| "Higurashi, Inc." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: rachainu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 17:39 CDT
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I loved the chapter and I didn't really think that the characters were out of control at all! I had a good laugh when Miroku met Sango! Flames...I hate them...I've not particularly really ever gotten a flame before, just rude suggestions, like somebody saying that maybe the reason people don't review the story is because it's boring in the first couple of chapters and is a turn off for readers...Actually, I might not have gotten a lot of reviews, but I got plenty of reads, and that told me that those readers must not have thought anything to be wrong with the story. Another reviewer told me that it needed more romance...but I didn't think it did...Anyway, your story is really original, I must say! I thought it was great! Please update soon! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 16:16 CDT
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really good chapter! can't wait for the next!
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Reviewed By: RaptorChicky On: May 22, 2005 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do enjoy this story--the original concept that you presented in the summary hooked me right away and I'm glad that I read it and am waiting for more! One problem though... Could you PLEASE break up the paragraphs and dialouge? Its rather hard to read when everything just runs together and creates this big huge blob of letters that fill up the monitor. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: fox-chan On: May 21, 2005 15:14 CDT
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it's really good so far. it's really original.
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Reviewed By: Davi Man On: May 17, 2005 07:40 CDT
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So far so good, and it's orginal but it looks like you formating is a bit off (mm.org's falt). So just fix that up and it should be fine (I already read this on AFF and the formating was good there).
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Reviewed By: neko_fangirl On: May 16, 2005 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
gentle review comming your way: overall...i loved it! your story is very original by my knowladge. i can understand how you dont want flames as its your first fic. i have yet to put mine out because i dont think any of them are good enough. well good luck!
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