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Reviewed By: Chezzu On: June 05, 2005 11:47 CDT
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OMG ANG SAKIT NUN!!! ;~; Update, update! Poor Miyu! ♥ T_T; Oh well. :3 !! Great chapter. Too short, but wtf, great all the same. :D
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Reviewed By: emZi On: June 05, 2005 07:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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nothing much in this chap but i like the way u used the word aggressive at the last sentence.. twahaha! i can guess it's christine! twahahaha!!! very intriguing.. i wonder what she will do.. by the way.. u dun have to thank me for ur review.. every writer is deserving to get one.. continue
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Title: Pretty Interesting
Reviewed By: MoonCresent On: June 05, 2005 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this story is good!! Dude, you've got to update soon. You're one of my favorite authors. Well, CONTINUE, K?
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Title: Oh!!!!!
Reviewed By: blazedEX On: June 04, 2005 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pls update!!!!!!! I'm longing to find out who that aggressive person is!!!!
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Title: Cute
Reviewed By: aimz On: June 03, 2005 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha,,, Ang cute ng story... kakakilig kay kanata and miyu... LoL..... so sweet... hehe... nkakabitin nga lng.. anyway.... nagenjoy ako sa binasa ko.. super tlga... belive me,... hahah.... astig.... trip na trip ko...
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Reviewed By: ichigo kai On: June 02, 2005 09:59 CDT
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TY Momo.. OMG! Wha's happening to me?! Bangag ako... Nangolekta ba nmn ng 30 fanlists eh... -_-
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Reviewed By: Chezzu On: June 02, 2005 09:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Be careful of your capitalization, punctuation and grammar. :) Heheh. Selos ba si Kanata? XDDDD
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Reviewed By: ichigo kai On: June 02, 2005 06:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi BlazedEX!!! Thanks so much for the ratings! Oh, yes I will! SORRY to leave yew guys hanging! Please check back soon! Sorry coz I've been busy Lately! But Thanks so much! ^_^
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Title: PLS FINISH IT!
Reviewed By: blazedEX On: June 02, 2005 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice! I hope you'll finish it soon....I'll check on it again!^_^
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Reviewed By: ichigo kai On: June 01, 2005 09:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks very much. Will check... Gomen, but I usually write during night time-wee hours... So... But thats no excuse.. Thanks again
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Reviewed By: emZi On: June 01, 2005 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
i just noticed.. the characters always start the chapter with dinner, snack or in general eating time. Explore more. i know u can think of a better setup. you have all my support!
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Reviewed By: emZi On: June 01, 2005 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey you might wanna change these errs: flied to flew.. me either to me neither.. it's important that you check you grammar and spelling. it's a big factor but nonetheless the start is very entertaining.. keep it up
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Title: yEr siSteR dEarEz
Reviewed By: kiTara08 On: May 31, 2005 05:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
aYus!! di q nMaN bNasa e!! jOke!!^_^ ipgPa2Loi mO!!wAhaHa..=p
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Reviewed By: ichigo kai On: May 30, 2005 09:33 CDT
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Hahaha! Momo-sama! Lol! I will... May plot na kooo!
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Reviewed By: Chezzu On: May 29, 2005 11:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Baka, CONTINUE. You left me hanging there. -___-
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