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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Im so mad that you don't have the chapter out yet... lol, but its really good! I hope you continue it! I like how Nabiki is like a multi millionaire, seeing as how shes a hustler, i think you captured her true chracter. GOOD JOB!
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Reviewed By: miamaya854 On: June 27, 2007 15:26 EDT
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Wow, I love this story. I've read soooo many fanfics , I cant even keep track, but this is one of the few that I keep coming back to. PLEEEEEEEEZ update soon!
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 21:19 EDT
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i really hope you update this soon. Your keeping it true in a way to the manga/anime (the fiances and cat-fu nad such) yet also made the story your own. I love it. PLease update soon so i will know what happends.
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Reviewed By: Roja Cyd On: March 10, 2007 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, This was a really fun fanfic to read! It's a bit rare to find a decent Ranma fic where they're slightly older and more mature - a fic that has fighting AND lemons! Most seem to be one or the other. Nice work.
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Reviewed By: wingman0 On: February 26, 2007 18:27 EST
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glad to see you haven't completely abandoned this story. Hope to read more. Wingman
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Reviewed By: Wingman On: February 14, 2007 14:28 EST
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I love to see this storie finished. I hope you start working on it agian.
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Reviewed By: Yesman On: February 06, 2007 08:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story. I enjoyed it a lot and can't wait for more. Very well written and generally I hate Ranma/Akane fics but this one is an exception (probably because they met first in a different way and Ranma wasn't betrayed by Akane after their first meeting like it was in the canon story). Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 13:44 EST
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hmmm, alost 18 months since last update, on a story that seems, to say the least, quite interesting. Well, I want to read more (LEMONS ARE GOOD!) and to see more of Genma's fuck-ups. Not to mention, where is Nodoka in all of this? Anyway, on he lookout for more chapters, if they don't happen, that would suck. Anyway, laters.
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Reviewed By: Sakura2838 On: February 01, 2007 19:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aren't you gonna update at all?? I really like the story and I'd like to read the rest!!! Please tell us!!!
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Reviewed By: clavira123 On: January 23, 2006 12:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEEEE-EEEY! Why don't you update anymore? I like your story, but if you don't plan on continuing it, please let your readers at least KNOW!
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Reviewed By: thereviewergirl On: December 11, 2005 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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that was simply AMAZING !!! your story definitely has potential... and the lemons? they were HOT !! please please please!! update SOON !!!
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Title: sugestions/ did i spell that right
Reviewed By: eckobaby On: November 05, 2005 22:55 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic ^_^ i love everything about it and i have some suggestions(still dont know if i spelled that right)1.let akane cook GOOD!ranma cant cook forever and its bad if your boyfriend knows you cant cook 2.dont let her be pregnant let them be togather and in love for awhile^-^ young love 3.keep up the GREAT work this is one of the best fics i have ever read (oh and class of 08 rules)^-^ sorry just had to put it
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Reviewed By: Neon Ronin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 23:57 EDT
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Ah, the trials and tribulations of young love... I like the way you're integrating the abandonment issue into Ranma's character, it's not exactly canon but then this is an AU fic, so it works pretty well. Very nice, the way he dealt with his 'rivals' for her hand... and if I were writing this, I don't think Genma would have returned home. If he did he might make an excuse that Ranma was dead, and Nodoka might take it badly enough to make him fulfull the seppuku contract- and we all know how much Genma hates dying. I think Nodoka should turn up and hear the whole story from him and Akane; she'd probably understand better than some people might think. And Ranma could use a mother right about now. As for Soun... well, who can tell. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 13:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do like how you have put this together. Ilook forward to the next chapter when Ranma sees Akane teaching classes, and what he thinks about the dojo.
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Reviewed By: Indygodusk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 21:44 EDT
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I'm really enjoying this. The dialogue and descriptions are great. The lemons were very hot as well, phew. I like how you show RA as vulnerable people and yet strong at the same time. I really want to see Ranma go cat fist, and run to Akane, just to you know. I always love that sort of thing. Thanks!!
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