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Title: 3 Again
Reviewed By: dd1127 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!This story is sooooooooooo funny.As soon as i came home i had to read more!Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: raiia_xx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 16:07 CDT
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Oh geeze. That was hilarious. xD orochimaru and teh kitty... Neji and his eyes... Itachi... xD LMAO!
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Title: AAA!
Reviewed By: theSKiEisFALLING [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 13:24 CDT
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May I mention that i also love the whole bombard-kisame-with-questions, "e-touch-ee", naruto's and gaaras hysterical crayon fit (he turned green!), kankurous brotherly act with the snow, and akatsuki's fury!!!!!! bwah!
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Title: YOSHI!
Reviewed By: theSKiEisFALLING [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TEN TEN TEN TEN TEN!!!! oh. my. gosh. that has got to be the most hilarious thing on earth. This story is soo KAWAII! Things I loved: hinata's obession with spoons, GAARA!, neji-with-a-flashlight-scene, "you look like a plant!", temari's idea of playing house, itachi going nuts, and EVERYTHING ELSE! PLEASE DO UPDATE SOON OR I WILL DIEE! ^_^ you are brilliant please keep it up and make sure to add anko and lee in some more! good job---- ps: I LOVE THIS!!
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Reviewed By: anime_gal1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol update soon and rember if you keep on updating people would reveiw more.
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Title: Chapters 1-12
Reviewed By: uchihagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 09:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is so cute and funny, I like the part where Neji scares Gaara with the flaslight thingy...waita minute if Neji can use the Byakugen as a three year old, can Sasuke use the sharingan as a three year old too?*thinks* anyway...hahaha they turn to cute three year olds...I wonder how Shino looks like. *imagines shino as a three year old* uhhh how cute, anyway keep up the good laughs, uh I mean good work, write more I really wanna know what happens next!!!
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Title: HI!
Reviewed By: RayWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give you ALL TENS! X3 Your story is sooo cute! I really can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 08:20 CST
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This story is BANANAS! I have never laughed so at every chatper of any story I read before. Gaara being afraid of snow is soooooo cute. But I guess that's a given when you come from a desert village I think you should continue to write this story. I don't have any ideas for you yet but if I come up with any I'll email them to you or whatever.
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Reviewed By: demonpyro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For chapter 13 you could make one of the characters nearly drown(preferably Naruto). You could also make one of the babysitters save that character. Hope this help's you.
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Title: Three again
Reviewed By: demonpyro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For chapter 13 you could make one of the characters nearly drown(preferably Naruto). You could also make one of the babysitters save that character. Hope this help's you.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 03:44 CST
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awesome story. wonderfully funny. so what happens now? what about Orochimaru he had a plan right? How are they going to get fixed? Or are they going to age as they are and grow up again? Will they gain their memories? What happens then? What kind of reactions will happen? Why is Sasuke protective and jealous of Naruto and Gaara? They are calling Gaara a monster why Naruto? Isn't Naruto supposed to have the more stronger and terrifying demon? So Many qustions, now use them. lol.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 17:55 CST
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I may not have any idea for the story, But I say No to ending the story, I kinda want to the kids back to their right age. .....Though It look like I am the only reviewer on this site.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:58 CST
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Poor Shikamaru.....*Tried not to laugh* *Read the end...* Hehehe....I hope they get them back in soon...
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:50 CST
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So...they let Itachi go...Cool. *What happen to Atasuki*....HAhahahahha!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:41 CST
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*Laugh at what they did to the Plant man* *Glare evilly at the officials of Konoha* KILL!!!!!! KILL!!! *Watch what Itachi did* GOOD JOB, ITACHI!! THEY NEED TO PAY!!!! Oh great....all of the Atasuki are coming....
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