| "She's Like The Wind / The Power of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: Kittynobaka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this straight... all nine chapters now (hence the reason I have not reviewed before this) and its absolutely fantastic. There aren't many IY fanfics that keep my attention nowadays but this one has it. Keep up the good work. I espically love the first paragraph in chapter nine (the description of Miroku's fear at the dining table) suttle yet halarious.
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Title: ch2
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I always wanted to see Inu Yasha and Kagome go out while he was human and in her time too! I can't wait to read this! (If she can convince him)
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason I gave you a 5 for style of writing is only because I wanted to know exactly what Inu Yasha said to Kikyo. I think it could have been better developed. I wanted to know her reaction to what he said too, like describe their emotions body language and you know stuff like that increases the drama and tension and what not. I really like it other than that so far.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (not logged in) On: October 23, 2005 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply love it please update!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (not logged in) On: October 22, 2005 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pllease upddate this story cause' I love this story.
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Reviewed By: strdragon On: October 21, 2005 23:05 CDT
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I enjoyed your story. I like your take on Inuyasha and Kagome and this new relationship. I would like to point out that your use of italics for the dialog is confusing. I would suggest that you save italics for internal thoughts and use quotation marks for your verbal dialog. It will not disrupt your flow of writing, but make a clear distinction from internal and external action. Your story is very entertaining and I hope that you do continue to update when you are able. Good Luck and have fun writing!
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Title: you MUST write MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: Inu&Kag love is strong On: October 20, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my dear lord. this is the BEST!!!!!!!! i won't EVER stop reviewing if you keep on writing. this is so very very gooooooooooooood! mmm hm! i so want to know what contains in that book Kagome got. boy will Inuyasha die and go to heaven! maybe he can accidentally alone put on the tv and it turns out to be a little porn. i can just see his face now.(google eyes)more soon please! thankyou
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: October 19, 2005 10:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
great fic! i look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: SoutasSister [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 13:42 CDT
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Nice job. I see you agree with me about what Kikyou did when she sealed Inuyasha to the tree. Anyway, thanks for sharing your story with us. wj (aka SoutasSister) ----PS, if you let people who are not signed in review, you'll get more reviews. That's just a suggestion.
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