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| "Anything, Anytime, Anywhere, For You" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] | | Pages (6): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 > » ] | Title: chap 31
Reviewed By: Twitch_6 On: August 08, 2005 03:37 CDT
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no threads missing from this one but it's now 5:30 am an di remembered the forgotten thread from before. in that first chapter when shady came knocwing on the door. you just said it early morning not that it was 4:47 am so when you made a deal about it in the chapter "four fourty seven AM, again" ther wasn't really the connection. MUAW!! i rememebred! damn i'm tired... *yawns* but now i need to make sure raven is ok and figure out how BB is going to get out of this one... you're cliffhangers are great writting tools but ver hazadous to readers that are still up past 5 in the morning.... oh and i must say i loved the irony in end of this chapter! takes out the super heroes no problem and the BUTLER takes them out! Gee HA ha ha ha he he he! oh look and i have space left! woot! go me! it's a SHORTER review... *yawns* i really hope this is resolved to a semi-non cliffe soon... man your story is addictive... *goes to find the coffee before starting the next chapter*
| Title: correction for previous post
Reviewed By: Twitch_6 On: August 08, 2005 02:41 CDT
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so you're the first person i leave a review for on MM.org and i mess up... typical. my previous review was for chapter 30. didn't know they didn't post review by chapter...*pouts* but seeing as i'm leaving a review to fix my previous review i'll leave a breif note on the lost threads i see so far. between the time babs got the titans and robin's attack with glove you gave them only 2, 3 hours at most as she woke them all up at 4:47 am and the sun was just starting to rise when the assassion appeared. seems rather short. also tim drake was watching the monitors so why didn't he see the assassion and warn others if not fight? also the call to the JL. you had clark talk then everyone ran out to see star die then at the conference afterwards you implied they were there and made no further mention of them. then there's the swiped jewellry box. there's other from yesterday too but now i'm tired and the mice have eaten too much of me brain cheese for me to think of it... bleh... so i'm going to do the praise thing now as i didn't have room for it before. the story really rocks and the update rate is awsome!! you've got the dialogue for the titans down so well i can hear their voices instead of my own reading voice. that's hard to do too with fanfics! you know it's a shame you didn't have the right conections. it would be really awsome, well extra so anyway, to watch a titan episode that you wrote for. even if the show is based on a comic your tales of it are cool. and out of room... | Reviewed By: Twitch_6 On: August 08, 2005 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
so after 3 days of obsessing over your story i've made it here at 4 o'clock in the morning. i just read in one of your review replies that you plan to go back and tweak the story for spelling an dgrammer flaws. i think i may be able to make that a whole lot shoter of a process for you. partially because i'm a pack rat, partially because i am forced to use an often unstable dail up service for my net provider and partially because i share these fics with people that don't ahve the net i archive every good fic i come accross chapter by chapter and also in a a whole form. then because i'm a nit pick and because i share most of my archives with other people when i go through and read it on mircosoft word i fix the spelling mistakes i come across and whatever minor grammer problems there are. htough i'm fairly good with spelling i absolutley suck when it comes to puncuation so i haven't bothered with your fic there. though i think you are aware of your obession with the semi-colon as another reviewer has already mentioned it. during my time reading the fic i've noticed that you've dropped a few threads but because it says i have no more characters left when i try to explain that i can't get into it. anyway my point is that if you contact me or i you when the story is finished i can email you the spell checked and minor grammer checked copies. i'm going to go further by posting quick notes on any missing threads in each chapter too so you'll have an easier time finding them. O.F.R
| Reviewed By: Wardishy On: August 07, 2005 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read the whole thing through these last couple of days, and it is AMAZING. Nothing else compares to it. The storyline manages to stay original and interesting, and it is just overall enjoyable to read. I am a huge Slade fan, and I am glad that he has a major role (duh, he's tried to kill the titans at least 5 times). I also want to know if we will see BB's beast form. You know, like if that demon or Blackfire or someone tries to do in Raven (as you said they would), then BB could kick their arse. If I say anymore I'll just be rambling, so all I have left to say is; keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Jimmy the Gothic Egg [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I though I'd give you a review on mediaminer! I love this story. Absolutely amazing. I just thought you should get another good review on this. WRITE MORE DAMMIT!!
| Reviewed By: Poison-Ivy15 On: August 01, 2005 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this story!!! I check here every day to see if you updated and I was sooooo happy when I saw two new chapters for this story. There's never going to be an end for all of Raven's siblings is there? They just keep coming back. I think you should put more fluff between BB/Rae since they are my favorite couple even though I also like the Rob/Star fluff too. I hope you update really soon!
| Title: i like grapes. (charlie and the chocolate factory)
Reviewed By: shiny black boot buckles On: July 31, 2005 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I'm sorry I missed reviewing thine previous chapter but I got my knickers in a bit of a twist with my mums... Long story which I don't believe I should get into right now. ;) On a slightly different note, this chapter was fantastic! Oh my I can't wait until you post the next one - your story has such an incredible plot (well it has had multiple plots, but I've liked them all so far) and, well, they're great. I muchly liked the Starfire/Robin moments, but, of course, I must be the terrible Cy/Jinx/Bee fan that I am and tell you that I can't wait until the fun between the triangle commences. And don't even get me started on BeastBoy/Raven... hahaha! Well I shall be keeping an eye out for thine update, good sir.
| Reviewed By: goddessruling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 23:05 CDT
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NO TITANS IT'S A TRAP! LUKE! IT'S A TRAP!...sorry, had a little Star Wars flash back. ANYWAYS, another great chapter, poor Rose! She didn't want any of that. She shoulda just left him out there...and I TOLD you that he'd survive. Ah, I should be there to help them! "Cyborg- have you seen NO James Bond movies. Anyone you leave to die will survive." Stupid. And I like that they are going back to Tamarian even if the time change kinda startled me. But I would enjoy A BB/Rae moment if you got the time...::whistles:: OH and I signed on to the Nufu board, so come and help campaign for my RP! So I think that I'm done here...no wait, I have to ad my signature complaint...DIE SLADE DIE!
| Title: Ahchoo!
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, that was amazing, just amazing. I love Robin's reaction to when he found out starfire had a daughter in the future. I wonder though, did he relize that it could be his? Your story keeps on getting more and more and more interesting, and now we're back to tamaran, ugh another long journey, but good of course good as always. ""Aww, c'mon Star, cheer up." Terra begged her friend from her bed. "If you really want to see Mary again, you and Robin can borrow my bed for a while.""-written by Golden-sama Ok I was about to die of laughter at Terra's coment. you make seriousness funny me likey alot. *is watching music videos* Ahh forigen, french music video runnnnnn!. I have one question why crab? and why blue crab? and what happend to Jinx? Did she go with Cyborg or go off on her own? And who killed deathstroke? Raven or robin? or both? I know to many questions, but hey a good author always leaves a reader with questions to be kept ocupied with or just to mantain there readers.well I guess that makes you a really really really good writer. Well I need to run around my house now cuz it's 1am where i live and I'm hyper, too much sugar just had to check and finish 10 chapters of another fan fic and yea I'm gonna shut up now, Love yah! :)
| Title: plan....
Reviewed By: the guy over threr On: July 22, 2005 00:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
if i see the word plan in this thing one more time i will hunt u down and gouge out your eyes with a pointy stick..... no i wont ill probaly just be really annoyed
| Reviewed By: goddessruling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 17:39 CDT
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HOORAH! Even though there was little BB/Rae, I AM glad that Slade IS FINALLY DEa..he's not dead is he? He somehow killed all of those stupid spider/ant/creepy things didn't he? AND HE'S STILL FREAKIN ALIVE. Angst! Well besides Slade, all the bad guys are dead. And I think it'd be really cool if Raven's siblings came to help them defeat the dark ones. I liked that fish guy! And that was really cool how Raven killed Slade...hopefully Robin took off the glove quickly though. And I liked Terra's comment at the end...curse you for making me like Terra! Anyways, GREAT chapter, I can't wait for more of this and TYL!!
| Title: next review
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Review for chapter 37: Whoa, that was weird, and man Raven is so curious and rude, well that could become her doom cuz they always say: Curiousity killed the cat. "Starfire blinked. Mary chuckled nervously. Robin looked like he wanted to strangle somebody." -written by Golden-sama Why would he want to strangle someone, doesn't he know it's most likely his, although I can't be sure. Hmmm? And slade in blue I can't picture it, mostly cause I just watch the end pt 1-3 and is a little confused. As usual I like the story/chapter thingy, and hope to find more about whats-her-name, oh mary, or whatever, Starfire's Daughter. well off to, uh read I guess, Love yah :)
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Inuluvsu (not logged on) On: July 21, 2005 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got back from camp, so this review is for your 36th chapter: OMG, why am i saying that? ny who that was such a good chapter. love how you describe everything enall and your plot just keeps going and going like endless thoughts which is something I can't do normally. Yo are a brilliant writer and this story is an amazing work of art. One question, is Cyborg walking around when he's plugged in, in the cave? Or is that just what i thoughT? HMMM? you wrote alot less chapters then I thought u would but I guess it's not the quantanty just how well they're written. hmmm? well off to read chapter #37, Love Yah :)
| Title: ^say that ten times fast^
Reviewed By: shiny black boot buckles On: July 18, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehe. I just found this story a couple hours ago and I figured out who Mary is! She's Mar'i! I figured it out somewhere in the middle of it, and, strangely, it wasn't even when I found out that she was Star's daughter. I don't even know when I did but it was somewhere in the middle.... -grins- But I think that I like the story muchly so I hope that you continue it! T'would be a shame if you left it. I know that you will not, especially after geting as far as you have, but there's always the horrid chance that one will.
| Reviewed By: Primaballerina On: July 12, 2005 14:20 CDT
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Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!write some more.It is really getting good!
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