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| "Ten Years Later" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] | Title: AW!
Reviewed By: goddessruling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 00:31 CDT
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I do have one thing that I don't like about your stories...I wish that Rae and BB would actually get a makeout scene like Robin and Starfire. I mean come on Rae, just break down and KISS him already. Good kiss. But anyways, I'm SO SAD that this story is over! I guess I'll just have to be content with AFY and the Jerico stories...sigh.... But seriously, great job I've really enjoyed this story and the unique ideas of it. And naturally, I can't WAIT for a sequal!
| Title: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i THOUGH this would be longer I mean your other fan fiction, AAAFY, is 40 chaps long. anywho enough legth issues I love the end, oh Raven kills Trigon how original. But anyway Slade good guy for once, can't see it wait I did in THE END didn't I wow I am stupid. anyway I love this and can't wait for the sequal I bet it will be really really really really good. Infact it will probably be amazing anywho keep up the good work and all, oh and Wow I didn't think That Robin ane Starfire would make up but who am I kiding your too nice too let them hate each other. OH and in the Epilogue The BEast boy Raven Part was hilarious, I wonder how many times Beast Boy's had to beg to get what he wants, Anywho Your Story was awsome as useual, Love Yah! :)
| Reviewed By: Frimm On: August 11, 2005 20:58 CDT
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very good story, i like the way you fit both arella and slade into the story. one thing, raven was a tinsy weensy bit oc in the last chapter but not that noticable. so don't fret. it's really great to read a story with an author who has actually seen the last season, so knows what happened between raven and her dad, too many stories are weird that way. there is a dumb letter limit on this review so i can't say much, but i do want to say that i love your story and can't wait for and update so hurry up and sustain me! Frimm
| Title: bloody hell!!!
Reviewed By: Twitch_6 On: August 10, 2005 00:29 CDT
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great! so now i'm hooked on this one too! and i can't decide which one i want to update faster! bloody hell you're evil little mind is too filled with great stories and you cna actually write them out too! i give you the grr of great evilness and indecision. GRRRRR rrrr RR RRRRrrrrrr RRRRrrrrrrr rrr rrrrrrrrrrrrr ... rrrr! now that i got that out of the way onto the actual critice instead of just the ego enhancer. you've done better with the grammer and especaily the spelling with this fic and i'm enjoying the chap length average as well. i love a long chapter! this fic is considerably dark then your AAAFY fic too which i'm realy enjoying. i like AAAYF a lot too but i've always preferred the darker stories. though i think you'll need a bit more humor in this one soon before the tension drives batty. i also like the focus being on raven. she's my favorite character out of the lot of them and my second fav is bb so having you write a bunch bb/rae time, romanace and angst is great! you're the 3rd person i came across when looking for TT fics and i think i've been spolied. the other two both had raven as gay too... i like the more cannonal pairings as well. though i know rae and bb have never really gotten together and she's slated to have a fling with the mute i keep getting the vibe that the two of them are meant to be at some point but then maybe that's wishful thinking eh? anyway, i'm really enjoying the fic and so far no missing threads! and know i'm out of room again *sigh* | Title: Oh My Stars
Reviewed By: goddessruling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 23:42 CDT
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you updated TWICE without me noticing? How terrible! But I am here now to say that I liked both chapters even though 1) everyone got their groove on except Rae and BB (well Cyborg didn't either, but the only thing Cy ever has to make out with is a question mark) and 2) Garfield is the one who messed up during the battle. SOB! My BB is perfect and would never do such a thing! or...maybe he would. OH and I also really like how you make everyone but Raven seem adult (of course she wouldn't be adult, she'd still be 16) except for a few moments with Gar (which again, love him to death, but he wouldn't be all that mature, especially after the Super Inflated Ego.) And seriously, are you having something up with Arella and Slade? That is sick, and twisted, and I love it! Anyways, I'm going to try to figure out how to make this site tell me when you update because now I have THREE, count them THREE stories to keep up with! How will I ever manage??
| Title: So good!!
Reviewed By: sarahml524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 22:11 CDT
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This is such an amazing fic!! Keep up the great work, and I'm glad that Kori and Nightwing got back together. Your view on Slade being a mercenary who is good when he works for good people is very different, and I like it :).
| Title: Ten Years Later
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very wonderful!!!!!!!! You are a very talented author. Please update!
| Title: WOOHOO!!
Reviewed By: Hikaru-RoseRed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WooHoo!! Like always i love it!! Rae and Gar should have had just a little more time to talk. Its inportant that raven knows what ever she needs not know. -Nods while smileing- anywho I love this story. the plot is wonderful and i cant stop reading it. I like to collect diffenrent fics that i really like. Put 'em in a note book and all that good stuff. Right now my printer is broken because of a little brother. -coughlittledumbfuckcoughcough- well thats not inportant! but i am really injoying this story. I like your crativity and your style. So far i havent noticed any spelling or grammar arrors but im not that good anyway. please please PLEASE!! update soon. untill next time!! -waves and dives into another fanfic-
| Title: AHHHHHHH!
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 01:22 CDT
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That was amazing it was unbeleivable it was it was really really good and even though it's about raven and, no offense, she's my mortal enemy in a sence. this story made me cry so far, but yet I kind of sence the evil with in, for the starfire and Robin hating each other, well at least starfire, you evil person. One thing, uh who would want to marry Beast Boy? Come on he's uh let's see green and why is Raven so she now? and Beast Boy acting like Robin in not only in you other fanfiction that I read and love, when he finds out star has a daughter, but also in betrothed when he's yelling at star your getting married. Well I guess it's now BB's turn to be dramatic, but a swimming pool this shape of his head, is he obssesed with himself or something? And wouldn't the body guard know the names of his friends and pics. just incase they stop bye. Ooo I can't wait till BB and Robin meet up I can't wait to read there fight, that is after Raven is saved of course. Or You could be,Not that it matters to me, Super evil to raven and during a fight, fight with each other so there's a fight withen a fight. And how did Star learn good english? And how come you picked ten years? anywho Amazing story and I think it is truly time to shut up for it is 2:21 am where i am, Love yah! :)
| Reviewed By: Poison-Ivy On: July 20, 2005 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When i first started reading this story i immediately thought of Birthmark when you mentioned Raven's hair being longer.i like how you base this story mostly on Raven.By the way how old are you?I'm 15 and am obsesed with TT. My mom and sister think i'm weird because i spend hours reading your stories.Did you know that all of the new TT episodes are playing next week on Cartoon Network?i can't wait to see them all again.especially Stranded with Rob/Star goodness.ok i think i'm done now.hope you get the next chapter of this and AAAFY done soon, even though i said that in my last review, oh well.
| Reviewed By: Poison-Ivy On: July 19, 2005 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story, especially since it's based on Raven who is my favorite character. i also read AAAFY which was AWSOME! although i'm only on ch 3 now i hope you continue with this story and AAFFY.
| Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Ayriel On: July 18, 2005 13:26 CDT
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I absolutely love you're fanfic! I can't recognize a single flaw; everyone is in character, and you know just how to build the suspense. And I just had to let out a big squeal at BB and Raven's little reunion. I'm a big fan of fluff. :) I will be anxiously awaiting your next chapter. You deserve a cookie (with any flavor you so choose). .: Ayriel :.
| Reviewed By: Priestess_Of_Dragons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 20:38 CDT
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Great work on chapter six!!! Keep up to great fanfic! ^_^
| Reviewed By: teentitansfan On: July 16, 2005 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i luved this 1 and hope u start another 1 soon. keep the suspense going, it's really good. especially with BB and raven.
| Title: NOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: goddessruling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 16:49 CDT
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where's my BB/Rae kiss?? agh....and a cliffhanger, as always. damn Trigon to hell!!...well I guess that would actually be kind of redundent, wouldn't it? Anyways, you had me enthralled (as always) and made me go through eight tootsie rolls (yes MADE me) while I read your story. Oh, poor Gar!!
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