MEMBERS! http://www.fanfiction.net/~drakeclawfang Check out my stories at FF.net!
| Title: Dum de Dum, you are sooo impatient.
Reviewed By: J-Love On: May 18, 2005 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I think there was one spelling or grammer error. Something like that, well I always mark you down for spelling because I'm an english nazi. Anyway, I like the way you are going with this, the more I think about kikyo with seshomoru the more I think the would go together. They really have similar personalities. Ok, so this is what I'm wondering, and you probably won't tell me because it's yet to be written, but are you making kikyo human now? It seems like it would be impracticle, because she's just made of clay and stuff, but at the same time, I've seen weirder in Inuyasha. If so, this would mean that she had a life again, and she wasn't bound to this world for only revenge. I think it would fill a plot hole (well not a hole, but potential one) if you did this. I thought there was something else, but I guess not. Have fun over the summer, and remember I'll be here taking chem 116, so you'd better have more fun that I am.
| Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 03:59 CDT
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Kinda upset it turned out not to be a Sesh-Kag story..but i'll forgive ya and keep on reading!
| Reviewed By: Baby_red On: April 25, 2005 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate it!It was suppose to be a Sess/Kag pairing not a Inu/Kag or a Sess/Kikyo!!!Other than the pairings it's fine.Pls. change it to a Sess/Kag pairing or else...
| Reviewed By: J-Love On: April 24, 2005 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry for not rating spelling and Grammar correctly. You win, I lose, don't hurt me. Also, I'm sorry you have to see me everyday, but... but... Well, the semester is over now, you don't have to see me again if you don't want to. Oh wait! I still have to study! Hey, you want to study before the exam??? I mean, look at this review, straight 10, and I'm a hard reviewer. Well anyway, I liked the latest chapter, it didn't feel like a filler to me, I thought it really helped to know the feelings of the characters, and there's stuff happening with Sango and Miroku, so yeah, it was good. Well, I'll see you sooner or later down the road. Bye Bye.
| Title: story
Reviewed By: Yana5 On: April 19, 2005 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was soo good
| Title: hehehehehehhe....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi again sry) On: April 16, 2005 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok well the first thing i was taught be my friends is the vowels there kinda like the spanish vowels "A" is a short 'A', "E" is a long 'A', "I" is an 'E', "O" is a 'O', and "U" is an 'OOOOO' well if's easier to say and learn with the Ka. Ke. Ki. Ko. Ku., Sa. Se. Si. So. Su., well that's how i do it well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
| Reviewed By: J Love On: April 11, 2005 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm not used to reading fanfiction, but I really liked this. I think you do a good job at keeping the characters true to the anime, while changing the situations. I am very impressed. I hope you e-mail me when you do update. (by the way, this is that loser in your calculus class. You know, Python). I'm serious though, I really liked it as much as I like the series. Oh, but grammer wise, you can tell it's written at 5 am :p. Take care, and do your calc. homework, you can't run off to Fuedal Japan everytime we get a quiz you know.
| Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(notsignedin) On: April 08, 2005 22:47 CDT
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oh i do like your work but dont freakin do that 2 sessy hes toooooooo fine!!!!!!!!!! I love the story dont make this an inu/kag plz love your work but i ccan makeyour life a living hekll
| Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(notsignedin) On: April 08, 2005 22:44 CDT
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its freakin sick with wat your doing with sessy and kikyou sick sick i hope you change your story or ill send you 2 hell
| Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (man am i ever signed in?) On: April 06, 2005 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok well She wrote it in Haragina (sp?) the jap. lettering for short words and it sounds like ' oo ka ka go oo' yea it's really funny cuz. there in jap. class and i'm not but i do kno how to say 'the mountin is mine' "yama wa watashi no desu" and do you kno how to pronounce the vowels b/c my friends yell at me if i dont so i'm getting better!! ^__^ well keep up the good work and update again soon ...... and no it's too confuzing to try adding him in b/c his mind is like a bad version of ADD!!!! ^__^
| Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasloveLorn (sry nsi) On: April 05, 2005 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate pink b/c it's a bit too cheery! that and it's so over worn now!!! well anywho you knowticed that about Kik and Kag too? i thought it was just me! when i tryed drawing them they were nothing alike well anywho keep up the good work oh.. and that MOO COW COW GO MOO is just a stupid thing me and my friends say they even found out how to say it in jap. as well as the translation for DONSHUUNOUO-HITO!! big fish person!!! ^__^ well update again soon please?
| Title: Fauna
Reviewed By: smartjock [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fauna you are awesome, go butts...
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