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| Reviewed By: Cheshire Gray  On: March 28, 2005 14:31 PST Rating(s):
 Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
 -Very- good writing. And you kept them both in character, too! (Even better.)
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| Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 28, 2005 13:01 PST Comment/Review:
 This was really good. I hope you write more! Thanks!
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| Title: Crimsondemon Reviewed By: MonkandMiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 28, 2005 12:07 PST
 Comment/Review:
 Hee, first review. Once again, you manage to make my jaw drop with your fantastic writing. ^__^ Really enjoyed this one, esp. the way you portrayed Inuyasha. Not to mention the fact that the lemon was yummy. :D Great job!
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