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"Lonely Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ]
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 Reviewed By: Osiris  On: June 10, 2002 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent work looking forward to the updates on the remaining chapters, as well as new chapters to come. Hope to see updates to some of the other series. (For those of you whom mark Fred down on spelling and grammer try checking it with a UK English dictionary.
 Reviewed By: Rogue1615  On: May 09, 2002 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love it so far. Gives a whole new view on things.

I would of never of expected Nabiki to GO like that. hehehe.

Good luck with the next chapter.

Rogue1615
 Reviewed By: heh  On: April 03, 2002 21:26 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow great job and it took me time to read it too!
i luv long stories....
 Reviewed By: fundide frost phoniex  On: March 30, 2002 22:00 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great story i love ranma-chan stories with ranma gets together with a guy you are a great writer and i am dieing for more on this story keep it up
 Reviewed By: Schobronics  On: March 30, 2002 12:37 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You turned several characters inside out - and explained it in a really believable way. Great!
 Reviewed By: Lord Void  On: March 19, 2002 22:49 CST
Comment/Review:
There are only two problems I have with this fic.
1. Ranma turning into a girl. Something that just does not set right with me.
2. The speech Lum game to Oyuki and Benten sounds much too much like what an abused woman might give to her friends who are trying to help her. Otherwise, this is a great fic.
 Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 14, 2002 05:00 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just love what you have done so far and can't wait to see what happen next though I do wander about the cat people you only mention them once and have seem to have forgoten about them.
 Reviewed By: Zoan  On: March 03, 2002 19:58 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story can't wait for more to come
 Reviewed By: Arete  On: February 20, 2002 18:53 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I mainly started reading this because of the Ranma part of the crossover, but you've intrigued my interest now with your characterization of Ataru to look into Urusei Yatsura. Please, please continue!
 Reviewed By: iWindoze  On: January 10, 2002 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
I *loved it* the only problem that I've got with this guy's stuff is that he comes up with so many great ideas that he's constantly leaving me wanting more!!! At least now that he's on FanFiction.net and this place I'll know where to find updates! The only thing I could say other than that is "When's the next update?"


[PS: The number based rating system, is that
high = "good," or is that low = "Best?"]
 Reviewed By: spaceman  On: January 03, 2002 05:41 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Like Fred Herriot's other works, Fantastic!

May he produce more chapter VERY soon
 Reviewed By: blackedout  On: December 11, 2001 21:52 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story even though a lot of the parts don't make sense unless you have read the senior year.
 Reviewed By: Jaques Rico  On: November 29, 2001 04:41 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Illogical. Often questionable ethics and morales. Moderate level of orginality. High degree of OOCness without good reasons. Ataru looks like a self insertion of the author.

All in all: thumbs down.
 Reviewed By: McHunter [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 23, 2001 13:59 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What can we want more, only that you write more!!!
 Reviewed By: Do u know me?  On: November 22, 2001 10:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good story.. plz comtinue
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