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Reviewed By: lalaala On: July 27, 2007 17:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it wouldve been so cool if at the end of chapter 30, inuyasha drank the shot first and then kagome just madly threw it at the wall, smashing it into pieces.. BUT YEAH< GOOD JOB!
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Title: be safe!
Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 13:23 EDT
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i love the story! but i hope you are alright you said that you would be shipped out for read and then you stoped updating and that was about a year ago. i hope nothing bad has happened. keep up the great writeing work and i do hope everything is all right. be safe!
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii* On: July 09, 2007 00:23 EDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwwwwwwww...its been so long...please update...i was hesitent to read this but then when I started I couldnt stop so please update soon...i would like to hear some more of whats in store for these 2
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 01:59 EDT
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really like your story... is it almost ending?... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 01:58 EDT
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really like your story... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: Feh..
Reviewed By: Dragonson [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 03:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well first of all will you finish the bloody thing, don't start what you can't finish. Second you have a interesting style and interesting story that is original to yourself, leaving me to wonder why you didn't just write you're own novel with your own characters instead of taking an unneeded piggyback ride from Inuyasha. Also, I'm going to go out on a lib and say that you may never finish this and you may never even read this review and wile I respect your services the the armed forces I must say you leaving us with a very entertaining tale uncompleted is very similar to the actions of your own character. You have talent and I respect you for it, but I do not appreciate being left to dangle like a helpless kitten. All I can say is that I will be awaiting for your unliky completion of this story, but after a full year, I supose the odds of that are remote. God Bless.
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Reviewed By: fuckedxupxevxaddict On: June 19, 2007 05:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't updated in almost a year... I can't believe I got this far, and now I doubt you are even going to finish it. How. Gay. Is. That...? ....Very. Finish the damned story! lol. :] I love it!
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Reviewed By: fhkjhh On: June 03, 2007 21:09 EDT
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uumm when r u gna update?
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Reviewed By: Arellethram On: May 28, 2007 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two months, eh? That was about a year ago. But I really enjoyed reading your fanfiction while it was up. Really involving. But it's a shame that you don't write anymore. I would have liked to read the rest of it. If you update any more... email me at "sula_seilidair986" AT "yahoo" DOT "com". PS > You don't write at all bad, seeing as how sometimes some chapters were hard to read because you don't proofread.
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 02:19 EDT
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update soon!!!!
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: mia_rhane On: April 08, 2007 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! you're suck a great writer!!!!! and good luck in your basic training, I'll be looking foward to you're update! ^U^
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Title: tyler
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 21:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damnit write more ok luv the story
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Title: where r u!?
Reviewed By: Candy_luv05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 21:08 EDT
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where r u, its been forever!!! finish up the story plzzzzz love it!
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Title: where r u!?
Reviewed By: Candy_luv05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 21:08 EDT
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where r u, its been forever!!! finish up the story plzzzzz love it!
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Title: KIPU COME BACK!!!
Reviewed By: kaye_kay28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 14:50 EST
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D': wen're you going to get on and finish this story! it doesn't have to be ne thing extra spectacular. i juss like having read stories that end! LMAO. i really love this story. :] it's unique, i think. hehehe. & i love tha style that you write. but seriously. it's already march 2007!!! WHERE THA HECK HAVE YOU BEEN?!?!? ::cries::
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