| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] |
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Title: loves!!
Reviewed By: Arienishiii On: September 18, 2008 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looovveeddd this chapter!! ive been waiting for so loooong for you to update!!!! I almost died when it left off with Kagome in the hospital!!! can't wait to see what happens when the meet!! +)
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 19:50 EDT
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please update soon
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Reviewed By: Adorkablebanana (not logged in) On: September 16, 2008 00:53 EDT
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Girl, you know how to do it. Only you. Like always, I love it. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 18:28 EDT
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omg! I've been waiting for years for an update!! I re-read the whole story to get back into all the feelings! It's amazing still! But what a delightfuly evil place to leave it hanging! Please (no rush) but UPDATE soon! It's my all time FAV story! I even wanna finish my own now in like some sort of tribute! Ha ha keep it up! ^^ ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 02:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Drools...drools some more...and a little more. i cantbelieve you finally updated this!!!!! I AM SO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!JOYJOYJOYJOYJOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! Bouncy bouncy bouncy!!!!!!!! Yipppeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!! I'd give you a higher rating, but they don't have one!
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Title: Incredible
Reviewed By: WhiteDemoness11 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 00:11 EDT
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You do realize that this was entirely worth the wait. Depressing, dark, smoldering in it's tension...fantastic. Kagome at her very weakest and worst is perceived still as a danger now, her holy powers quite interesting and I do adore how despite the horrors she has been through, she seeks Hiei out. It however, I doubt will be a 'perfect' reunion. One how will Hiei react to her carrying his child? Two how will he react to her after all this time period, since she hasn't changed. And finally? Youko does so love mischief and seeing how he views Hiei's attachment as a hindrance would he be trying to break them up, seducing Kagome, or even killing her to prevent the said attachment? All wonderful things to ponder.
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Reviewed By: yanagi4387 On: September 11, 2008 23:43 EDT
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OMFG!!!! I cant even tell you how happy i am to read this!! By the way the first time you bring sota in you say milk instead of years...i think. Poor kagome. i've been waiting for this update FOREVER!!! lol. It brought tears to my eyes this is my absolute favorite story Lol I'd like to print it and put it in a folder. So i could read it other times. I love this story so much! In the earlier chapters when kagome was being tortured it made me so sad and i cried at times...i've almost become attached to this story and i never gave up hope that you'd update it sometime soon. The cahpter was great! not as long as i would have liked it but it was definattly good enough for me. I hope you keep up with the awesome work and continue this story! Good luck! (^-^)b
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 23:02 EDT
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Glad to see that you updated again. It's been long enough that when I saw the name I actually had to stop and think about what the story was about lol. Hopefully you will update soon and not keep all your readers waiting. :p
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Reviewed By: SFP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Ryukotsusei, I absolutely love this story and I am ecstatic that you have updated it. I think I have read most of your works more then once, though I have to say, this is one of my favorites. The detail and emotion you have placed in this story is truly remarkable. It is a pleasure to read your work and even if you do not update this story in the next year (or more), it will still be one of my favorites, along with many of your other stories. You are such a fabulous author, you actually inspire people to write there own stories in hopes that the will be as great as you someday. Thank you for taking time out of your life to entertain us. ~SFP~
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 20:17 EDT
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This was awesome as usual! I loved it! I wonder hwo everyone is going to prove themselves? Souta, his innocence. Kurama, his unwillingness to hurt her. Hiei, his reason for being late. And Kagome, all the unbelievable things that she went through, her actions, her pregnancy. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Lover's Betrayal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! How will Kagome act around Hiei and will Youko tell his human counterpart what the hell has happened?! Update when you can. If I may, how many more chapters are you planning on writing for this story?
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Reviewed By: Ice vixen x On: June 23, 2008 09:15 EDT
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You know it's been exactly 2 years tothe day since you added to this story and for some reason i still check it... Are you not going to finish it or what? With all the othe work you did i think you can finish this one if you put aside half your writing time for this story. Alot of people would be very happy to see it going again and you've already wrote so much. To not finish it is almost a crime. PLease give your reviewers something... anything... -_-,
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Reviewed By: reviewer0001 On: April 27, 2008 02:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you are such an amazing writer! please continue!
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 14:26 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20March0 8/Angst3rd2.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
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Title: On the Night of a Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Scarlet Butterfly On: March 26, 2008 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this is an awesome fic. I mean wow. Very detailed and full of intense emotion, I applaude you at being able to harness those in your story. A lot of it even had me wincing more than once. I've read this before some time ago but didn't realize you had updated so I re-read it all and had to skip most of the scene when Kouga gets front row seat. Ouch! Stupid Kouga, should've gone and got help. I cried too. Haha. Just out of curiousity though...are you adding more to this or is there a sequal? I hope so, leaving off where it is right now would just be too cruel. The suspense is killing me. Also I'm curious if the baby miraculously survived. Suspense! Also curious as to how Kagome handles life afterwards and being around people. What momma's reaction is when she seeing her current condition and finds out what all happened. I gave you a 10 on everything because I felt this fic deserved it. The writing was excellent, very much what I think it would be like in an actual book. Didn't really see any grammar mistakes but I was so into it that I may have just completely missed it. Very creative. I really don't think anything needs to be said about this part. You gave enough info that our own minds could see pretty clearly what happens yet left out enough so it wouldn't be a problem. I don't know about anyone else but I enjoyed reading this a lot. Shows how cruel one could be and the unlikely allies in others. Action, romance, horror, drama, suspense, etc. All my favs, what more could you ask for. Overall....well 10 was the highest I could go but it's actually higher. I hope you add more, good luck if you do and I look forward to it.
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