Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction / Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction ❯ Bachelorette SAJ ❯ Elimination and SAJ and Hiei's Date ( Chapter 11 )

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Heya you all! Sorry it took forever to write the next chapter. I was looking over the last chapter and realized that I hadn't uploaded in a while. I hope you don't mind. . . .

Well, do I have something bad to tell all of you! I'm not able to go on the computer to type up my story on certain days. The only days I'm aloud to is Friday, and Sunday. Jeez, it really sucks. But, I'm sorry if I haven't read or reviewed any of your story's, if I forgot. I'm only aloud to go on Saturdays for that. . . .(Sighs).

Also, this chapter is a little dry, 'cause I'm running out of things to happen. Well, funny things at least! Just wanted to warn ya!

To those special people who reviewed:

To Yamisgirl- I'm sorry, I don't know how you spell it! I was only able to get a gimps of it on Saturday. . . Well, thanx for taking the time to read this! And I love your bachelorette fic for your brother. ^___^ Well, er, thanks for telling me that.(Sweatdrop). Well, thanks a LOT!!!!

To Momma Cat- Thanks for reviewing!! I really appreciate all your support. I don't know how to thank you really. . . Thanks. ^_^

To InsaneAuthoress-(Pauses). Did you review last chapter? Hmm. . . . . I think so. Well, if you didn't, er, why am I doing this? If you did, thank you sooo much!!

To AMK- Thanks mucho! I really appreciate it. I know, I say that a lot, but I really do. And, you better upload the next chapter of Children of Shadows soon. Thanx! ^_^

To Sajy-chan, who still has nothing to do with the dates and the chapters- Thanx for reviewing. I'm sure you'll like this chapter too! 'Cause you get to go on another date with Hiei! ^_^ Well, thanks for the support. Thanks.

To Tenshi Bane- Thanks for taking the time to read and review my fic. Even when you have to go so far to go to a computer. I really appreciate it. ^_^ Thanks!

To Animegirl222- Thanks a mil! I'm really glad that you reviewed again!!!! ^____^ Thanks sooooo much!!!

To Bloody Red Rose- Thanks a lot!! ^__^

Now! For the prizes!! Mwahahaha!! Okay, Diana, you're up first.

Diana: What do I get? Huh? Huh? Huh?

TAB: You get a kiss. . . . . . from!!. . . . . Gosh, I dunno. You pick.

Diana: Eriki!

TAB: Someone that's from these two shows.

Diana: Oh, that sucks. Hmm, how 'bout Joey again?

TAB: Okay Joey!

Joey:(Appears). Wha?

Diana:(Kisses Joey).

TAB: Okay! Next. . . .

Diana: Wait! I want one more kiss. . . from Yugi!

TAB: (Sweatdrop). Okay.

Yugi:(Appears). Wha?

Diana:(Kisses Yugi).

Tabby: I'm just going to use this name for now. It's getting annoying to say 'TAB' all the time. Ya know? Okay, Yamisgirl! You get a kiss from Yami!

Yamisgirl: Me?

Tabby: Yeah, since you reviewed you get something!

Yami:(Appears).

Yamisgirl:(Kisses Yami).

Tabby: Okay, Tenshi Bane, you get a kiss from Kaiba!

Tenshi Bane: Yeah!

Kaiba:(Appears). Huh?

Tenshi Bane: Mistletoe!

Kaiba: Wha? There's no mistletoe!

Tenshi Bane: Huh?

Tabby: Wops! ^_^' sorry about that!(Quickly puts mistletoe on top of Kaiba and Tenshi Bane).

Tenshi Bane:(Kisses Kaiba).

Tabby: Okay! Reem. . . . Er, another kiss from Yami?

Yami: What kind of a guy do you take me for?

Reem:(Kisses Yami).

Yamisgirl: Hey!

Reem: He's mine.

Yamisgirl: Mine!

Tabby: Not in this fic. Er, Reemasi, how 'bout a life time supply of chocolate!

Reemasi: Cool!

Tabby: AMK, I have another present for you!

AMK: What is it?

Tabby: It is. . . . . . . A life time supply of Super Sized Mallets! So you can threaten everyone! ^_^

AMK: Cool!!!

Tabby: Well, that's it. Remember if you want a present, just tell me in a review!

Disclaimer: I don't own anything. . . . . Still.

Enjoy!

Chapter Eleven: The Elimination and SAJ and Hiei's Date


TAB: Welcome! SAJ will get rid of one, unfortunate, boy today. But who will it be? Of course that's everyone's question! ^_^ Lets get right to it!

SAJ:(Walks in with Touya eating an ice cream cone). Okay! I'm ready.

TAB: Uh, okay. The boys are in the other room waiting for you to decide.

SAJ: Oh! Touya. Can you get an ice cream cone for the boy I don't pick?

Touya: Sure. . .(Walks off).

TAB: Well, anyho, this is what you do. Call each boy up, in no order, and tell them what you thought of your date. Then, you say if he was the one eliminated or not. Sound simple? Uh, SAJ?

SAJ:(Already in front of the door). I know. Blah, blah, blah.(Goes in the door).

TAB:(Sweatdrop). I hope she listened to me. . .(Goes in after SAJ).

*In the room.*

Bakura: I wonder who she's going to eliminate.

Hiei: Hn. . .

Yusuke:(Has his face in the camera).

Kurama: Well, here she is.

SAJ: Hello boys! Lets get right down to it. Hiei, you're up first.

Hiei:(Zooms up to SAJ).

SAJ: I had a lot of fun on the date. Though, I wonder how the people we ran over are doing. . . .(Voice goes down to a whisper). I especially loved it when we got the Viper(Voice goes back to normal). I would love to go on another date with you. That's why you aren't eliminated today.

Hiei:(Grins and zooms off).

SAJ: Bakura!

Bakura:(Walks up to SAJ).

SAJ: I had a blast with you. Maybe some day I'll get better at ice skating. . . But. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

*A few minutes later.*

Everyone but Yusuke:(In suspense).

Yusuke:(Still has his face in the camera).

Camera person: Will you please get out of the way! This is important television!

Yusuke:(Still has his face in the camera).

Camera person:(Sighs).

SAJ: That's why. . . . . . . . . . . . . you aren't eliminated today!

TAB: You can't say that! It makes no sense!

SAJ: ^_^ That's why I did it.

Bakura:(Smiles and walks off).

Everyone except Yusuke:(Sweatdrop).

SAJ: Yusuke. . . Yusuke? YUSUKE!!!!

Yusuke:(Pauses). Wha?

SAJ: Yusuke, you're next.

Yusuke: Okay. . .(Walks up to SAJ).

Kurama:(Sighs).

SAJ: I had a lot of fun on our date. I loved the dancing, though you did step on my feet a lot, and you aren't a very good singer. So. . . . . . . . . . . . you're the one that's eliminated today.

Everyone:(Blink, blink).

TAB: Uh, SAJ?

SAJ: You said 'in no order'.

TAB: I guess. . . . . . . Now. . . . .

SAJ: Hiei, I'm going to go on a date with you!

Hiei: Me again?

SAJ: Yep! Though, I'm going to plan the next date. Touya, could you give Yusuke the ice cream cone?

Touya:(Hands Yusuke the ice cream cone).

Yusuke: Yum. . . ^_^

TAB: You know what to do! 'Till tomorrow!

*The next day.*

SAJ: Hello Hiei, TAB, Touya!

TAB and Touya: Hello.

Hiei: Do you have the date planned?

SAJ: Yep, come on!

Touya: Do you want me to drive you?

SAJ: Nope! See you guys later.

TAB: Grr, I'm not a guy. . . .

*Outside.*

SAJ: Did you get the Viper?

Hiei:(Sighs). No. Kurama was near the garage and I didn't want him to see it.

SAJ: Yeah, I suppose we can both go there and get it together.

Hiei: Okay. . . . . . . . . Just don't slow me down. . .

*At Kurama's house.*

Hiei: Okay, he usually goes in the backyard for a while, then he showers for, around an hour.

SAJ: He showers for an hour?

Hiei: Yeah, I swear he uses Herbal Essences.

SAJ:(Giggles). Does he say 'Yes!'?

Hiei:(Pauses). Sometimes. . . . .(A/N: NOO!! What have I turned into?(Sighs). I love Kurama yet I just bashed him. . . . What has the world come to?? I have become like my sister(Dread))

Hiei and SAJ:(Grin at each other).

Kurama:(Heads inside).

Hiei: Now!

Hiei and SAJ:(Head toward the garage).

SAJ:(Gets inside the garage).

Kurama: Hiei, what are you doing here?

Hiei:(Sweatdrop). Uh. . . . .

Kurama: Aren't you supposed to be on a date with SAJ?

Hiei: Uh, I forgot something.

Kurama: In the garage?

Hiei: Yeah. . . Er, my sword!

Kurama:(Folds his arms). Your sword is right there.

Hiei: Oh, I forgot, well, I'll be going then. . . .(SLOWLY starts walking away).

Kurama:(Looks suspiciously at Hiei before heading in the house).

Hiei:(Zooms in the garage). That was a close one.

SAJ: Are you sure he wont hear us?

Hiei: He's in the shower right now.

SAJ: Okay!(Gets in the drivers side of the Viper).

Hiei:(Opens the garage door then hops in the passenger side).

SAJ: Ready?

Hiei: Of course.

Viper:(Zooms out of the garage).

Hiei: So, where are we going to first?

SAJ: You'll see!

*At a paint ball place.*

SAJ: Yeah, my name is SAJ! S-A-J, SAJ!

Hiei:(Holding a paint gun). What's this button do?(Presses the button).

Paint:(Hits the wall).

Hiei:(Grins evilly).

SAJ: MY NAME IS SAJ!!!!! YOU STUPID PERSON!!!

Guy behind the counter of the paint ball place: Uh. . . . . Lets the manager. . .(Walks out).

Girl that worked at Arby's until it was destroyed, gave tickets out at an amusement park, worked at Burger King and the drive in, and is now the manager of the paint ball place(A/N: I GOT to stop doing the same person. . . . . Maybe I should give the girl a name. Who wants me to give the girl a name? Just say so in your review): YOU!!

SAJ: Oh, you again.

Girl that worked at Arby's until it was destroyed, gave tickets out at an amusement park, worked at Burger King and the drive in, and is now the manager of the paint ball place(A/N: It's torture typing it!!): We'll let you in, on the opposite team as me!!!

SAJ: You're on! Right Hiei!. . . Hiei?

Hiei:(Shooting the paint gun at poor innocent people).

SAJ:(Sweatdrop).

*In the paint ball place.*

Hiei: So, we're supposed to shoot as many people as possible?

SAJ: Yep. I thought you would like it because you're shooting people. ^_^

Hiei: Yeah, I do like it. ^__^

Person with paint gun: I'm going to get you!(Tries to fire paint gun).

Hiei:(Shoots Person with paint gun).

Person with paint gun: Hey!

Hiei:(Keeps on shooting Person with paint gun).

Person with paint gun: AHHH!!(Runs off).

Hiei: You aren't going to get off so light!. . .(Runs after Person with paint gun).

SAJ: Hiei! Don't leave me. . . . .

Girl that worked at Arby's until it was destroyed, gave tickets out at an amusement park, worked at Burger King and the drive in, and is now the manager of the paint ball place with a paint gun: I'm going to get you this time. . .

SAJ: We'll see about that!

Girl that worked at Arby's until it was destroyed, gave tickets out at an amusement park, worked at Burger King and the drive in, and is now the manager of the paint ball place with a paint gun and SAJ:(Start to fight).

*A little while later.*

Hiei:(Comes back). SAJ?

SAJ:(Beat the 'Girl'). Much better, now, lets get some more people!

*A few minutes later.*

SAJ:(Walking). Hiei? Where are you? Hiei. Jeez, what does a GIRL have to do to NOT STAY A LONE?!!!

Random guy with a paint gun: You're all alone! I'm going to get you!(Goes to fire the paint gun).

Hiei:(Shoots Random guy with a paint gun from the tree). Take that!

Random guy with a paint gun: AHH!(Runs off).

Hiei: ^____^

Bell: Ding, dong.

SAJ: I guess it's over! That was fun.

Hiei: Yeah!

SAJ: I have one more place we're going to go. . . . . . .

*Away from the date, at Kurama's house.*

Knock, knock.

Kurama:(Pauses). I wonder who it is. . (Opens the door).

Police man number one: We have orders to search your house.

Kurama: ?? What are you looking for?

Police man number two: We have reason to believe that you are holding a stolen Viper here.

Kurama: Uh, Viper? Why would I have it here?

Police man number three: Let us in!

Kurama: Sure.

*A little while later.*

Police man number one: I'm sorry for disturbing you.

Police man number two: Tell us if you see a Viper around here.

Police man number three: You have it! I know you do! Where is it???

Kurama: Uh. . . .

Police man number one and two:(Dragging police man number three).

Police man number three:(While being dragged). I'll catch you in the act!! I WILL!

Kurama:(Sweatdrop). Uh, okay. By(Closes the door). I wonder what that was about. . . . .

*Back to the date, at a Miniature Golf Place.*

Hiei:(Looking at the small club). Are we supposed to hit people with these?

SAJ: No! We're supposed to hit the ball(Holds up a white ball). Threw a series of different places to get into a small hole.

Hiei: Sounds simple enough.

SAJ: Come on!(Drags Hiei to the first put).

Hiei: So, you just hit the ball?

SAJ: Yep! You go first.

Hiei:(Wacks the ball with his Golf Club).

Golf Ball:(In the ground).

SAJ:(Sweatdrop). Not like that! You have to hit it like this(Hits her ball and it goes near the small black hole).

Hiei: Oh. . .(Tries to hit the ball).

Golf Ball:(Still stuck in the ground).

SAJ: Here's another ball.

Hiei:(Hits the ball).

Golf Ball:(Flies and hits a guy in the head).

Hiei: How's that?

SAJ:(Sighs). Great, perfect.

*A little bit later.*

SAJ and Hiei:(At a put place(A/N: Sorry, didn't know how to explain it. . ) where you have to get the ball threw a windmill).

SAJ:(Hits the ball threw the windmill).

Hiei:(Hits the ball).

Golf Ball:(Hits the windmill and bounces back to Hiei).

Hiei:(Frowns and hits the ball again).

Golf Ball:(Hits the windmill and bounces back to Hiei).

Hiei: Grr. . . .(Hits the ball more violently).

Golf Ball:(Hits the windmill and comes back to Hiei).

SAJ: Maybe you should try to hit it when the windmill isn't near the hole.

Hiei:(Glaring at the ball). Stupid. . .(Hits the ball).

Golf Ball:(Hits the windmill and comes back to Hiei).

Hiei: DIIEEE!!(Wacks the ball).

Golf Ball:(Hits the windmill, putting a dent in it, and comes flying back at Hiei).

Hiei: Gahh!(Ducks).

Golf Ball:(Goes over Hiei's head and hits a guy behind Hiei).

SAJ: Sorry! Lets got to a different one. . .

SAJ and Hiei:(At a water one).

SAJ:(Hits the ball).

Golf Ball:(Goes over the water).

Hiei: That seems simple enough. .(Hits the ball).

Golf Ball:(Goes into the water).

Hiei: That isn't fair!(Grabs another ball and hits it).

Golf Ball:(Goes into the water).

Hiei: Grr. . . .

SAJ: Try to hit it with more force.

Hiei: Fine!(Hits the ball with FORCE).

Golf Ball:(Hits a guy in the water, that is searching for a lost ball, and bounces back into the water).

Hiei: That would have made it!! Stupid human!(Goes after the guy with his sword).

SAJ:(Sighs). Well, mine as well finish the put. ^_^

*A while later.*

Hiei:(Driving the Viper). That was fun! ^_____^

SAJ: Yeah, I had a blast.

Hiei: Well, I suppose I best be going. . . . .

SAJ: By!(Gets out of the car). Thanks for bringing me back to the building.

Hiei:(Pauses). Your welcome. Er. . . . . . . . .

SAJ: What's wrong?

Hiei:(Leans over the passenger side of the Viper and leans in for a kiss).

TAB: Hello! Late as usual!

Hiei:(Falls into the passenger side of the Viper).

SAJ:(Blushing). Yeah, well. Thanks for the date!

Hiei:(Sighs). Your welcome.(Gives TAB the 'if you do that again I'll kill you' look, and drives away).

TAB:(Looks into the camera). Okay! Tomorrow SAJ will go on a date with Kurama! What will happen? Well, 'till the next day! . . . . Should I interrupt the kiss from the next date? Maybe. . . I'm soo evil! ^____^

SAJ:(Arms crossed). You did that on PURPOSE?

TAB: Uh. .(Sweatdrop). Kinda. . . . . .

SAJ: Er!!(Starts chasing TAB).

Touya: Stay tuned.

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Just want to say a few things!

1. Thanks to all again! ^_^

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4. Please check out my other fic, "Star Trek Yugiprise."

5. Please be patient. It'll be a while before I upload another chapter.

6. Just a plain thanks!

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