| "Desideratum" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 16:38 PDT
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Now, I would say that it's Sesshomaru, but he's not hanyou, unless it's a spell/concealment to make him appear to be hanyou. Hmm...I went from tears to possibilities, you're such a great author!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 11:00 PDT
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so Sesshomaru thinks your insane...>.> :D i agree with InuYasha, he was just grumpy that he hadn't been mentioned yet. :D he's there now though, and with a hanyou no doubt.. hmm who could that be >.> awsome sad yet sweet chapter. poor Kagome and InuYasha. i'm glad you like happy ending or i'd be more worried about this story. :D update soon as you want. ja ne, Zirra
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Title: Oh goody, goody, goody, goody, goody...ad infinitum
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 09:24 PDT
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Yay! New chappie! *does happy dance* Oh, the angst...we're gonna need hip-waders for this story. It was tempered with InuYasha's irritablity and inner thoughts. I love how his mind works, so entertaining. 'Tutor? Education? School and tests?!? KEH! Hells NO!' And now there's a strange Hanyou running around? Can't wait to see who it is. *^-^*
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Reviewed By: IckyVickiPaceR On: July 15, 2005 08:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite an amazing story. I feel foolish trying to compliment you when you so obviously have more than enough compliments flying at you all the time. I really hope you update soon! I think I have a little bit of an idea what might happen next, but I am certainly no expert. Keep up the good work. God bless! .::Vicki::.
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Title: awww...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 02:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's so sad i can't wate to find out what happens next keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: July 14, 2005 22:23 PDT
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this is what i get for writing at 1:30 am. sorry...in my last review, i mean it just can't be good considering (that kag is in the past.) but as i know you have strongly stated in all of your previous fan fictoins that you are a woman of canon pairings (which are all of the best anyway) soooo....let see whats goin on! :-)
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: July 14, 2005 22:21 PDT
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so, lots to report about the chapter. lets start with the fact that you made me cry. damnit. She would remember his name. She would remember that she loved him. Would he remember her? that was rough. i mean, i cry at movies but never reading and well...now i have. damnit!! very well done and written. each section had its own humor and angst and as always so well done. as for our mystery contestant...well...I'm baffled. normally i'm on key adn of course, my first thought was Sesshiles...but it can't be, specially being hanyou. sooo...sesshiles son? but...that would mean that fluffy would have mated human (and that just can't be bad considering...). eep? very interesting!!!! i love this story and am glad that you are writing it! keep it up!!!!
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: July 14, 2005 21:30 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Great new chapter I can't wait to see who this new charater is and to find out what happens next. Oh but I hope Inu-yasha and Kagome get reunited soon I hate see them apart. Hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so unbelieveable!!! I don't know how you do it but my face is still soaking with tears after reading that...I'm not saying it's bad either....I LOVE IT!!!! Your the best writer that I've read so far....what can I say it's breaking my heart....how are you going to change inu and kagome's fates this time??
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: July 14, 2005 20:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh nooooo! Another cliffhanger! There you go again, exercising my overtaxed brain cells. Mysterious hanyou, Kouga with a surprise entrance, pining InuYasha, a stressing Kagome, a worried Sango and Miroku, fussing young youkai(s). I am trying to out guess the direction this story will take, but there is obviously too many possibilities. Guess I have to wait and read . . . . Thankyou again, Cynbad146
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Title: Desideratum-Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 18:38 PDT
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Wow...well...something tells me that this is going to be quite the angsty fic, which I am looking forward to. We have an extremely stubborn hanyou who is having a difficult time adjusting to his 'new life' in Kagome's time. He's got a bad reminder of what he is missing when he watches Hitomi and Souta, Grandpa is making his feelings on Yasha being there known to the hanyou...and last but not least...a new arrival on the scene...one that is a familiar face. What on earth is he doing with a hanyou though?? As for back with the rest of the gang...Kagome is pining over losing Yasha as much as he is...but...What one earth is with Miroku? Granted, he's an unusual guy to start, but Midoriko's words...they scare me. Look what she did to the other two...not that I think she MEANT to...but...well...what could Miroku be afraid of? I see lots of angst ahead. Good thing I love angst!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: July 14, 2005 18:12 PDT
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Oh... Oh... So the master tormentor! Ouch. *wipes tears away, blows nose* Ouch. You're breaking our hearts for Inuyasha and Kagome. Angst? Angst? You call that Angst? uh, ripping my heart out... putting needles and hot pokers through it... That goes beyond Angst! Ok... So I still love the story. *wipes tears again* It's so very good Sue!
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Reviewed By: Suze - nsi On: July 14, 2005 17:04 PDT
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Hmmm...don't know who the hanyou might be, but the other person certainly *sounds* like Sexxhoumaru! Oh man...this is seriously agonizing. I think that as bad as I feel for Kagome, at least she does have her friends with her. Poor InuYasha is stuck in a time that he hates and doesn't understand, and on top of everything, Jii-chan is chucking ofudas at him. That's just not nice! I thought it was very insightful of InuYasha to realize that he was using anger to fight off his pain and hurt...but I suppose even he couldn't be oblivious to how they got into this situation. Darn that Midoriko! Anyway, I was thinking that InuYasha should try to find Sesshoumaru (or Shippou, etc. - someone who would have lived to the Modern Era). It'd be kind of interesting if IY did find him and he hadn't been made more agreeable by the passage of years. In pretty much every fic I've read, Sesshy learns a thing or three and ends up helping his brother. But what if he didn't? Hmmm...sorry, just thinking out loud. Anyhew...I don't know what to make of what Midoriko told Miroku. There's definitely something going on there, but I don't know what. Guess I'll just have to bask in the angst and wait n' see. :)
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 16:14 PDT
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who is that? i cant think of anyone in the series thats a hanyou and has those features except for inuyasha...[??] hmm...dang i hope that inuyasha and kagome find a way to find each other...
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Title: I love teh Sueric
Reviewed By: inufan625 (not logged in) On: July 14, 2005 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad and yet so amazing. You have to feel sorry for both InuYasha and Kagome. I really love this so far and I bet it gets even better. I wish I was better at writting reviews so I better convey what I think of your work. Your characters remain true to cannon and your plots are always original and intriguing. You portray the emotions of the characters so well and it just draws you in to their world. Everyday I look forward to checking my email and seeing a new chapter from one of your stories.
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