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 Reviewed By: silver_2039  On: July 13, 2007 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A truely incredible story...one of the best I've read on this site. Well done.
 Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2007 17:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP!!! That was so fucking unbelievablle! I couldn't stop reading. These last two chapters were absolutely amazing! But, I'm a sap and I want to know if Harry and Draco can be together. I so want them to be! But, I leave their fate in your more then capable hands. Wow... I'm still speachless. That was probably one of the best fight scenes I've read. *Sighs* I hope you're not done writing this! Update, please?! ^_*
 Title: Great
Reviewed By: Sini  On: July 09, 2007 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think it is a truly great fanfic so far. you've really managed to get the reader on everybodys side making it quite difficult to know who to cheer for. there are no definite black and white but a lot of grey which i like....cant wait to see how you end it!
 Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2007 10:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
The fight was just really detailed..loved it..just so exciting like you were really there. I still feel kind of sad that Draco and al the dark wizards had to go into hiding again.... Can't wait to see what haappens with Draco and Harry!!update again soon
 Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(nli)  On: July 08, 2007 17:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
More chapters! -Dances- The war seems to be just about over. Voldemort is dead, the castle is in ruins but probably salvageable. But yet again, Draco and Harry get forced apart. Damn it! They're never going to have hot monkey sex at this rate! -sighs- Baba Yaga! Gawd I miss those books. I loved them. Anyway, I am eager for the next chapter to come. I want to see which side Harry stands on if the rest of the Dark Wizards and the Light Wizards end up going to war. Better yet, I think it would be interesting to find out what happens when people find out that Draco and Harry are betrothed. -laughs- There is probably going to be some jaws on the floor at that one. Alright, that is about all I have to say on this. I did enough fan-worship to you on my last review. This is THE BEST HP fic I have read to date. That is a given and it probably will never change. Ja!
 Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 03, 2007 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh My GOD... You really need to update this again and soon! You really can't leave a bloody cliff hanger like that one! I want to know what happens next! I love this story! Please update soon! ^_^
 Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 27, 2007 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
*glompu* Thank you so much for updating, it has been way too long since the last time that I read this fic. I was wondering just yesterday about it and recomended it to a few people as well, thank you again for updating and I hope that Draco and Harry make it out okay... also Snape as well, Gods know that I always want him to be okay (a big Snape fan... though Draco is still number one in my list) With love, ~Mari-chan~
 Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 26, 2007 21:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really glad that you are still updating... you could not have possibly left such a great story without a happy ending right??? I LOVED THE CHAPTER.. please update soon.
 Title: inuyasha_1234
Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2007 17:42 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*brusts out into tears* OMG that was wonderful!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next, my whole soul wants to know if mr Malfoy accepts Harry or not and what happened to the children!!! I can't stop thinking about this fic and I hope you are able to update soon, Ja ne With love, Mari-chan
 Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2007 01:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Just Fucking Wow! That was amazing! I have NEVER read anything like this before! The detail... Draco's bravery... Seeing Draco fight like that for Harry... was soo touching... Just Wow. I can't even think of any words I could use to tell you just how great this chapter was... it was like I was there, picturing it happening in my head like a movie... I love it! You are a god amoung writers! I seriously like this fic more then the Harry Potter books! It's just so well done! I could go on for days about how amazing you are, and how amazing this fic is, but there just aren't enough words in the English Language I could use. Utterly Stunning! Brillant! Masterpiece! and HOLY SHIT!
 Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 08, 2007 20:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Ths Chapter was SOOO exciting! I mean Draco being all brave and literally giving his life up for Harry was just SOOO great! LOVED IT!!!!
 Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 08, 2007 07:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Holy crap, that is so beyond awesome!!! Brilliant save, everyone except for at most 3 people got away, and Draco, willingly or unwillingly, saved the lives of his entire house, and defended Harry! Damn if that is not awesome. Okay, enough of that, I love this chapter, and actually seeing Snape say something positive about someone, is pretty cool. Still, hope Harry and the others are alright. Neh, plus everyone else. Anyway, keep up the writing, want to see more of this story (and more of the Snape prequel too, love that story too).
 Title: inuyasha_1234
Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 24, 2007 22:43 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that this has to be the best HP fic that I have ever read and that it would make my day, if not my week to see you update it sometime. I have been spending *looks at clock* Wowo... a LOT of time just reading this and getting into the characters and the plot! This fic is absolutly fantstic and I wouldn't change anything about it!! I absolutly love it, if there is anything that you need or want just simply ask me... inuyasha_1234@hotmail.com... until then, or the next chapter... Ja ne With love, Mari-chan
 Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2007 15:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Another chapter, and afte rtis little bit of filler, teaser goodness, that sets up the next chapter (which hopefully will come out soon), we all look forward to it. Still, who will support, who will not? For that matter, hwo will the weasel react to harry being in a realtionship with Draco? Not to mention, how about Hermoine? Is she a homophobe? Anyway, more writing, more chapters, facts we would all be much obliged for. Yea, more chappies!!! (god I hate sounding like a happy fangirl *shudders*) Anyway, write some more, so we can all be entertained!
 Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2007 22:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes you updated the story!!!!!!!! I have been waiting fo rthis update since you left me hanging in November. Love the chapter, I'm glad that Dray and Harry are back together. PLEASE DON'T MAKE THEM FIGHT AGAIN!!!!!!
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