| "Desideratum" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Reviewed By: Samishii Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 12:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stand in awe of your writing skills. The way you write makes you feel the characters emotions, poor Kagome. Can't wait for the next chapter, waiting has never been one my strong points any way.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 12:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, you had me in tears! That was so sad, I am curious as to what happened and where Inuyasha has gone, but I'm not going to guess out loud-'cause you always come up with the best suspense. lol I am hocked. I can't wait to find out and what will happen. Looking forward to reading more next update!
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Reviewed By: Yuzuki Potter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 11:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've come out of the shadows to review this time Sueric-san ^_^ This story is amazing! It's shaping up to be another one of Sueric-san's masterpieces! That was very unexpected! Inuyasha just...went poof ne? Poor Kagome-chan. Well, things must get worse before they can get better ne? Perhaps the reviewer Pioden has caught on to something...could it be that to balance the flow of time, one of them must remain in Sengoku Jidai and one must remain in the future? Ah ah, I'm getting ahead of myself ^_^" Once again, good work. I look forward to the twists and turns this story holds. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Morly On: June 05, 2005 09:25 PDT
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oh my, I so want to cry. I can't believe they had conflicting wishes. Kags should have wished to be where Inu was. (tear stains)
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Reviewed By: kamackie(nsi) On: June 05, 2005 07:38 PDT
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O.o........oh no Wow Sue....I have no words for the chapter but wow......
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 05:48 PDT
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That was so sad that I cried. I love your writing and the vividness of it. I hope that nothing happens to Inuyasha. Where did he go? What'll happen to Kagome? I'll just have to wait for the next chapter right? Oh well... ok.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 05, 2005 03:59 PDT
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Wow. That was really emotional. I nearly cried! How do you effect me so? This chapter was beautifully written, and I'm glad your thinking about posting more, I'm really eager to read if your willing to post. I really think your a brillant writer, and you have so much talent. Its really a treat to read anything from you. So I hope you continue to write and post, I look forward to seeing more of this story!
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: June 05, 2005 00:42 PDT
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O.O AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 22:44 PDT
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG WHERE DID INUYASHA GO?!?!? OMG!! thats soo sad!!!! omg why?!? i didnt expect that omg....[lol] ok im ok now but i just thought of sumthing...since kagome is from one time and inuyasha is from another...then both cant be living in the same one right? since kagome chose to live in inuyashas time...omg...
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Reviewed By: MikoTen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Chapter one had me in tears! I love the way you write the characters. So many people write them OOC, but you manage to capture them perfectly. I loved Chronicles, Metamorphosis, and Purity, and yet again, you have captured my attention.
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 21:22 PDT
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Sighs. sighs again. Oh my, what am I supposed to say, just, oh my. Uh, Puffs please? Your torturing us? It is beautiful torture for us, though. Beautiful.
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 21:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my ghosh sue, this is the story you got those flames on? my lord it is so good. i can't believe some on would flame this. i personally love your inu/kag stories. so it would seem inu choose one place and kag the other huh? i hope you will stay with this story it has the makings of another of your great stories! thanks so much for reposting this, i missed it the first time and i would hate to not see the end of this. littleolmee
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Reviewed By: Pioden, who is too lazy to log in On: June 04, 2005 21:10 PDT
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*blinkblink* Well.... Didn't expect that to happen at all... um... *is a bit DAZED* I mean your previous stories were Inu and Kag get stuck in HER time but now she's trapped in Sengoku Jidai and Pioden is ASSUMING that InuYasha is in her era...? That is all I can come up with right now, but knowing you, there is some interesting unforseen twist that will totally unseat any and all theories I have so... Pioden will stop guessing at what Sueric has in store and just go with ze flow.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 21:04 PDT
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Just a comment, isn't the go through of what the various group members have lost also used in another of your stories? Its a good idea, but I know I've seen something like it before. Why did Inu disappear? Poor Kagome. Thats a bit of a dumb question, ne? I'm sure the Update Goddess Sueric will reveal all in time. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: xenus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 20:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I was definitely not expecting that to happen, but nevertheless I enjoyed it to the fullest extent. Hopefully, the constant good reviews that I have seen will help in your decision on whether to update or not. Just superb and "fantabulous"!!!! (It's a word a friend of mine made up) Later!
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