| "Teaching Goku" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story had me captivated from beginning to end (not story, chapter lol). The lust is just...it's there! Oh man and the sounds in my mind from how Gojyo described either Hakkai's or Sanzo's moans (he couldn't tell) just heightened the story. Ah~ and when Gojyo found Goku's sweet spot. -happy sigh- you just make me very very happy. Can't wait tillt he next chappy. ^^
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just realized that I've never reviewed this. I love this fic. I normally prefer the pairings to be swapped, but this is *good*. I love the tension that you keep cranking up. Definately one of the most well written and original Saiyuki stories on the 'Net. I would love to see Sanzo and Gojyo fight over Goku.
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I missed your updates, but I see them now and I am mightily pleased. -pleasant sigh- These two chapters were beyond awesome for me.Seriously, I can just see the emotions playing across Gojyo's and Goku's faces. You write it so vividly! Especially when you describe Goku's eyes...it's just beautiful. Their love making is anything but quick and cliche. A rare feat indeed. Also when Sanzo said "I wasn't kissing you" that cracked me up so badly. XD I get what he was saying, but at the time I just imagined him as some guy in *serious* denial...with drug problems or something.lol In any case, both chapters were awesome and I look forward to your next one. ^^ (Ah and in response to the chapter before this, yes I posted a Duo x Une gundam wing fic a while back and just recently started a Duo x Zechs fic, so you might've seen my name there ^^; or if you like jrock, then I'm in that community as well.lol)
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol indeed, that'd be a game worthy of playing. Once again I loved this chapter. Goyjo...he's the ultimate lover. I love how you made him so tender with Goku,a nd how you make him soften a random points. It's so sweet to watch, and I can really appreciate your writing style. Do more ne. ^^
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i've just started reading the manga and enjoy the characters very much. This story is well written. you really keep them in character. i'm interested in what's going to happen to everyone. there's so many different ways you can take this now thanks to that kiss between Gojyo and Hakkai (i hope i spelled it write). i'll try and wait patiently for the update. ^_^!
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Reviewed By: EriK aka Poe On: July 13, 2005 18:24 CDT
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Damn; that was hot and worth any wait. *chuckle* You are definitely capable of making Goku into lust material, despite any childish personality that he possesses. I will attempt to (patiently) wait for the next chapter. *grin*
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you updated! This chapter was really touching, and if I haven't said it, I love how you characterized everyone. It's also so fictionally realistic. Please keep writing! And thanks for telling me about the ff.net story. ^^
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Devil_n_Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 15:41 CDT
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You updated. Yay it was really good. Now you know what you should do and that's update, update, update and... you get the point ^^;
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Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*~*Calm side*`* That was so good. I is..... I can't say anything. I was so good that I was speechless. I like... LOVE it!!!!! I'm thinking about reading it about three more times till you write the next chapter!!! *~*Hentai side*~* Man I read it so fast it was like I was craving it!!! I can not wait till the next one!!! That's all I have to say!!! I will be wait for the next email!!! I NEED TO PRINT THIS STORY OUT AND READ IT OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND...... well you get the drift!!! Continue to write!!! ~MangaChild420
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Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 16:08 CDT
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This is a really interesting story and I can't wait to read more. Do keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: EriK aka Poe On: July 04, 2005 02:07 CDT
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I'm really enjoying this tale; which is odd, only for the fact that I (normally) don't enjoy yaoi with Goku in them. Are you planning on writing more, soon? I ask, because it's been awhile since you last wrote a chapter and I'm beginning to become impatient. *laugh* I'd hate to make a bother of myself, by leaving reviews every day, harassing you to write more on this tale. *wink*
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Title: TOO GOOD
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AS USUAL THIS STORY IS STILL ONE OF TEH BEST I HAVE READ. MY HENTAI MIND HAS KICKED IN AND ALL I'M THINKING ABOUT IS A ORGY WITH GOKU/GOJYO/HAKKAI/SANZO I CAN'T HELP IT!!! PLEASE PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER SO I THESE NASTY , BUT PLEASURABLE, IMAGES WILL SUBSIDE AND MY CALM SIDE OF MY MIND WILL KICK IN. CONTINUE PLEASE I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY!!!!! YOU WILL HEAR MORE OF ME!!! ~MANGACHILD420 PS: YOU CAN GIVE ME A HINT JUST EMAIL ME I WON'T TELL A SOUL!!!! LOL!!! I'M JUST KIDDING!!!!
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Reviewed By: wda_yagi-san [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
W00t! I love this fic! Your writing is really awesome. All of the characters are almost exactally in-character, and the story itself is just amazing. I'm really bad at reviews, but... yeah! Awesome fic! Evil sorta'-cliff hanger, but that just makes me want to read the next part even more! So... yeah. Again, I love your fic! XD
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Title: Yaoi is ok wif me!
Reviewed By: coffeebeanchild On: June 11, 2005 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! THis fanfic is really cul! At first I saw the yaoi warning and i was like NOT ANOTHER ONE! But I'm not against gays and a little voice in my head said if you're not against gays then what have you got against yaoi fanfics! Cool or what eh? Anyway you've really set this out really gud (reads story agen and nods at all da slushy parts!) unfortunately there is only a ten rating on mediaminer cause it's definately much higher in my opinion! Hope u update soon! One thing mention Hakai and Sanzo a bit more I know this story is based on Gojyo and Goku but it would be nice if we could see the whole party together saying that still have the little ahem private times (god that sounds so perverted! :P) with gojyo and Goku!!! ANd maybe throw in a chapter where Hakkai and Sanzo talk about what's going on and what they think also brng up the issue of Hakkai kissing Gojyo....THAT'LL BRING SUM REAAAAL CONFLICT!!!! Bye and plez update soon also email me wen you have im at Highoncaffiene@hotmail.com K bye!
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 18:28 CDT
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Awesome, hot, interesting, and I'm out of adjectives. Talk about stopping when hot and bothered! But still, it was so cute, and seeing those two as close to gushy as they can get is adorable! Please try to update relatively soon.
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