| "Wings of a Tenshi" Reviews/Comments [ 104 ] |
| Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] |
Reviewed By: what about hitler On: August 18, 2007 03:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
JUst because hitler killed jew does not mean you can just say he did back then everyone hated them the why the made their own county because everyone therw them out of there so juat stfu about hitler he was not the only one who thought it was right to kill jews I bet that everyone has done or said something wrong about jews just look at stailian he killed 12million yet you dont talk about him well this is a lesson to all you stero types
|
Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 15:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
HEY GO READ IT FANFICTION.NET!! IT'S THE SAME STUFF, I CAN'T FIX IT ON MEDIAMINER.ORG!! I'VE ALREADY TRIED I'M SORRY!!
|
Reviewed By: I'm leaving if you don't fix it! On: July 26, 2007 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
please fix the probalem with your chapters otherwise i'm not going to read your story anymore which will truly kil me. L8rs
|
Reviewed By: AGAIN! NO!NO!NO!NO! HELP!HELP!HELP! On: July 26, 2007 15:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
you did the same thing on chapter 18 please fix it plese please please plese ... oh jezze you get the idea. L8rs
|
Reviewed By: NO! NO! NO! NO! HELP! HELP !HELP!!!!!!!!! On: July 26, 2007 15:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
there's somethign wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 seriously. At the bottom of chapter 16 it ends in But- nothing else!!!! and in the next chapter aeverytihng is differenT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please please please fix it!!!!!!! I need to know what happened becuase sessho's acting all weird and Supposedly Tachi and Kaminari kissed adn sessho hurt rin and why isn't kago at the tournament with kane? swomething is seriously messed up!!!!!! please please please fix it!!!!! I need to know what happened and I'm freaking out right now!!!!!!! see how many exclamation points I'm using? Seeee!? please please please please please please please please please please please please fix it!!!!!!!!! oh!!!! I think I know what made sessho change but please fix it anyway!!!!! thnxs Please Fix Soon!!!! *runs off crying in tears sobbing hysterically following author around till they fix it!!!!!!!!!*
|
Reviewed By: I agree....totally! On: July 25, 2007 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read chpater 13 and i don't think you need to change Sesshomaru's character at all because. he's still pretty cold, but if he didn't open up to kagome there wouldn't be any romance between them and that's kinda what the story's mostly about and I agree you should ask for a certain number of reviews other wise you'll never know whether or not someone likes you story. cause people sometimes visit stories and don't read them so it's nice to know who reads your stories and who doesn't. Plus I think it's fun to get flames. My one friend draws pics all the time and she says she absolutely hates it when people complement her on them. She says she would rather have people telling her whats wrong so she can fix it in new pics then tell her what good that she already knows what to do. I should go and finish reading so keep on writing and don't worry about not getting many reviews, they'll come eventually. L8RS
|
Reviewed By: 1.2.3. ohhh On: July 25, 2007 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
1. No you are not. I dont know how to spell it but I know you rt spelling it right. 2. It is spelled TOKIJIN. 3. and three yes it was somewhat funny.
|
Reviewed By: HElp! On: July 24, 2007 16:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
question? What is the title of the song in chapter 6 when Kagome's on teh balcony and who plays it? cause I woulfd really appreciate knowing. thnxs.
|
Reviewed By: Rairi On: July 18, 2007 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's REALLY good! What attracts me most in lemons is the way people uses their language and you did it really well! You were able to create the scene into this really sexy mood and well, I gotta it, your lemon was awesome! And if that was your first then...wow! ^^ Note for improvement...I think when you wrote "organism" you meant "orgasm" right? lol
|
Reviewed By: hime kagome 28 On: June 09, 2007 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i have read all 19 chapters please update soon on chapter20!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
|
Reviewed By: Hime Kagome 28 On: June 08, 2007 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please try to update more often i know you have a life but its such a awesome story i really love it if you can update every week . if you dont how are we supposed to survive without it ??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: dark_angel_of_death9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love love love love love this story! it totally rocks! if you dont keep writing this i will hunt you down and tickle you to death! Mwwah :) lol i like this alot :)(:
|
Reviewed By: squeefan On: June 07, 2007 13:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
woohoo! an update! when is the next one? lol
|
Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 17:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: squeefan On: June 06, 2007 14:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love this story! hurry up and write more!
|
| Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] |
