| "What A Girl Needs" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 02:39 EDT
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I wanted to comment on your logic train in Kag''s speech in chapter one.. Um that was though out and practly flawless. the part about Inu being alone in hell as kag has kiki's soul was great.. Never saw that comming.. Never saw such a long train of logic like that eather.. But even for it's size if was simply followed.. Job well done.
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Reviewed By: Catalina27 On: September 13, 2005 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. Wonderful drama and great portrayel of Kagome and INuyasha's relationship. I've never seen a story that felt so much like 'the real story'. Your characters are great. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 00:05 EDT
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Yay! An update!!! Finally!!! It's going good, huzzah! Well, anyways so far so good. Keep updating (or update when you can). It is a good story. ^_^
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Title: WOOT! WOOT! WOOT! WOOT! WOOT!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: September 12, 2005 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've waited forever for this & you did not disappoint. I love it. It was everything a return should be!! Congrats on your grandbaby & i hope all is well at home. I'm counting the days until the next update...yep. It's just that damn good. Congrats for the recognition too. It's well deserved!
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Title: I love your story
Reviewed By: hi On: August 28, 2005 05:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please continue. I love your story! its fantastic and i want to know what will happen next. thank you for writing it, i greatly enjoy it.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: AnaMarie On: August 28, 2005 04:02 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. Keep it up. Not many fics I actually care enough to keep track of. I have to say this is one of them. UPDATE soon please.
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Reviewed By: HANYOULOVER On: August 24, 2005 01:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the story so far and it's interesting... please update soon. ASAP
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: August 11, 2005 21:22 EDT
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ahh Shessy is evil isn't he? Or at least manipulative. *has sudden immage of Yuka* Well... ok no school girl uniform for Shessy, and sure he was doing it for his own reasons and such.. but it's still kinda funny. I really liked the scenes in Kag's time. How she interacts with her friends, Yuka's secret, and how she feels a separation from her family and her old life. Souta was really cute too! (In a -I'm a teenager now- sort of way.) Oh and yeah um.. nice lime. Loved the argument afterwards too! I was going to berate you (well not berate but umm.. say random frustrated/angry things) for killing a major character and not even showing it, but now I see why you did. I wonder how long Shessy has been guarding their camp? That explains why he was there too. I really have enjoyed your story so far. You give the characters a reason behind their actions instead of just using their presence to further the story. And the characters have changed/developed and yet stayed true to form. (Wonder how the next couple of manga chapters will change the Inu/Sessy realtionship? Or at least Inu's views on it.) Looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: August 11, 2005 19:13 EDT
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Well... I'm sorry I insulted you earlier with my Ch 1 review and called you a Kikyou basher who didn't understand her character/motivations. I still think Kags was being a little too dense and Sango a little too girly, but I'll have to re-read it while NOT thinking 'aww shucks I was really looking forward to some good In Char action/angst' Anyway... yeah you hit (my view at least) of Kikyou's character right on the mark. More or less anyway. The idea that she is tainted by evil but tries to control it makes sence. I like it :) I also liked Inu's reactions to her. He did love her. And I'd respect him a lot less if he didn't still care for her. He's a loyal little puppy after all. I was wondering where you were going with the sexy outfit at first. I thought for sure there would be some Inu peeping, but this is MUCH better. Well on to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: August 11, 2005 17:13 EDT
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welp. I changed my mind about deciding not to read your story. Angst is so much fun to read, even if it could use a bit more of a foundation. I really liked the 2nd half of Ch 1 (especially Inu's reactions to Kag's comments) and the Inu angst in Ch 2. What is Sessy plotting? And what is with everybody spying on them on THAT night? Surprised Naraku wasn't hiding in the ashes of his baboon pelt. Maybe if you focus on them drifting appart over the last few months and maybe having Inu being driven to 'settle things' with Kikyou it'll make the first half of the chapter a bit more solid and a little less like Kikyou bashing (and it will make the angst be more based on mixed signals than simple Kagome stupidity). anyway.. loving the angst!
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: August 11, 2005 16:18 EDT
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Well I started reading your story because I loved several of your stories in your favorites, but I just could not get into this one. Your writing style is good, but well... for one Sango seemed a little OOC. Maybe it was because she was talking too much, or maybe it just felt like what she was saying was a little too- frivolous. Just repeating what Kagome said or bringing up a very weak argument. Sango and Kags do a lot of girl talk, but I can't really picture the conversation being like that at all. I'd think Sango would want to hear all of what Kags is thinking and then say a *few* words of comfort. By this point in the main story it is obvious that Kikyou is just trying to accomplish revenge in her own way- i.e. give Naraku the jewel and send the both of them to hell. I'd think that after four years the Inu-tachi would know this. They might not agree with it, but they wouldn't say she was sided with Naraku. And the whole attempting to kill Kagome thing was so far in the past (4 years in your story) that it seems like a really weak argument unless she tried to do it multiple times. Anyway the basis of your story could be interesting, but you need to give it more of a foundation. Maybe you could make up some things that happen between Inu and Kik to make it (at least seem like) they are getting closer.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: YoukaiMusashi (too lazy to sign in) On: July 05, 2005 14:06 EDT
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Girl I absolutely love this fic! I won't yell at you to update soon cause I hate it when people do that to me! But let me just say that your style of writing is wonderful and deep and I can't wait to read more of this fic. Also, I'm nominating you for Best Drama for the Inuyasha FF Guild Awards, and I just wanted you to know that cause I've been nominated before by people who never left me reviews, and being a review whore, I was totally confused. So 1) Awesome fic! I bow to thee! 2) Consider yourself nominated :) You definetely deserve it!
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Reviewed By: Jo On: July 03, 2005 15:30 EDT
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Hey, great chapter. Kagome is indeed very insecure abt Inuyasha's feelings of her. Mostly Inuyasha's fault isn't it, sometimes I would like to 'Osuwari' him myself when I watch the anime. Hope they will finally be together in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kyou_kun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really like this story!! Please update!!! I must read more!!! I also like how all your chapters are quite lengthy!!! You're a great writer plz update soon
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Title: the whole story
Reviewed By: Crimson warrior On: June 29, 2005 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have made a very good story but DAME STOP MAKEING KAGOME SO DENSE THAT SHE CAN'T SEE INUYASHA LOVES HER GOD!
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