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Title: Aunicornunderneath@yahoo.com or Freeandwildspirit@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Christal Proveaux On: May 15, 2005 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still loving it!! Please do NOT quit writing it!! I will beg on my knees!! What happens next? Poor Gojyo, and I hope Hakkai doesn't punish himself too badly, it wasn't his fault! Luv ya! ^-^ Ciao!!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interested in reading?! Please, please don't leave us here. This is a wonderful, powerful story that deserves to be savored. I've just caught up on your last several chapters, and am absolutely delighted. So appropos to have Gojyo a fire elemental. The attempts of Sanzo and Goku to help, and their sympathy for their friend's plight was both stirring and heartbreaking. That is was finally Kou. who is finally able to help was delightful. Gojyo's desire to protect all but himself, wonderful. What more can I say? I know all of your faithful readers are anxious for your return, and the completion of this story -- as well as many, many more.
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Title: Don't know a title
Reviewed By: Evangelina On: May 12, 2005 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nuuu...don't stop! I'm reading it and always wait anxiously for the next chapter...I love it! -hugs the fic- pretty pretty fic...And I always imagined Gojyo as a fire angel...so it's kinda cool that that thought has come true...so yeah...I'll stop acting weird now..-waves- Ja ne Evan -some chick you don't know-
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Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 10:26 CDT
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What do you mean no one's reading? I'm reading! Just look at the hits, people are definately reading. Just because a lot of people are annoying and read without reviewing doesn't mean no one at all is reading ;) And who cares, anyway? What matters is that you're having fun writing it. (And I'll always have fun reading ;) ) I love the touching brother moments with Jien and Gojyo... more of those, please!
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 01:46 CDT
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Gojyo wanted so much to pet the bunny. "Forgive me, little one. I didn't mean to hurt you." For some reason, I found this to be the most touching line I've read in any story.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: May 11, 2005 23:57 CDT
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What the HELL are you talking about, not reading the latest chapters?!?! I wait with baited breath for your fics and updates! Well...okay, so I don't review ...ever. But that doesn't mean no one's reading. I really enjoy your fics quite a bit. So do please continue this when you have the time. I'm finding it immeasurably interesting and I really wanna know what's gunna happen and if there might be more pairings afoot.
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Reviewed By: Kiba-chan not logged in On: May 08, 2005 18:46 CDT
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Well, I just saw that you added all those new chapters! I haven't read them yet, but I will. I don't have time right now, but expect your reviews when I do have the extra time tonight. It seems you've got Chapter Twelve uploaded as a prologue though, just thought I'd point that out.
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Reviewed By: Smily On: May 05, 2005 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic! You should update soon!
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Title: Great Story!!!!!
Reviewed By: Barcsay On: May 04, 2005 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a great story!!!! I love how you've written Gojyo!!! I just read ALL this story today, and I really really love it!! I hope Hakkai and Gojyo make up again. Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens, or happened, i guess. Please please update soon!!!
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Title: Another review...
Reviewed By: jeda2 On: May 04, 2005 05:51 CDT
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Eeek! Sanzo not wearing underneath 'there'!!! Such a 'disturbing' mental image. (Naughty, you!) Shame on Sanzo! Anyway, I was just enjoying the fic with no intention of doing much reviewing but something in your authors note made me write this. Somebody calls you bad name? Guys…whoever reads this…pls bear in mind fan fic writers & readers does not belong to each other & neither owed anybody anything. Nobody forced readers to read & neither writers be forced to write. To say thank you to readers is good, to motivate writers is great but that's it. To say out of jest is okay, to call somebody a name belongs to an animal is downright wrong. Okay, that's that. Anyway I love your story, pls do upload soon.
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Title: Tainted Love
Reviewed By: Aunicornunderneath On: May 03, 2005 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't let other's bring you down, they have no talent if they are trying to dictate yours!!! I LOVE IT!!! I cannot wait for the ending, poor Gojyo!! You are doing fantasic, and anyone who says differently are idiots anyways!!! Ciao!!
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Title: Not constructive anything, but...
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: May 02, 2005 20:03 CDT
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You're so cool. Okay, that's all ^_^ Yay!
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Reviewed By: Kiba-chan not logged in On: May 02, 2005 19:21 CDT
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You wrote an author's note! *proud* Don't worry about typos or anything, I just caught one thing...*The half-breed's head fell back as he screamed in agony. Tear-filled crimson eyes gazed into horrified violet and crimson orbs.* I think you want 'golden orbs' if you're talking about Goku. Anyway, another awesome chapter :)Ignore those people that give you thier bullshit, they really aren't worthy to critique in the first place. Even though I know what's going to happen, you're still holding me in suspense. Geez. Don't worry about not updating very often, you have a career. ;) I have occasional college classes that I usually don't go to, and a job I can't be fired from because I'm the only one who'll do it. Plus I'm a complete insomniac. That's why I update so often. :P I'm crying for Gojyo... Poor kappa. I know it's not going to happen, and I'm not telling you to make it happen, but you can't stop me from fantasizing about some Sanzo x Gojyo on the side. ;)
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 20:33 CDT
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That was an evil, evil, evil cliffhanger. Well done, just insanely evil of you. ::chuckles:: Nice descriptive piece with Sanzo and Goku scaling the house. Also liked the observation by Sanzo about Gojy and how he probably was as a child dealing with his stepmother's abuse. All in all, an enjoyable chapter.
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Reviewed By: xeriah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 00:59 CDT
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This story rocks so much. And if it weren't 2 am I'd be singing even more praises to you about how much I think it rocks. There's something to be said about abused Gojyo and dark Hakkai. Those little comfort scenes b/n Gojyo and Sanzo are also quite nice. Yeah, I'm really anxiously waiting for more. Kick ass story telling skills.
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