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 Reviewed By: melady101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 17, 2005 17:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL XD Now THAT was some good quality humor right there. It does kinda seem like D.G. is the root of the problem when you're lookin from their POV. Azural is so sweet. Wonder is anyone else in gonna show up in Neotopia? 9.9 Can't wait for your next update FeatherDragon, keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: melady101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2005 21:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG IT'S SO KAWAII!!! X3 and didn't EagleEye end up destroying those two anyway? I think you should just do DG. Much easier to read and write. I like how you had them play keep away with the crystal ^^ So that's why EagleEye is keeping the trio around. So what next? I must know! Is EagleEye gonna turn Zapper and the others into demons like he did with the zakos? Or, now that he knows about the spirit, he'll send someone to retrieve it or he'll go there and try to destroy Skylar. You always leave so many possiblities that I can't predict what's going to happen. That means your're really good. Hope you update again soon.
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 22, 2005 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
You had more spelling errors this time. I'm still waiting for some more plot change. Even though I'm not a big Zero/OC fan, it does make the plot slightly more different from copying SDG so... v.v; lol, yes, it does help to try to sleep at 1 am ^^; later
 Reviewed By: Melady101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 22, 2005 09:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah! Two demons survived...wait, now Eagle Eye will destroy them cause they lost. That was funny when the demons got scared away by the fake spirit ^^ So now that the demons have been defeted once again, Fluer is better I wonder what's going to happen? A full scale invasion? Chapter focused in on Zero's feelings for Fluer? What? >_< Please update soon so we can read more.
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 19, 2005 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mmm, nice fight, although I DIDN'T like all that reference to the one-on-one of BakuvsAshu. =/ So Fluer okay right? Still hoping for more angst. Solid writing style. Update sometime soon v.v (Oooo... Mod. That's bad O.o wonder why they said that for THIS fic? Sure, it's probably very true for MY fics... ^^; but I'm still waiting for a warning first. We're not really using this as a board when we refer to the other authors... right?)
 Title: sorry I'm late
Reviewed By: melady101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 16, 2005 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey. Finally read the 11th chapter. I LOVED IT!!!It was the best one yet. Keep going Feather Dragon and update again soon please.
 Title: ....
Reviewed By: melady101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 29, 2005 13:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey. Sry it took so long for me to get here. My computer is broken again so now I have to do this at school. Even though I enjoy action it's nice do read a chapter like this one every now and then. I thought it was really funny how Fluer told the zakos to get lost and they actually listened to her lol. Still I can't wait for the next chapter so update soon please. PS: Thanks for reviewing my fic.
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2005 17:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
ack! review messed up, I said this----- x.x Anyway, still, see what I said with all my other reviews. aww, darn, I think you should make them all almost die and have Fluer save them *evil grin* hey, it would show girl power, lol!! sorry,lol , ignore me, I'm a bit too sadistic ^.^;
 Title: sorry I haven't been on in a while, school and comp screwing up life x_x
Reviewed By: RW [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2005 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
sorry I wasn't able to review the last few times, everytime I clicked the review button my comp would freeze x.x Anyway, still, see what I said with all my other reviews ) lol, ignore me, I'm a bit too sadistic ^^; Yes, only a bit. See my review on april 9th, coz my opinion hasn't changed within the last 9 chapters... T.T; Which basically means this will bore me soon if there's no change. x.x I know you're trying, in fact I'm not entirely sure you would be writing if I didn't tell you to write your own fic instead of bugging me ^^;;;; which I'm still sorry for. I hate writer's block. okay, enough from me- update soon (with changes please) v.v;
 Reviewed By: Melady101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 20, 2005 06:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
That's awesome. Those black metak beasts are so cool. I wonder what the gundams would do if the went against a dragon......oh well. Once again great job. It's getting better and better. I wonder what the demons are going to do now that Demon General an all three DA commanders have gone on their indivigual missions. Suspense is a killer I tell you, but it's my best friend. Keeps a story interesting. Update again soon anyway and I'll continue to read it any way I can.
 Reviewed By: Melady101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 18, 2005 20:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome! I loved it. A human demon hu. That's cool. Very original. I absolut love your writeing style. Did I miss anything? Nope I think that's it. Update again soon k. I can't wait
 Reviewed By: Melady101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2005 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm in a hurry, but took time from my scheduale to read this. I think this is turning out really good. I think you should have the trio temperaraly turned into demons so they can see what it's like. Or you could just do whatever...^^' Update again soon and if anyone else reads this I'd like to say that I've been working as hard as I can to fix my computer. Also I think I'll be taking down my current story.
 Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2005 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice I like it! ^_^ I agree with RW totally. This is a really good fic! Keep writing. BTW sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. I tried before but my computer wouldn't let me for it own pleasure -.-+++
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2005 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very well done, I'm liking this but I wish there was more plot change then this. Maybe I'm just being impatient, but I'm pretty sure all that's changed is a new land, new ally and new foes. Hey, bright side, you portray the character's very accurately, which is something I always keep an eye out for! ^.^ Update soon!
 Title: x_x sorry it's taken me a while to read...
Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2005 13:20 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
sorry it has taken me a while to get online...x_x I had to fix my internet three times then the phone line mysteriously dies on Monday afternon. x.x so yeah. anyway, great start! ^.^; this reminds me too much of Lacroa though. and I'm disappointed Baku and Zero are completely out of the picture. Oh, I thought of something funny when Fluer told Captaina dn Guneagle to stop shooting-- "Hey, guys-GUYS!!" "Sorry...we haven't had anyone to shoot at in over a year..." lol, update soon please! ^.^
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