| "DOOM Group goes to Highschool!" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 17:22 CDT
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YAY *glomp* YOU'RE BACK YAY omg You brought up the coolest and creepiest questions ever, How the hell DID Dartz have a daughter who's aprox. 8-12 if he's like 21?!?!? and Valon's not the ONLY reason I
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Reviewed By: Dragon_of_1000_Lands [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 11:51 CDT
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Well, that's how they spell it in the show. I think in real life it's Oriekalkos. Anyway... The storyline is great. Of course, it's getting confusing keeping track of who is in what state (dead, soulless, Oklahoma... etc.). Lastly, 2 things. You can put me in (ONLY if you want to), and can you review my Yu-Gi-Oh! fic "Joey's Slumber Party? Well, I'll be looking forward to more chapters. Sorry my review was cut off.
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Reviewed By: Dragon_of_1000_Lands [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great fic so far. (Hey, by the way I just shorten my name to DoL (with that capitalization).) Gotta love the parties. You're not sure how to spell Oriechalcos?
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Title: hehhehehe
Reviewed By: TheeBycth On: May 02, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really funny and good. mmm... *eating cinamon roll* I LOVE VALON!!!!
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Reviewed By: yYenchna On: April 27, 2005 16:08 CDT
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OMI GODDDD!!!!!!!!!!! I was so worried you weren't gonna write it anymore. I'm soooo glad to see a new chappie. Great job! Wow Leviathan actually does exist. lol. Its so cute how you put kyoshi (thinks thats how to spell it???)in it. Guardian Angel is great tooo!!!!!! Must update sooon You must. ~Yenchna ^-^ happy 50 reviews^-^ xoxoxo
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Reviewed By: Darkrose 17 On: April 27, 2005 14:14 CDT
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Me: Squirrels, come on say you're sorry to the frightened authoress. Squirrels: 'grumble' Me: Speak up. Squirrels: 'mumble' Me: SPEAK CLEARLY OR NO MORE ACORN PARTIES WITH THE CHIPMUNKS!! Squirrels: We sowwy autoress. Me: Good squirrelies.
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 07:14 CDT
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Damn it cut off my last one T.T But (CONT FROM LAST POST) I knew I shouldn't have given the alcohol to that kid but NOOOOOOOOOO all my friends said he was just short --; but yeah ^-^ I can't wait for chapter 25 and keep on rockin P.S. YOU'LL NEVER CATCH MEH MUHAHAHAHHHA *runs into wall* owchies o.o
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 07:12 CDT
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lololololololololololololol*breathpantpant*olololol sry I'll stop now. I love Tea's new personality reminds me of myself when I was four *pauses to wipe tear* and OF COURSE Valon's the only reason I read this fic that sexxi beast :) I love your awesome randomness through this thing. Can I agreee with you on the angel fetish cuz that's just creepy/awesome but yeah ^-^ YAY THE KIRBY DANCE
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Reviewed By: Lily (gah...you have GOT to know who I am) On: April 26, 2005 19:20 CDT
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YES! A REVIEW! THANKS GRANNIE! lol. Bandit Keith break dances? Wow...that's a first, lol. And Tea had a new personality! I love it when you do that...that way, I won't go ranting on and on later about how much I hate her. ^_^; Duke's Dartz's new purse. How cute. He even comes with a built in pom pom hair! *puts on corny announcer voice* Ladies and gentlemen, presenting...THE DUKE PURSE! This purse is not your ordinary Gucci or whatever, oh no. This purse has a BUILT-IN POMPOM that serves as a very good handle. Buy one now and you might just get a dice earring too! End of commercial. *types in normal voice (???) again* Hm...i seem a bit hyper again huh? well, update soon!
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 11:51 CST
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YAY You just put in one of my life long dreams (go to a cos-play convention) in your story. I swear your reading my friends and my minds >.> but yeah THANK YOU for bringing bakc Duke *glomps full scale model of Duke* but now who r u gonna leave souless. JUST DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH YUGI JOEY OR VALON cuz I'm learning how to play golf and it's not going so well. I don't wanna hafta use da plushie as a target...... ^__^ But anyway KEEP IT UP YOU STILL ROCK OUT ^_^
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Reviewed By: Darkrose 17 On: March 28, 2005 16:10 CST
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I'm reviewing not for my sake, but for the sake of the squirrels. They say they're sorry for cussing at you but they just don't like yaoi. They also said that they don't know who you are or what the hell you're talking about. (Yes those are their exact words)
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: TheeBycth On: March 28, 2005 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! that was funny. Tea is finally gone! And the blood pressure part. P.S. sugar and caffenie is good
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy (yes, not loggedin) On: March 28, 2005 13:23 CST
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child, Child, CHILD?! CHILD?!! Hmph. I don't think so Grandma. lol. DUKEY'S BACK!!!!! Um..can his soul be taken away again? And then Yugi and comp can be devastated again! WHOOPEE!!!! I had another soda just now...thats why I have all thos exclamation points...
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha *fants from lak of air*
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy (not logged in) On: March 26, 2005 11:16 CST
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YAY! Happy early b-day to you! Hm...you're about...uh....let's see...*counts on fingers* 9 months older than me! In your next chappie, maybe you can write a special b-day party for you, and Tea can have a different peronsality again! Anyways, it's great as always!
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