| "Don't know what you've got 'til it's gone" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 16:22 PDT
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i love it is there more or was that it? i loved your story!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 14:16 PDT
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Wow! That was fast! I'm glad you updated and let us read the whole chapter 17. Was it my shameless begging on ff.net? Heheh... Thanks again and I hope to read the next chapter soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 26, 2005 12:06 PDT
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Very good story so far. Please update soon. Thanks!
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: sexy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 11:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome story and i must say, ive never heard of the mating ritual preformed like that, most are a bite on the nape of the neck of the pulse or just by intercourse...... how did u come up with it??? anyway....... very good story, i rate it 11 out of 10~!!~ ^.^ please update soon!!!! thank you for your time, luv ya lots, ~Tora-chan RAWER!!!!!!!!!! NYA!!!!!!!!! (get it, cause tora means tiger and nya means meow!!! =^.^= ) ja ne
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 20:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! Awesome story! Great writing and awesome detail! You have great talent! Update soon!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: May 24, 2005 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: Kick ass
Reviewed By: Ownage On: May 22, 2005 09:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so good please make a lemon.
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Title: awwww.....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 12:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww... keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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