| "A Changed Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] |
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Reviewed By: xFluffiesGirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story can't wait til u update^-^ Love the plot, poor kagome glad hiei there to cheer her up. ~Fluffy~
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Reviewed By: xmarix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* Another wonderful chapter. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update very soon I like this story even though its dark.
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 14:12 CDT
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oh you must write more!!!!!!!!!! it is sooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz upgrade soon! *spechless* it was sooooooooo awsome
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Title: my god!
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dear god its been a long time since i've read a story this good, it almost brought me to tears, and thats a very difficult feat in itself. please update soon, i can't wait to see what will happen next, and i wonder who Kagome will end up with...keep up the good work, seriously, this is an awesome story
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 08:47 CDT
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Hazah! Excellent chapter, really loved it. Please check out my story and I hope for more soon.
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Title: Review Chapter Eleven
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. I like it. Thank you for a new chapter. Wonderfully written and artfully constructed, as always. The only thing I'm not too sure about is if Kagome should be acting so "normal" as to take a bathe. On that note, many rape victims wash furiously, even to the point that they bleed, because they "feel dirty" If Kagome breaks down in the bath and starts to do that, then Hiei could "reach out" and mentally comfort her or someting. Anyway, I really like the story, I really like the chapter. So please continue and update as soon as you can! ... ... ... Thank you so much, >>>Kin-chan Pandun
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLeae update very soon.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 19:24 CDT
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WOW what a great cahpter i love it and i cant wait to see what Hiei tell Kag and what Kag will do so update it really soon please thanks tootles.
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Reviewed By: Demon Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should have Kagome turn Inuyasha over to Sesshoumaru, he is head of the family after all. Having his help with Naraku and becoming friends with Kagome are also good ideas to ponder over.Update really really soon!!!!! I love Hiei/Kag!!!
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Reviewed By: xmarix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 18:36 CDT
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VERY nice chappie! ^^ Update soon please! Does Kouga appear in this story? That'd make a nice twist... Kouga VS Hiei VS Kurama... or among those lines somewhere, I guess. XD
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 03:55 CDT
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*starry eyes* you must contine...............speachless
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Title: Kin-chan Pandun (who can't sign ing, for some weird reason)
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, I have to say that I loved this chapter immensely.I think that you could take the opportunity offered by Kagome's healing process, and use that to draw her closer to Hiei, emotionally. You could have her not want to be seperated from him, because she associates him with safety, and because he has been healing her mind (in the process, their souls/minds/whatever have had continual intimate (though not necessarily romantic) contact). I'm also wondering if Sango and Miroku will visit Inuyasha before his judgement day. Thank you for the wonderful chapter, and please continue writing.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 21:18 CDT
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P.S. I agree with Drachegirl14. Have that happen, Sango kills him because she can't do it. Like Fear for him now...*nudges author*...huh huh?
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 21:04 CDT
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WOOO! new chappie...its great... But if I where ango I would like to do something else besides drive Hiriekotsu through his skull...That bastard, I never really wqas one to like InuYasha. I don't know why...oh well...update soon! Keep up the Great work. I never did read a stroy where he did that so that was a shock...*smooch* till the next chapter...c ya!
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