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| "The Pheonix Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kinsha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 07:21 CST
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still really really good. you might want to try to add something more about the demons that destroyed his planet when you have him describe about his heritage and family and stuff like that. other than that, its reeeeeeeeeeally good.
| Reviewed By: Kinsha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 09:51 CST
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heyy this is an awesom story! and thanks for the review btw, :D lol neway def keep writing so that we can see what happens next! and if you haven't noticed, the only reason sp & Gr are any good in mi stories are because of spell check. hehe but thats beside the point! keep writing, its really good with no holes where misinterpratation *did i spell that right?* can happen
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