| "Seto's Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Title: Sonja,Jake and Midori chat
Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Sonja): Please add more!!! (Jake): Yeah, the unknown past of one of the smartest of the cast is very intriguing!!! (Midori):*heart eyes and drolls* (Sonja): ever since she read your story, Midori has been heavily crushing on him. (Jake): could you put some spaces please? It's getting kinda hard to read...
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh! I'm loving this! Please update! I want to see more of this!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Sorry I couldn't review earlier. It's been really crazy around here and I can't read or review from work anymore. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 14:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't write a really long review today cause we gotta go in a few minutes, but this was a really good chapter. I can't wait to see if Kaiba whoops Noah in a duel or not...I hope he does! Well I g2g fast, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 13:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
*applause* awesome chapter ^^ i can't wait till next monday :D
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unbelievable! Great storytelling!!! One question though, was that his real surname or did you just make that up? Anyway, I'm hungry for more so update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
FREAKIN AWESOME! sorry i didn't review last week, cuz it took me a long time to re-read the revised version. anyways, this is really great! i love it! ha, joey and kaiba best friends. amusing.
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL! this is a new chapter that I like! I love it so much! PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job. Poor Mokuba he doesn't have a clue. Of course, neither does Seto. Great job!! Update soon.
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 06:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. Seto needs to be careful poor Mokie. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 12:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool chapter - i can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Update soon. I am waiting for the next chapter! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon please - i wanna see what happens when/if kaiba gets to see his parents!!!
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like how you capture the nice, gentle side of Kaiba (towards mokuba only, of course :P) :). and, you also get the insulting and/or sometimes-violent side too lol. anyways, i can't wait to see what happens! and i like how you gave the two "mysterious egyptians" (can you tell i forgot the names? lmao) a slight comediac (if that's a word lmao) edge, so they're not like all serious and crap. anyways, update soon please! i love this story!
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