| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: RhiannonoftheMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 18:53 CST
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Great story - the interplay between Bas and Gunnar is hilarious. I noticed that Gunnar mentioned that Bas' dad wouldn't be happy about fighting in the open...something like that...wonder if Sydnie will pick up on it.
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 13:58 CST
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so is this "bounty hunter" really going to be the one Gin sent after the three misfits? lol I can't wait to see what happens
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 07:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I'm finally able to review after comuter complications. I just want to say this story has now taken the number one spot on my fav Purity story. I think i said before way back in 2 and 3 that i enjoy your original charcters stories better then the cannon charecters. Sydnie is my num 1 chick and i cant wait to find out what her past is like. Hope bas can find out and help her. Untill next chapter
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Title: Loving it!!
Reviewed By: Angelswrath [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 23:57 CST
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Great Chapter!! I love the word play between those two. And the sexual tension is ridiculous. Keep it coming!! :)
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I can't wait to see who's following them! Is it really bounty hunters or the person the Gin called? Please update soon!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: animeloca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, What a wonderful story. You have me so hooked. I can't wait until they get together!
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Title: GAAAAAHHHH!!!!
Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 17:56 CST
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Awesome chapter!!! Though I can't help feeling like every chapter you give out is a cliffhanger. Not because it really is, but because I want to read more so very, very badly!! Can't wait to uncover the many secrets you've left us!!! Love you, Sue!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 17:32 CST
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Do I sense action forming? Can't wait lol!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY SARI-15!! Loved the one-shot you did, Sue!! Hmm...I wonder if it's bounty hunters following them, or allies?
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 17:22 CST
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oh damn. that's quite a cliffy there... ;) great chapter! ugh! i can't believe that bas hasn't told her yet! she's gonna be so pissed. ;) and what about yasha?? is he coming to save them? oh... and who's starting up the Gunner fangirl club? ;) gunnar: "watch out bas! they're pulling over... getting out... wait. girls? why are girls following us?" *girls attack car* gunnar & bas: *scream*
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 14:24 CST
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wow. okay, so being followed, gotcha. errr...was this a slip...or...did Sydnie just not hear it. "and I'm pretty sure that your dad wouldn't like it, either" ...is that ever going to be questioned? i mean...i guess it's average enough, but something to raise an eyebrow to. i loved the evasion tactics with the last name incident. very well done!!!!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 06:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your saying your going to do 11 purity stories. Thats just ammazing. All I need now is some free time in the future to read them. Let me just get out my planner.... haha. Have good day.
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Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter!!! The flashback was nice, finding out what happened when Gunnar got Syd's picture. I love Evan!!!!!!! I guess Sydnie just does that to guys. I bet it makes it hard to be around her, in more ways than one! Very nice. I really like Cain and Gin resurfacing in the story. They're one of my favorite couples, so seeing them again is nice. Please update again soon!!! Oh, and I read your one-shot for Sari. Mediaminer was being stupid, and not letting me review. It was a very good one-shot. I've only read a little of those manga chapters, but it was interesting to read a fic based after those chapters. Thank you!!! Again, Please update Phantasm!!! ~Kat
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Reviewed By: BakaBokken [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just spent the last... who-knows-how-many-hours reading this, and WOW. I must say that once again, you have managed to enchant me into devouring yet another of your incredibly-written works. I love the plot line this time around, and your original characters are just as amazingly well-rounded and fleshed out as ever. I'm greatly enjoying the ride, and I can't wait to read what happens next! I'll have to go back and read Purity 4 now (since I haven't read it all yet, yikes!) while I'm waiting for more of this one! Hehe. Awesome work as always, Sue - and thank you SO much for sharing it with us. We love you! ^^
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