| "Girls Have Needs Too" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: raven angel of death On: October 19, 2006 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really cool. but i say make saske do more expiriments if you get my drift
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Reviewed By: SevAtin On: September 10, 2006 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story, and i loved kakashi- sensei's impeceble timing. i never imagined sasuke could be bi. props, and i love your work!
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Title: Gai
Reviewed By: Geminia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
What would be great and make this fic even more humorous would be if you wrote another chappie and made it about Gai's speech LOL Gemini
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Title: LMFAO Sasuke is bi OMFG!!
Reviewed By: 1337meister On: June 06, 2006 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it. You MUST write more of this. Perhaps a continuation of Chapter 1. I LOL'D at Kakashi's timing, but if you write a continuation, my suggestion is that you have Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke find a better secluded area and let them acctually experiment a little. That way the first chapter could be sort of like a teaser to get the reader hooked. Once again, marvelous job and keep writing!
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Title: OH YES!
Reviewed By: Ignorant Boy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must write an extended version of this fiction, I found it hilarious. Or you could write a continuation of the story to tell us what they were actually doing up all the way up to point where Kakashi came in (and wow, he wasn't late, O-O, or uhh... late as he usually is.) Anyway, Im just a big fan of your "Teamwork" series and I hope you continue to put out such great material. Back to the review, could you please (put in the great detail that I LOVE your work for) write out a side fic, that explains the events of what happened in that hour or two before Kakashi spoiled thier fun. Ooh! Ooh! Idea! Idea! Put the events in like some POV type thing. Example No.1 "Sakura remembering the events of that hour during some random meeting." Example No.2 "Naurto just spacing out during whatever he does in his spare time, and thinking about the events during that hour at the bridge." Example No.3 "Sasuke in the middle of training, decides to take a break, and ends up letting his mind wander (which is something I don't think Sasuke would ever do, but that's just me.) and go back to what happened during what he will call "the bridge incident." Example No.4 "You could probably cram all three of those ideas into a, I don't know, 4,000 word fic." There, I just wrote you a 0ne-thousand-six-hundred word review. It would be so freaking cool to have you use one or all of my ideas! PLEASE mention me in the continuation/side-fic of this story! That if you do cotinue it, which I hope you will! Now for my new trademark review ending-thing! ________________-------------_____________________ Your fan always, ~ Ignorant Boy. P.S What do you think I should close my reviews with? Your opinion matters! No.1 or No.2 And remember, this is supposed to go with my user name. What best describes my user name, No.1 or No.2? OPTIONS: No.1:"Huh, you say something?" ~Ignorant Boy No.2:"They say ignorance is bliss, they don't know the half of it." ~Ignorant Boy
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 10:06 CST
Comment/Review:
absolutely funny! i like how you write. your fics brighten my day. nice. but, one side effect though, i couldn't watch naruto now without imagining that these people actually immersed themselves in one hot orgy and called it team-building. sick, huh?
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Reviewed By: centenniallillith On: January 29, 2006 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fics, there always interesting and have some sort of plausable foundations, ^_^ in this fic i like how you made them gang up on sasuke, i din't think he'd do it otherwise >.< on that note i think your protraile of the characters is perfect to! kudos for making such an awsome one-shot!
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Reviewed By: DBC13 On: January 06, 2006 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i luv kakashi's timing there! LOL! never thought of Sasuke being bi... or Sakura being lesbian (although that might be b/c she's in luv with Sasuke in the anime)! LUV IT!!!
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Reviewed By: gossaem [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's funny, and keeps everything light and equal
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Title: hehehehehe
Reviewed By: wil e cayote On: December 12, 2005 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that sucks cock block for naruto. Kakashi the greatest timing in the world, funny about stuff being burned into his retinas he reads porn. ah well great writing cant wait to see more
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Title: haha fabulous
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 20:20 CST
Comment/Review:
You did good, keeping it silly, or else we would have had a lemon on our hands! Thoroughly adorable, I loved it and was totally lmao! ^-^
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Reviewed By: AnimeSiren On: November 05, 2005 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!
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Title: woah
Reviewed By: A anime fan girl (not logged in) On: October 23, 2005 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be the best naruto parody (i think it's one) that i have ever read ever in all of ever, but i did ever read one like this, it wouldn't be as good as this one... ever lol. Especially sasuke bein bi, oh man, that as funny lol. Keep up the good work! ^.^
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 13:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
*dies* Kakashi has such impeccable timing! XD I really enjoyed this.
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Reviewed By: yurathewicked [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 11:39 CDT
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this is great! as usual, your writing style is flawless and your grammar is impeccable. thanks for such an entertaining read. too bad there isn't any smut... but i think it wouldn't have worked well if you had included descriptions of their making out, it would have turned too serious. maybe another time, neh?
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