| "My Mommy Kurama?" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: bee bee bu On: February 05, 2005 22:40 CST
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I'm just stopby to read your story. I can believe you write thet much. You must be like well love writing. But doesn't it hurt you finger, hand, or wrist? Well alot of reader suggest you should writ Hiei and Kurama having sex, but wat about the little son of Kurama. I think you should writ Hiei and Kurama having sex, I would like to read that.
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Reviewed By: shishishokio On: February 05, 2005 22:36 CST
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Woooooowwwwwwwww! Chaptr 5 is huge and long. YOur good. It must be long huh? I think you should add Hiei having sex with Kurama, anywhere that Kiyoshi kid can't see. Love your story, update soon TAtsuki and MItSUki.
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Reviewed By: ki ko ki ri no YO! On: February 05, 2005 22:32 CST
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Wolly Wow. Big chap you have. Love your story all the way. It so sweet that me and my mother read your fanfic. Me and she like your story, it such a heart warming. She said your very talented. Updated the next chapter, so me and my mom could read it.
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Reviewed By: kokoki it me On: February 05, 2005 22:29 CST
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Wow alot seem to like your story. I amazed by your hard work. Please update nex chap.
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Reviewed By: ROXUY On: February 05, 2005 22:27 CST
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Wow wow wow! I say this story of your is the best I have ever read. Perhap you should add Hiei in the next chap having sex with Kurama. After all aren't their husband and wife? Anyways, I wish you the best of luck.
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Reviewed By: Kusiekuro mine On: February 05, 2005 22:24 CST
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Ohhhhhhhhh. I love it, I love it. especialy the chapter 5. How sweet I alway want Kurama to be a mother. Please update what happen next in the story. I'm a big fan of Hiei Jaganshi, please. Please update. And include Hiei.
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Reviewed By: SOS On: February 05, 2005 22:21 CST
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Love it, what a cute story. Why is kurama a she again? I thought she was a he in Yu Yu Hakusho. Well please tell me wat happen next. Gotta update...Update...Gotta update the next chapter. $.$ So please up date?
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Reviewed By: ka On: February 05, 2005 22:17 CST
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Lovely poem such a lovely poem from Edgar Poe. He that poor man right and that dying lover of his. Up date the next chaptor. I really like to know what happen next. ^.*
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Reviewed By: shishishokio On: February 05, 2005 22:15 CST
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WOW, chap 5 is so long. Thank you so much for up dating the new chap. I love chapter 5 is so nice. The Raven and Anabel Lee it really great poem. Update the next chapy soon please.
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Reviewed By: Kusiekuro mine On: February 03, 2005 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story, Please Up Date Soon Please? ~"."~ please update soon? prety please
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Reviewed By: kokoki it me On: February 03, 2005 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hey I love the story, thought I'm not to much in YYH and all but just update the next chap. Oh ok I love that little girl. Oh you should add a little brother in so the story could be more exciting. Please?
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Reviewed By: shishishokio On: February 03, 2005 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo yo yo I love love your story babe. I love that little girl. What was that little girl name? Oh it Niichi right? I love that little sweety.
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Reviewed By: ka On: February 03, 2005 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool and lovely. So this girl is Niichi and she from the future? And she child of Kurama and HIei? It alwsome update soon? PPPPPPPPPPppllllllllllleaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeee? please type the next chap soon!
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Reviewed By: ROXUY On: February 03, 2005 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story I love your idea. Your quiet creative in your story Please update the next chap, pretty please? ^.^
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Reviewed By: SOS On: February 03, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey what an alwsome story. I like it very much please update soon. I think Hiei should be short, your idea is great. I always want Kurama to be a dear mother, OHH! Shiori is going to has grandchildren, and Wah. What will happen if she find out about Hiei? abo
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