| "Life's Prison: A Thief's Goal" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel (notsignedin) On: June 29, 2005 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey awsome story!!!!! you have to update soon because i really want to know what happens next. I think it would be funny to see how he acts in her village. I like what your doing with the story tho. also just a little advice try using a different word other then said. you tend to overuse it a little. but other that that you have a wonderfull story!!!! update soon k? ~Tori Chan~
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 14:56 CDT
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so interesting please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 13:34 CDT
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This is getting very interesting. As always, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 21:07 CDT
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oh, wonderful! This is grand, I believe that this is one of the best stories I have read! update soon, when you can. ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done please update soon thank you.
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Reviewed By: Hiya!!! On: June 10, 2005 11:35 CDT
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I realy realy realy love the story. It's sooo original. I can't wait to see what will happen next. =D YAY!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: PrincessRock323(not logged in) On: June 10, 2005 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. This ficcy is awesomeness.
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 07:12 CDT
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Ths is really great. your style of writing is excellent, and the story moves along quite well. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Just so you know... On: June 10, 2005 03:48 CDT
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Haven't read the fic yet, but thief is spelled T-H-I-E-F, not T-H-E-I-F, as in your title.
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Title: LALA
Reviewed By: BBBBLLLLHHH On: June 03, 2005 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update your story soon.
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Reviewed By: kitroku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this fic is amazing. It's very original. I've never seen a Kagome Kuronue pairing before or one with the same idea for the jewel and Kagome. I can't wait to read more.
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Title: Highly original
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: May 31, 2005 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..this has got to be one of the most original pairings I've ever come across. I adore any and all alternate/crossover pairings, and I'm eager to read more of this brilliant concept. You're very adept at creating a solid plot and atmosphere. I think a pairing this unusual will only flourish with your capable writing. I can't wait to read more, and I'm anxious to see how long you plan to give Kagome and Kuronue before he meets his untimely fate. Great beginning, please keep it up!
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Title: LALALALA
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE
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