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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 02:37 EDT
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You are forgiven because it was a wonderful sex scene. Very very nice.
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: September 12, 2007 18:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Deliciously sexy. Very drool-worthy. But as much as I love this story...I love Shatter, too. So, feel free to alternate updates...or update both at once...or anything that give me more yummy stuff to read!
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Reviewed By: silxcite [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thnx for the update, the chpt was enjoyable. it was interesting to see wufei beaten up by zhao cuz the way he was portrayed he seen as too arrogant.
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Title: Great Work
Reviewed By: LizzyC On: August 22, 2007 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was a delightful story to read. It had it's ups and downs and kept my attention the who time I was reading. I am looking forward to reading more of this story and more of your writings in the future.
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Reviewed By: LoAngel On: July 30, 2007 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a wonderful story line and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: June 25, 2007 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just great. The plot is still very tangled and mysterious, but you can the beginnings of how it will come together (personally my mind keeps yelling at me that Duo is some earthly version of the monkey king because of his weird age and how he kept trying to claim the stick, though everyone else's extra identities elude me). I just love this, including your portrayal of the characters and your highly original plot. Both are very complex and engaging (OCs and Relena included). I hope it all works out for everybody though in the end (especially Heero and Wufei).
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 15:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, Duo has some relation to this Sun Wukong person, doesn't he? Oh jeeze. And if Mingzhu knows about 'Fei and Heero...shit is gonna fly. Aw, no. Already I'm tense about this. And I can't help but feel sorry for Relena. I can't wait to hear the details about that ceremony for the dragon's acceptance. How interesting. I have a feeling that will explain a lot. And the explanation about why Quatre's empathy keeps hitting a wall when it comes to Trowa makes sense. I hadn't thought of the 'immunity' theory. Huh. And now that Trowa's built it up he's gonna have a hell of a time tearing it down. Those two, I swear. That's the problem with starting out as friends and trying to end up as something more. Quatre seems to have problems holding onto his anger against Trowa, btw. Lol. Oh, by the way, way back in chapter 35, Wufei promised Ling he'd call her back as soon as they reached their "destination". As a mother, she's got to be going crazy, because how long has it been? A couple of weeks at least. And Mingzhu and the council members don't seem to think too highly of her, so she's undoubtedly been left out of the loop, unless Quatre's been keeping her updated. Which I doubt, considering how busy they've all been. And somebody needs to kill Mariemaia. Quickly. I don't care about pain and torture right now, just GET RID OF HER!!! We can mutilate the body later. I hate her, I really do. Treize sucks at parenting, apparently. God knows what she would be like if she was an orphan like Duo. As for Duo, his taking the surname 'Maxwell' has to have something to do with a similar tragedy in his past, but it seems (according to those chapters where they were on L2) that Duo was actually there. I am still trying to puzzle that out. Hmmmm... I was starting to worry that you'd abandoned the story for a while, since you've been updating Evening the Odds. Thank you so much for the new chapter! It brightens up my life. Lol. Update again when you can, please!
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Reviewed By: Stray [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 14:14 EDT
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Ahahaha! Duo does kind of resemble a little monkey... *ducks*
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 13:07 EDT
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-blinks- wait....We're going to go into the story of the Monkey King are we? That's a whole nother string and a half of tales about the Monkey King or Son Goku. -Winces- Aye, this story seems to be getting very interesting very soon. -nods- that, and when you mentioned Son Goku it reminded me of Saiyuki. -grins- I love that anime. Anyway! I am curious to see what will happen next. Obviously Wufei can not marry Relena because he is in love ewith Heero. -fangirl squeal- But, that is probobly going to cause some major problems with Wufei's clan. -winces- Ohhh shit. And Mariemaia! Ahhhh! Kill her off! Let Duo take a knife to her snotty little face and make hamburger out of it! I really don't like Mariemaia. -nods- Alright, that is all I have to say at this moment. Good Work! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 09:31 EDT
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Been reading and enjoying this fic. Not much else to say, except I like it.
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Reviewed By: Mama123 On: June 23, 2007 09:06 EDT
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I really like Hilde...Wow she is so good...Please update soon!!^^
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 23:32 EDT
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I LOVE this story. Absolutely love it. There was never a boring chapter and that is amazing considering the length. I eagerly anticipate the many upcoming chapters.
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Reviewed By: chekiita [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 14:44 EDT
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i don't care how long it ends up being, I love this story too much! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Fight on, brave author!
Reviewed By: TShrieken [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have thoroughly enjoyed this fic. if it has to go over 60 chapeters, SO BE IT! One of my favorite fics is almost 150 chapers long. It is one of the best fan fics ever written, though this story could give it a run for it's money. CONTINUE THE STORY< NO MATTER HOW LONG IT ENDS UP BEING!!!
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Reviewed By: greenislovely On: May 30, 2007 01:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
with this story, i didn't even realize it was already on chapter 50. your style really emerses the reader into the plot and characters that length has no meaning. there has never been a dull moment in this story. thanks so much for continuing and can't read the rest!
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