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| "Bakura and the Wolfgirl" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: KyosAngel286 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 21:25 CDT
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that was cool.. though... if theres gonna be lemons.... icky.. sry... i'm just that way.. once those happens... I'm staying far away as possible >< but.. so far so good.. ;~; I envy you Riz... you make better thingys then I do.. (I say yes to the email you sent me)
| Reviewed By: me On: August 07, 2005 16:17 CDT
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Yup! ^__^ Glad we worked it out. So this story is going to have a lemon? You're a brave girl. At least braver than me, I only read lemons, I don't make them. You see, its not that I don't want to, but I have this paranoid fear my parents wont like it. My parents want to read my fanfics, but I never let them, cus I only write Yaoi. I don't want to know what their reaction to Yaoi is. Aren't you nervous for doing that lemon? I know I would be… especially with my parents around. Good luck ^__~
| Reviewed By: Kitagawa_Wolf (Riz) On: August 06, 2005 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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;~; I am so *sniff* HAPPY!! WAH WAH!!! AHAHAHA WAH! THIS SO TOUCHING!! I LOVE YOU ALL!! ;o; I CAN'T TAKE IT!! IT'S TOO CUTE!!! ^^ I just love a new beautiful friendship!
| Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 16:17 CDT
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To "me": Yeah, I guess I was acting bitchy too...it's just that your tip sounded like a flame to me. Just glad that we're all on normal terms again...
| Title: sorry
Reviewed By: me On: August 06, 2005 01:03 CDT
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Yea... I'm really sorry i sounded like a bitch. I really wanted to give you a tip, cus flamers suck. I hope you have better luck with your story than I've had. I had removed my own story, cus it had so much flames. I hope the YGOreaders are nicer than the CardCaptorSakurareaders, cus CCSreaders are really a bunch of bitch-asses. I think both you and Sammi, are VERY lucky with no flames. I wish you both luck, and hope that you don't get flames. I wanted to say sorry to Lily too. I'm glad we are acting normal again ^__^ good luck with the story!
| Reviewed By: Kitagawa_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 21:14 CDT
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Sami, I accept your opology. but it wasn't my story was crushed, it still kept on going. The only thing that was crushed was my spirit and feelings but I'm still typing. It means "Put up" just take the feeling and feel it! ^^ It gave me sugar...and I am about half way finishing the chapter! ^__^ anyways, I'M HAPPY!!
| Reviewed By: Sami (wouldn't log me in) On: August 05, 2005 19:43 CDT
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Sorry, Riz, and "Me." I just felt so angry by what was said. Me, I'm sorry your story was crushed. I've never had that happen with my story, so I don't really understand well. All I meant to say was "Lighten up" since your review was a little harsh. Rizzy, fell better ;o;
| Title: Argument Conversation Must End
Reviewed By: Kitagawa_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 18:08 CDT
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Look, uhh "me", "Sami-Otaku", and "LilyIris". These argues are getting us nowhere. So can we please stop? The reviews ain't an arguement chat, it's for encouraging the author or authoress. I just had a bad day today so don't make things worse...
| Reviewed By: me On: August 05, 2005 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sheesh you all don't have to bitch on me, I was only giving her a damn tip. Believe me, I had a Mary-Sue story and it was pretty much all flames. I've seen dozens of other Mary-Sue or real-people-that-play-a-role stories, who where like me crushed to the ground. MOST readers don't like those stories, not all. I was only preparing her, for what COULD happen, I did not say it would happen, and it wasn't a damn flame. I hate doing flames. I'm am sorry if I sounded harsh in my first review, I only wanted to make my point. Now can we please stop arguing? This is getting us nowhere, okay? PS. (to Sami-Otaku) This story IS a Mary-Sue. You obviously don't know what a M-S is. A M-S is a self-made character, or authors who puts themselves in to their own story. Not only are they in the story, but usually M-Ss ALWAYS get the bishie, and all the attention. I think you know damn well that this story is a M-S. Oh and BTW, you are lazy-assed bitch yourself. Go get a life yourself, and have a nice day! >:P
| Reviewed By: kidzie On: August 05, 2005 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta agree with 'me'...cus... well she kinda acts like a Mary-sue... like all the magic powers and transformations, and having a hot bishie for her alone, and getting all the atantion.... Beleave me I don't hate it, but I don't like it either... Update soon...please don't be mad at me...
| Title: to the bitch
Reviewed By: Sami-Otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 14:57 CDT
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>< Listen, you lazy-assed bitch to even register. Who the hell do you think you ARE!? That was a flame, and she was NOT being a mary-sue. I've read mary-sue stories, and Riz isn't one of them. Why don't YOU get a life? Who cares if he's anime? This is a STORY! Let her write what she feels.
| Reviewed By: Sami-Otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 14:55 CDT
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XD Nice!!! :3 So, sis, when do I get to meet Bakura? Can't wait till you update ^^
| Title: for the bitch/bastard under me
Reviewed By: me On: August 05, 2005 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
(To LilyIris, who was probably too lazy to log in) Well Miss Lily, if you could READ, you probably would have seen that this was a TIP instead of a FLAME. I'm only telling the authoress/author what MOST readers like, to HELP her. H-E-L-P can you read that? Yes? Good. Then shut up, and don't call me a bitch/bastard. Okay?
| Reviewed By: LilyIris (NLI) On: August 05, 2005 08:23 CDT
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Eh, ignore the bitch/bastard that reviewed underneath me. Who needs em? Anywayz, sure I'll be in your fic. Glad you chose me. ^^ This is great so far, and I cant wait to read more!
| Title: Uugh... another one...
Reviewed By: me On: August 05, 2005 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeewww... the Mary-Sues are everywhere... Let me tell you this girl, readers HATE people who put themselfes or a Mary-Sue in their fic. And your NOT making any friends with the other obsessed fangirls, by acting like you and Bakura are lovers. Don't forget that Bakura is just a ANIME character. If I where you, I'd dump this fic, and make something else. Why don't you make a fic about your fave YGO male, and Fave YGO female, or a girl from another anime. You won't get many reviews with this, (maybe flames). This isn't a flame, consider this as a tip. I wish you good luck, cus you are going to need it. BU-BYE
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