| "Deadly Beautiful" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: Dante Vashlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOVE this. You have no idea. I love Gundam Wing so much, all I've done since I found this was read it. When I found it you were already 56 chapters in and I'm already dieing for more. You've done the g-boys proud. I can't wait for more. Fantastic job.
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 07:10 CDT
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Yay! A new chapter even though I'm slow to getting to it! Lol blame the computer it was the one that wanted to crash and be put into the shop! Lol I can't wait for the next update!
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Title: Praise, Praise, PRAISE!!
Reviewed By: Jania from El Jay On: February 24, 2007 06:15 CST
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Hi. It's nice to see an update from you. :) You write better than most, you really do. You'd deserve more visibility... Some people have the technical skill of writing, but the content has a sort of clinical feel to it, and some others do have a connection to their readers and their own story, but it gets buried under bad grammar, too emotional storytelling and just a general lack of words... Not you though. You have the skill and that special "touch". The text is good and it makes me feel things as I read. I care about these characters. Your boys are qrotesque but kind of pitiful, and still just ordinary guys when they're alone. I'm really annoyed by Relena, and the evil doctors, who train child soldiers almost like A.Hitler tried to do, still manage to make me feel symphaty for them. Not just anyone could do that with their characters. You must be a very perceptive person IRL. I already know that you're probably one of the smartest people I have ever...ummm... seen other people talk to? XDD Speaking of which... Have you been talking a lot with our Link, lately? Because this one sentence sounded a bit like her... He's so nice as well as being ridiculously gorgeous. This just caught my eye, because I don't think Relena would think him RIDICULOUSLY gorgerous, because I somehow don't think she'd think a guy could be overly anything as the adjective implies, since she is waiting for her knight in shining armor. So, seeing something and thinking it's better than usual, or better than she expected doesn't seem her style, because she is expecting only the best for herself. And because thinking in words like that would require perspective and imagination which I think she might not have. XDD But this is just me being nitpiccy. :) You're probably thinking right now "Why do all the others get such nice reviews and I get a nitpicking a**hole? Where, of Lord, is the justice in that?" Well, to that I might say that I really don't know, but I hope you tell me, if you find out. XP But seriously, at first I didn't think this story was my cup of tea at all, and I only started reading it to make Link happy, but now I'm enjoying it on my own. I'm glad I started, I really am. So, write at your own pace, no rush or anything. You never lose your plot. It's amazing how your chapters don't ever lose quality or beat no matter how much time is between updates. So therefore I'm just happy to see an update when it comes, and don't feel the need to pressure you for them, since I know they'll be great. And this is not flattery! I might be a bit repetitive with my praise, and I don't know how many people tell you how good you are, but in my opinion you really need to hear it because it's true, and so I'm leaving you this loooong review to tell you. :) It's all worth your while, every word.
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Reviewed By: one-winged-shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 22:56 CST
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YESSSS!! AN UPDATE *gleams* Thank you!! Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: one-winged-shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 23:35 CST
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yes!!! another chapter! *gets out the pom poms!* Wonderful as usual! *has her face pressed right up against the screen again* hope for another chapter soon! Love ya!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So glad to finally see another chapter in this one. :^D It's very enjoyable and I patiently look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So glad to finally see another chapter in this one. :^D It's very enjoyable and I patiently look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for more may die for not budging from computer to eat of sleep. But that doesn't matter must have more!! Lol in case you didn't notice love it and can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 21:20 CST
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So good to see an update and yay for the steamy kiss!!!! Yum..1x2, my fav. I love the action sequences - they are intense. Have you thought about posting your fic on the 1x2ml yahoo group?
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Reviewed By: hostilecrayon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 23:02 CST
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Mmmm, kisses. I love the parellels to the show here. It's very interesting, and I look forward to more, as always. ^.^
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Reviewed By: one-winged-shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 11:49 CST
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wow... i love this fic!!! its so awesome!! hope u write more soon ^_^... haha Wufei's comment about ending up working with a bunch of gay guys was funny XD... though i think it would have been cooler if he made that comment when Hee chan and Duo chan finally got together... you know the whole bug eyese when the two kiss expression... but this rules i adore this fic and hope you update soon! ps. I think it would be really hot if Hee chan called Duo Shinigami chan accidentally or sumtin... but thats just me have fun with this ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting.....update!!!!!!!!!!! i like how trowa tried to explain to heero how he felt for quatre. wonder why heero's not calling duo *grins*
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 10:46 CST
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hi again! i am finally caught up. make duo better!! why doesn't heero want tro to call anyone? and is hilde gonna be okay? more blood more action more more more more more!! bwhahahahahahahaha!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 16:16 CST
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ummm...i just started reading this...gotta question...are there pairings? and if there are...are they yaoi or nonyaoi? i mean, i'll still read if you pair the guys with the girls *cringes* it's just that good of a fic. i just wanted to know, ya know? anywho, i would rate this, but ten doesn't seem to cover it. i give you a 100 on what i read so far...can't remember the chapter number exactly though. ummmm...i think i'm done. oh! if you don't wanna put my answer on MM you can email me at shinigamis_shiryuu@yahoo.com okay, i think i'm done. yeah, back to reading!!
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Reviewed By: monkey butt On: November 13, 2005 17:32 CST
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oi! You can't just leave me hanging like that! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: JB On: October 02, 2005 14:22 CDT
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Glad to see an update! Still very much enjoying the story and looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: kourutuauniw (not logged in) On: September 27, 2005 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I need more!!! Please!!! Hopefully in the near future. I like the story and when time permits could you post?
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Reviewed By: Miss Shepherdess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 02:01 CDT
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Hi. I'm going to review, now, though I kinda did, already... So. *clears throat* Squee. I love j00. Squee. EEEeee. Mooore. But, seriously... One of the best stories I ever read. You have a grip that won't let up. Intense. That's what I'd call your story. So squeee.Moooreee.
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 18:55 CDT
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I'm only about halfway through, but i couldn't help but laugh at Duo's alias... Scott McNeil... *dies laughing again* Oh the irony!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! This is really a fun story to read so far, I'm enjoying it immensely. You're really great with details and descriptions, so that it's easy to visualize the scenes in my head as I read along. And YAY for the Heero/Duo possible pairing - my fav. From reading some of the opening/closing author notes, it seems you've posted this fic somewhere else previously. I'm hoping that means the story is (or almost is) completed and you are simply posting the chaps in groups to mm.org. *crosses fingers* Anyways, looking forward to the next update(s)! It's a shame more haven't reviewed here. Perhaps if you post some of the pairings in the story summary? Then again, not necessarily. I didn't have hardly any for my GW fic and it actually won a contest elsewhere. Well, I'll keep reviewing *grin*
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very good story so far! Your use of description when writing a scene is fantastic! I usually only read stories in GW with a specific pairing because my time is so limited. But, though I'm unsure if or who you might be pairing in this (I have my hopes it's my fav pairing), your fic has captured my interest to where it doesn't matter. I look forward to the next update and when all the pilots finally meet at the base they plan to destroy. Well written story thus far, imho.
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