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| "Tanabata Jasmine" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Reviewed By: Lynn10 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 19:08 EDT
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Hey, I think I remember you; you're on fanfiction.net! I've seen you around before, but never had the chance to read that 27-chaptered story! Well, it's finally nice to meet you. You're on so many people's favorite's lists, and now I know why. I think I'll skip ahead a bit and keep reading on the other website because this is such a good story. Excellent story so far! ~*Lynn*~
| Reviewed By: BakaChuuuu~ On: April 06, 2005 17:42 EDT
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*eats the pocky with a smile* Traps, eh? What might you be trying to trap me into doing? >:3 Anyway, YAY! Kenshin's back in the story! XD Ouches. Lotsa ouches. Actually, this is one of my favorite chapters (I'm saying that a lot, aren't I? XD) style-wise. I really like how the first section flows - the reader really gets a sense of confusion, but rather than getting lost by it, it's more of a guided confusion. (If that makes any sense. XD) Hehe, I will continue to bow to your awesome writing skeelz! *bows* ... *grovels* XD Keep up the excellent work, and I'll keep dropping reviews! ^^ (You deserve it muchly, m'dear! *glomps Keej*)
| Reviewed By: BakaChu XD On: April 05, 2005 16:02 EDT
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LoL, new nick name time! XD Aww, I'm glad I can help be of some encouragement here! Don't mind the other MMorgers; like I said, they're REALLY stingy with reviews. One of my stories has a few thousand hits, but less than 50 reviews ^^; so don't let it get you down. *glomp* Hehe. At least it gives me a chance to read through it again, ne? >:3 This'll be helpful for the rewriting process, methinks. Anyway, chapter assessment - I LOVE this chapter SOOO much! It really gives both Yahiko and Kaoru chances to show their strength as fighters, which they don't get to do all that often in the series. You did an excellent job describing the scene; I really had little trouble seeing it in my mind as I read it. ^^ Great work! Keep it up, and can't wait until you post more! >:3 *munches teh pocky* ... *pokepokepoke* XD
| Reviewed By: BakaBokken [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 04:53 EDT
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:3 *munches pocky* ... *pokes for more* XD Yay! I made it on time for this chapter! XD Loved it, as always. Keep up the excellent work - I'd write a longer review, but I'm headed off to bed again (and I'm at home this time XP). At any rate, can't wait until Kenshin shows up again! Nasty cliffie with Yahiko! Hurry, Kaoru-tachi! Go save Yahiko! XD (Hehe, it's fun reading it over again, even though I know what'll happen next! XD) Can't wait for the next chapter! *pounces teh Auntie Keej*
| Reviewed By: BakaBokken (teh unsigned in v.2 =3) On: April 02, 2005 03:35 EST
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*munches pocky* ... *pokes for more* XD Wheee~ I looove this chapter. I think the reason this particular spot sticks out to me is the fact that I find you have Sano incredibly well-characterized, and it really shows! ^^ Bwahaha, then again, it doesn't hurt to see a bit of blood every so often! =3 Hehe, I think I like you reposting the story chapter by chapter here at MMorg - I feel like I'm reading it all over again for the first time and pining at you for updates (like the good ol' days, ne? XD). Can't wait until you post more! (Hopefully I'll be more timely about jumping on the reviews for those than I have been as of late... X3) Anyway, Happy Saturday! I'll ttyl~ *poke* ... JUST KIDDING *glomps teh Auntie Keej*
| Reviewed By: BakaBokken (teh unsigned in =3) On: April 02, 2005 03:27 EST
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>=3 *pokepoke* Of COURSE I'm gonna poke you! When I poke you, you leave pocky! XD *munches on pocky* Anyway, about the chapter. Once again you have me reading through teh story with new excitement, and this chapter definitely helps keep the pace up! ^^ Keep up the excellent work! Sorry I'm not saying much more than that for now (blaaah, I'm reaaaaally sleeeepy _._), so I shall be back on the next chapter to... *poke* you for more pocky! X3 Keep up the great work, Auntie Keej! (*kicks people who are reading and not reviewing* WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE?! XD)
| Reviewed By: Baka's being lazy On: April 02, 2005 03:18 EST
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Gwah! Took me THIS long to get reading again. Blegh. SO! Now that I'm back to haunt you for the next few chapters, you shall encour my critiquitous wrath. (o.O;; Yes, I need sleep. I'm headed to bed as soon as I finish the next few chappehs and get a shower. =3) Actually, I think there's no need to try to apologize over this chapter - it's quite interesting and does keep the plot moving, even if not much action occurs. No worries there at all! ^^ I really like how this chapter reads. Anyway, off to the next chapter before I fall asleep on the keyboard!
| Reviewed By: chelisha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 22:22 EST
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It is well-consturcted.I must say that all of your characters have stayed in their own personal view points, GREAT JOB
| Reviewed By: Chibi Rouyakan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 10:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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| Reviewed By: BakaBokken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 05:06 EST
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Yay! I've caught up on my regular TJ readings here at MMorg! >:3 You outdo yourself every chapter, you really do. XD Senzo's an ass. That's all there is to it. *glares daggers at 'im* Anyway, keep up the excellent work, can't wait until you post more, yada yada yada... XD Even if not many people are reviewing, I'll be sure to drop SOMEthing at every chapter. I love this story enough that I'll promote it all over the place! >:3 *enjoys adding numbers to the review count* XD Hehe. Keep it UP! *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* (Just for old time's sake. And for ZZ's, 'cuz she's not here at MMorg. Yet. Bwahahaha.)
| Reviewed By: BakaBokken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 04:56 EST
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*picks up pocky and snacks on it* >:3 Thankies! Bwhaahaha. *bounces off the walls from a sugar high* XD At any rate, this chapter was also excellent. The action is quite good, though a few sections could probably use some tightening. We shall work on it when you've had a crack at it. ^^ Hehe, anyway, keep up the great work! I'm falling in love with this story ALL over again now that I'm rereading it for the umpteenth time. ^^ Now I'm off to pick up the last chapter before I fall asleep on the keyboard. X3
| Reviewed By: BakaBokken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 04:48 EST
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AUNTIE KEEEEEE~J! XD THIS chapter is EXCELLENT every time I read it. XD Poor Kenshin, what we evil fangirls put him through... but you're doing a wonderful job nonetheless! >:3 The description in this chapter is amazing, and the suspense is marvelous. Great work, as usual! *pounce* I still have 2-3 more chapters to catch up on my reviews for tonight, so be prepared to have your e-mail inbox poked at a few times! BWahahahahaha. ^^
| Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: March 20, 2005 06:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! I kope you can update soon. BakaBokken Is right people are stingy with their reviews. Everybodt get off you butts and review for this story! Anywho please update ASAP
| Reviewed By: Baka's in a hurry On: March 18, 2005 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love this story. I think this was the chapter that immediately told me that this would become one of my favorite RK stories out there (and I was right! >:3). Excellent suspense, great plot twists, and of course it's only just begun! I can't wait until you post more! ^^ (And now, I shall do what I've been threatening to do all along... Bwahahaha.) Have a great weekend, and I'll drop more reviews when I get back! ^^ ~BB
| Reviewed By: BakaBokken (teh unsigned in =3) On: March 18, 2005 05:17 EST
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WHEEE~! I loved this chapter - the suspense building up is beautiful, and I can't wait until you post more. Until then... >:3 I shall be patient, yessss, precious. XD Next chapter. Yes I will. :3 Anyway! *munches pocky* I told you people here are stingy with reviews. Don't be discouraged - your HUMONGOUS number of reviews over at FFnet should let you know how much you are teh
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