| "All Death's Children" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 21:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very cool . . . Oh, durn, the fic's almost over! |
Reviewed By: Ryu no Shi On: July 04, 2002 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there really anything to say? (Besides, of course, the fact that this is a great fan fic.)
^-^ Can't wait to find out what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Johny_lee On: July 01, 2002 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best darn fic I ever laid eyes on! Keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, now that Vega's got some body, what about poor Hotaru? And she's going to attack Ham? Man, that's COOL! |
Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, man, that was great! Especialy Vega going all balistic to save Hotaru. Still, what are his feelings toward her? Man . . . oh. . . man. And thank you for the kind words, my friend! |
Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2002 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nate, come on, I'm like suffering here! This is just getting cooler and more twisted! It's great! |
Reviewed By: Dark Merlin On: May 14, 2002 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing. I really look forward to the next chapters. Please put them up soon. |
Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2002 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The one problem is those Bliping &duqo things in place of quotations or punctuation marks! Uggggg! Still, Hotaru's got a crush on Vega, doesn't she? Can't wait for the next part. |
Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2002 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nate, excellent as always . . . And I figured that it was Death. :) Now, what's up with the code things? |
Reviewed By: lady_of_light On: March 31, 2002 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of Writing:
I gave that a 9 since it was pretty cool, and the first chapter was great, but in some of the things in the other chapters, it could've had more description.
Spelling and Grammar:
I give that an 8 since there was a few grammar and spelling errors, but it happens to everyone.
Originality/Creativity:
I give that an 8. The idea of mixing different anime together is great, but it started to get a little confusing.
Enjoyment Factor:
Nothing wrong with that! It's really fun, put more action into it though!
Overall Rating:
The fic was great, I would've made it perfect if it had more action! You captured everyone's attitude perfectly! The fanfic was awesome! |
Reviewed By: Zowe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2002 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a little confused by what's going on with death, but whatever it is it seems intersting. Overall, I like it so far. |
Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 21:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, this is amusing, but your AOL is causing you problems again! Who is that chick, or I'm just going to wait. |
Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2001 16:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Uh...Duo isn't Hotaru's brother. The word was "bother" as in a pest or an annoying person. Not brother. Sorry for any confusion. |
Reviewed By: Moonlight Eevee On: December 24, 2001 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated originality/creativity 6 'cause i don't get how dou is horato's brother... i mean horato has a dad, dou doesn't. so how did they become brother and sister? did horato's dad (that evil professor) adopt dou or something??? and i don't get how vega got to the gundam people. i mean... he died didn't he??? or is it a pretend??? i just don't get this ficcy... but the first part was good, but the second was WAY too confusing. |
Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2001 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, Nate, I've think you've outdone yourself this time . . . |
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