| "Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: May 22, 2005 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great addition to the story, and an interesting food for the thought.
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Reviewed By: mauigirl On: May 22, 2005 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter but kagome and inuyasha kneed to talk about what happened so that they can get togather and be happy. Inuyasha needs to have trouble getting the words out though. Sango and Miroku need to get togathor and have a sweet night of passion. It would be so cute if Rin got a crush on Shippo, cant you just see Rin huging shippo and kissing him on the cheek. :D Oo and did kagome make it rain when she was sad and inuyasha was human? well any way that was a great chapter and to recap Kagome needes to know the truth about Inuyashas fealings, she needed learn how to use her powers, sango and miroku kneed to get down, and Rin should develope a crush on Shippo. Update soon. -The Maui Chick
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 17:54 CDT
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you know something, every chapter is a cliffie in a way, because it's not over so technically it's still a cliffie, just not an evil one. ya, I have too much free time. Update again please. ja ne!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (nsi) On: May 22, 2005 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww that was a fluffy chapter! It would have been cool if Kags was the Shiiri (is that how you spell it??) DOes Kags get to dance for InuYasha?? LOL!! oh, btw, great food for thought. Very true!
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Title: CANT STOP REVIWING
Reviewed By: bakasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!! -bakasgirl
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: bakasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it but the rateing only let me go to 10 T_T crys hevily im bad at spealing too! crys again love from a big fan -bakasgirl
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Title: coolies
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (nsi) On: May 19, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wark! what a chappie! lol, can't wait to find out more about katara. but hold on, if sesshy mates katara, and kagome is katara's niece, and that makes kagome sesshy's "niece", and sesshy and inu are half brothers...Kags has no relation whatsoever to inu, right??
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That food for thought is true and so sad. ^_^ I really like Katara. Good character. The twist was really nice. I hope Kagome gets to meet her father!!! Hope your exams went well. Update soon if you can, but school comes first. Later days!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: May 18, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am lovin u're story! this is great, all though sess didn't say much this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 21:16 CDT
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food for thought, sadly true. but that doesn't mean that you can't kick the hell out of them ^_^ fun chappie and stuff. weeeeeeeee *spins around the room* THUD ow, @.@ having brains doesn't make up for a lack of common sense. ja!
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Reviewed By: mauisarah On: May 18, 2005 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great, I want to know more though. rin is cute and inuyasha will come around. I cant wait for the next chapter. update soon
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Title: 99th review :P
Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: May 18, 2005 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:O Wowo, sort of powerful in the chapter, xpesialy the language, a little stronger than I'm use to reading, 'psecialy toward Kag. Bah, I'm babblin'... Okay, I really like your story, and Havent had a chance to read Titanic, Inuyasha stile.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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walks up handing the director a note, and points to the right, SPELLING 101...and waves as she leaves... Japanese words/phrases: -chan = suffix added to emphasize a close friendship or addressing someone younger -sama = suffix added for added respect or for someone higher than you (roughly translates to "Lord" or "Lady") -san = suffix meaning something along the lines of Mr/Mrs/Miss, also can be added for respect arigato (bb/n) = thanks daijoubu = it's alright / it's okay / I'm okay / I'm alright / etc. -- daijoubu ka = are you alright? (remember, 'ka' is a spoken question mark!) hanyou = half-youkai (see youkai) haori = a short over-kimono jacket thing (Inuyasha's is red… just to give you an idea ;-) ) Hiraikotsu = Sango's trademark giant boomerang made of bone (and it's really heavy AND destructive… Go Sango!) houshi = monk / priest (but monk is a better translation) (Miroku is often addressed as Houshi or Houshi-sama) kami = deity (or deities) / god(s) / supernatural being(s) --kami-sama = a very respectful way of addressing said kami kitsune = fox koishii = a term of endearment (i.e. lover, my love, yada yada yada…); in other words, mushy / fluffy stuff ;-) matte = wait miko = priestess or shrine maiden nani = (slang) what / what is it neko = cat ni-hezumi = cloth made from the fur of a fire-rat demon (referring to Inuyasha's red haori and hakama, serves as rudimentary armor) ningen = human oi = hey okaa-san = mother (respectful way of addressing one's m |
Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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..walks over, slaps the director, turns, grabs a shovel, walks in the direction of Kikyo muttering shit about dead bitchs should stay dead...few seconds later...FWANG!...walks back in wiping her hands off and sighs...OOOK, where was I? Oh, good job, continue. Dont mind me. ^-^
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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