| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 00:25 CDT
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That would be the ultimate bad karma day. though, 11 o clock is still technically the same day, so things weren't that bad. Cakes are interesting things. Sometimes they look great, sometimes they just don't. in theory, if Gin left windows open, couldn't she have pulled a window entry? i know people who have lived in big cities, and they have done it. (using fire escapes) Great chapter. Finally on to the first names. its a good first step.
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Reviewed By: Wolf's Rain Kagome On: May 03, 2005 23:51 CDT
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I am in love with Gin already. I do have one question about her though: How exactly would you pronounce her name? Gin with a 'J' sound or Gin with a 'G' sound? Or something completely different? I hope that makes sense....anyways, I would just like to know for my own picky reasons. ;) ^.^ Great chapter, I can't wait for another update on P3 or P4... keep up the great work! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 23:49 CDT
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I was surprised Inuyasha didn't sent Gin and Cain. I was expecting him to come out and do some Tetsusaiga shoving.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 03, 2005 23:18 CDT
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I'm amazed you're able to keep several high quality stories progressing at the same time. I am in awe. Thanks for another great chapter. Somehow you always manage to draw me into your stories and keep me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: PrncessS (not logged in) On: May 03, 2005 23:18 CDT
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Aww, so cute! ^_^ Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, who won't get yelled at by MM again because I'm adding all this junk... On: May 03, 2005 23:12 CDT
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Oh, YAY. ^____^ I think I may like Cain and Gin more than Nezumi. They're both just so adorable.
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Title: It's all about those puppy-ears...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 21:56 CDT
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...topping off an enticing and entrancing female hanyou called Gin. Even Cain is not immune to her charms. She so takes after her mother, innocently winsome and openly affectionate. Her generous nature just might be the balm for Cain's lonliness. Now if we can just keep him from fretting about how 'young' she is. I've come to believe, that once you are an adult, you are one. It removes you from the 'adolescent' and 'teenager' bracket. A young adult has hopefully been guided and educated well enough to make wise descisions for themselves (I've seen too many 'adults' that will never be more than overgrown children through their own stubborness) the only thing they lack is actual experience. Even if Cain cannot or will not allow himself to have feelings for another (heaven forbid!) maybe he could at least let himself have a friend. That's safe...isn't it? *smirking wink*
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Reviewed By: hanyouwings21 On: May 03, 2005 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...wow...you never cease to amaze me. The finite details that create the characters, the raw emotion emitted from each of them, and the illusion of the story, if not for the presence of typed words, would be tangible and in every sense real. I have read a lot of fanfics... probably way too many to be perfectly honest... but I recognize extraordinary talent when I see it. You are one of the most gifted writers I have ever come across, and like I have said, I have come across a lot. The very fact that I am reviewing says something, because I never review unless I am thoroughly impressed. I have read all your stories (luckily I don't have a life, so I've had time to do this ^_^), and I check my email every day to see if you have updated Purity 3 or Purity 4. Your stories have a sense of realism that most authors strive but never achieve. For heaven's sake, I have bawled my eyes out on more than one occasion, and had that nervous churning of worry in the pit of my stomach for the outcome of some of the characters in every one of your fics! You are flat out amazing, end of story! I want to thankyou for posting your stories and allowing us to read and enjoy them. Furthermore, if any pompous asshole decides to flame you or give any discredit whatsoever,give me their email address ...Ja ne!!! ~laurabeth a.k.a. hanyouwings21
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles girlishly*
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: May 03, 2005 19:45 CDT
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Oh how lovely this is! I find myself falling in love with these new characters. I just cannot seen to get passed the fact that I love the name, "Cain." hehehehe. Verrry interesting developments we have going on here. I was half expecting Inuyasha to be in his forest and to catch her out with this other male. Oh poor Gin, I have the feeling that something of this magnitude just might happen in the future, haha. Fabulous chapter, I love what you are doing with this story, and, as always, I cannot wait for more! Ou, and that engery thing that Cain did. Very neat-o, haha.
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Reviewed By: Kesstral (notsignedin) On: May 03, 2005 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, and having your prof invite you for a jog in the middle of the night isn't unusual at all! Lol, it was nice though. Aww.. he's just perfect, having an energy form and living right next door! Well.. for rescuing her that is. It really does suck to lock yourself out, although for me it was having my parents turn on the alarm when i didn't have a key (old fashioned alarm) and the alarm going off and be freaking out really really badly. Oh, and how long can Cain leave America? Since he is the tai-youkai there, doesn't he have some responsibilities? I'm assuming that he'll need to return eventually... omigosh does that mean that Gin would LEAVE! Haha, imagining the freak out inuyasha would have at that concept. Not only would his precious baby girl be getting married (taking a rather un-risky chance here) but she'd be thousands of miles away! Hmm.. sensing conflict here. Muaha.
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Sue. This was a great post. I love this story. I was waiting for a Gin story. And as a comment on this chapter, poor Gin! What a way to start the day. Cracking the cute guy in the jaw with your head. Ouch! Oh, on a side note, how exactly do you pronounce "Gin"? Gin like "gin and tonic" or with the hard 'g' like in the Japanese? Just curious. My brain tries to divide English and Japanese pronunciation. Just a random thought.
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Reviewed By: Kittycat78 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 18:34 CDT
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Wow your story is really good. In fact all of the Purity fics are good. S keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished the most recent chapters. Gin's little "boo-boos" and Kich's mental conversation with his youkai were very funny. I'm definitely enjoying this one, Sue. :D
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 22:35 CDT
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Very interesting chapter. I loved Cain's interpretation of Gin's artwork. I completely agree. :o) Oh and Ryo's youki? HILARIOUS!!! I love his swear word! Oh Balls! LOL
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