| "Demon Nightmare" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Melady101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 20:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome! I loved it. A human demon hu. That's cool. Very original. I absolut love your writeing style. Did I miss anything? Nope I think that's it. Update again soon k. I can't wait
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Reviewed By: Melady101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in a hurry, but took time from my scheduale to read this. I think this is turning out really good. I think you should have the trio temperaraly turned into demons so they can see what it's like. Or you could just do whatever...^^' Update again soon and if anyone else reads this I'd like to say that I've been working as hard as I can to fix my computer. Also I think I'll be taking down my current story.
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice I like it! ^_^ I agree with RW totally. This is a really good fic! Keep writing. BTW sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. I tried before but my computer wouldn't let me for it own pleasure -.-+++
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done, I'm liking this but I wish there was more plot change then this. Maybe I'm just being impatient, but I'm pretty sure all that's changed is a new land, new ally and new foes. Hey, bright side, you portray the character's very accurately, which is something I always keep an eye out for! ^.^ Update soon!
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Title: x_x sorry it's taken me a while to read...
Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry it has taken me a while to get online...x_x I had to fix my internet three times then the phone line mysteriously dies on Monday afternon. x.x so yeah. anyway, great start! ^.^; this reminds me too much of Lacroa though. and I'm disappointed Baku and Zero are completely out of the picture. Oh, I thought of something funny when Fluer told Captaina dn Guneagle to stop shooting-- "Hey, guys-GUYS!!" "Sorry...we haven't had anyone to shoot at in over a year..." lol, update soon please! ^.^
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