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| "Hiei's Other Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm interesting please updaet soon.
| Title: Parings
Reviewed By: fireshadowfox On: October 21, 2006 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the pairings should be Hiei/Sango Yoko/Kagome/Kurama Fluff-butt/oc shippo/rin (come on you got to love that pairing!)Yuske/oc3 kuwabara/oc2 (He needs someone!)I think fluffy-sama should be with this caractor. Oc1- Name: sasori Age:459 (fluffy is 5??.)Hight:3in. under sessy.Gender:girl DUH! Speice: Cat demon. Hair:Lavender/blue eyes:gold/red markings:4 strips on L cheek 2 on R. Past: Abandoned by family, strong fighter, toke over central lands, knows alcamist,lightning demon. Oc2: Name: airrin, Hair, orange, eyes, green Spieces: human with high ,spiritual power/baka potentual, clueless.Past lives with sister, who is alcamist. Oc3:Name:Aden, Eyes:change with mood. spices:half demon,works for oc1 who is like koenma, wepons:spirt blades(like ed's from FMA, alcamy,hand-to-hand.,atitude, meet sango when they were little and was traind with her to be a tanjiya. Family:Airrin.
| Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 04:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Yusuke/Keiko Kurama/Kagome/Youko Kuwabara/Yukina Hiei/Sango Koenma/Botan Sesshoumaru/Rin Miroku/Shizuru Oh yeah miss one. Kouga/Ayame Kuwabara's Sister name is Shizuru. Yukina is Hiei's Twin Sister. Oh and is Inu dead?
| Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 04:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Yusuke/Keiko Kurama/Kagome/Youko Kuwabara/Yukina Hiei/Sango Koenma/Botan Sesshoumaru/Rin Miroku/Shizuru Kuwabara's Sister name is Shizuru. Yukina is Hiei's Twin Sister.
| Reviewed By: stix On: August 31, 2005 20:37 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon. VOTING- BOTON- Koenma, RIN- Shippo, YUKINA- Kuwabara, SANGO- Hiei, KAGOME- Kurama, SESSHO-MARU- Shiziru, KOENMA- Boton, YUSUKE- Keiko.
| Reviewed By: matzes1 On: July 08, 2005 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!!! Hiei is related to Yusuke, great idea. MORE CHAPTERS, PLEASE!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 04:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh by the way Kagome/Kurama Sango/Fluffy(cant spell his name)Hiei/boton koenma/yukina.If kur/kago don't work than koga/kagome(other wise Me!!!J/K)XDtee heehee Love ya's,Shyzona
| Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE(no logd in) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 03:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep it up.Got a good plot there.would hav had gome fightin another demon and her dad take shippo away from her.and the chappies be a little longer.but other than that nothin else to fix.toatally cool.love it update soon please!?!?
| Title: Dude
Reviewed By: ShihanKitsune On: June 27, 2005 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay i definitly like kurama/kagome and hiei/sango the others i don care. by the way this is awsom. if kurama/kagome don work than you can add bankotsu or hiten into da stori. the explinashin for the title is dude dis is awsom. SORRY FOR MY BAD SPELLING! i would be a member but i CAN'T!!!! man it sucks to be underage.T_T
| Reviewed By: Tsuki-tora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I vote....... youko/kagome/kurama yusuke/keiko koga/botan (just read FEMALE INUYASHA's review...) shizuru/sesshoumaru kuwabara/(um..... get back on that....^_^*) hiei/sango miroku/yukina (um..... last minute idea.... was thinking botan though....) Just PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update ASAP and make it a Youko/Kagome/Kurama(Suichi)!!!!^_^ PS: Love the story! ^_~ ~Tsuki-tora
| Title: votes
Reviewed By: Chi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 01:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn I can't decide who to vote for Kagome, but, since its a crossover I would have to say Kurama... Yus-Keiko, Sango-Hiei, Miroku-Yukina, (Hiei's not going to like that one, Sesshomaru-Shiziru (sp? Kuwabara's sister), Kouga-Ayame. The story is rather cute and I'm hoping you continue it hopefully including why was Shippo in the clutches of his grandfather.
| Title: Pairing
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 23:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I would like an H/K pairing if you will please, their my faverite...woooooooooo!...sry...Well, your story is really good and you should keep wrighting it...please don't abonden it....pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzz!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Hiei's Other Sister
Reviewed By: Sakura411 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that the pairings should be: YUSUKE/KEIKO KURAMA/KAGOME HIEI/SANGO SESHOMARU/RIN KOENMA/SHIZURU YUKINA/KOUGA BOTON/MIROKU I can't think of one for Kuwabara though. Anyways your story is great so far. Hope you finish the next chapter soon. Ja-Ne!
| Title: My character for Kurama
Reviewed By: PrincessRock323 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please pair her with Kurama-chan. Name: Koryoko Callisto Kanashi Hair: Chestnut Brown, waist length with blond bangs that are chin length. Eye Color:Midnight Blue With Ice Blue Pupils Weapons: Martial Arts(Ninjitsu), klimors(two short swords), bow and arrows, and throwing daggers. Clothes: A one sleeved shirt that cuts above her bellybutton. It is all Sakura pink and the color fades to white at the bottom of the sleeve (which is 1/2 foot longer than her arm.) Her pants are tight on the hips and baggy everywhere else. They are low rise and are dark sakura pink. Her shoes are white sneakers and she drew on them with pink sharpie. Additional Info: She likes sitting under sakura trees and eating pomegranate. Her mother was Greek and Japanese, her father was American and German. She speaks all those languages. She spent 4 years wandering, she almost drowned, died by starvation, and died by blood loss. She is generally nice, but don't piss her off at all. She knows Youko, they were theiving partners and she was in love with him and hoped he'd never forget her. She is a kitsune, with seven tails. All the color of her hair with different colored tips. Blue, red, green, white, yellow, purple, and, black. One for each element. Water, fire, earth, light, air, phsyc, and shadow.
| Reviewed By: Soul_Maidens_Rock [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HieiRin YusukeSango KuramaKagome ShessoumaruYukina KuwabaraNo one KoenmaBotan MirokuKeiko(can't keep her hands off the perverts...) That's all I can think of. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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