| "Nine Months" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Title: ANGELBABYo8
Reviewed By: ANGELBABYo8 On: June 09, 2005 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMYGOD i love this simply love it. you HAVE to continue SOON
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god you have to update please I can't wait to see what you write.
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 18:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
The sperm and egg may not even meet for thirty-six hours after sex. So, I think the earliest you could tell is about a week. Maybe a little more like ten days. I thought it was great. Hiei getting drunk on ice cream. That classic!
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Reviewed By: nashkitty On: June 06, 2005 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this little story. It was funny, exciting, and the idea of Kagome and Hiei is adorable. There were very few grammar errors (which I have to say I'm relieved...I'm a grammar Nazi when it comes to writing lol). And the story line is very original. To answer your question about the pregnancy test, the soonest you can use one is three weeks after I believe but even those aren't 100% sure. Anyway, I can't for the next chapter! ^_~
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: PrincessRock323(not logged in) On: June 05, 2005 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. Please update soon. I wanna know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KIAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!Wowo...OMG....ow did you come up with that...your story rocks...better then mine anyway's ... lol....no..really...keep it up and update soon!
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Title: Dark Soul
Reviewed By: Nine Months On: June 05, 2005 09:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! i cANT bELEVE IT!! Kagome going to have a kid!!! Please update!!! cANT wAIT!!!
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