| "The 1st Son Daughter???" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Title: It's About Time!
Reviewed By: Idris Dag-Ellams (not logged in) On: June 02, 2006 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol we forgive you for the story update. Lol I was getting worried (a long wait for the udpdate...hey that ryhmed!). Lol Minako is so cute "Oh wait don't tell me..." keep it up!! :D
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love the new chaps!!! Wow, Trunks likes Minako! Cool! I didn't expect Gohan to show up, so that was a bit of a surprise. I love when Trunks blushes! And I'm glad Minako is finally happier. Stupid schoolkids...
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Title: OH YEAH
Reviewed By: Animeheart- not signed in [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YAY!!! I remember that line from the pic. Great Job!!! Kasumi is an ass. That fake bitch... I'm glad Minako is finally cheering up. OMG I cannot wait until you update. My chap 5 for FD and 6 for DB mew will be up soon, promise. ^-^ Great job!
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Title: write more
Reviewed By: lil rin On: April 18, 2006 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more soon please. I want to see kasumi get a nice butt kicking.
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Title: update please
Reviewed By: lil rin On: April 13, 2006 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a fun and imaginative story. Keep it going! :P
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Title: UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!!!!!
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH!!!!WHY'D YOU STOP! I WANTED TO READ MORE...*SOBS* It was really sad...I feel bad for Minako...and Kasumi...is such a BITCH! I really don't like people like her! Poor Minako, Trunks...I really didn't like Goten i this chap. He was acting like an ass. Still fantastic work! Update soon!!!
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Title: No!!
Reviewed By: Idris Dag-Ellams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 16:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
No!! Why did you stop there?! Ahh!! keep on going I want to know what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: Animeheart not signed on On: March 30, 2006 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked that it was longer than usual. So Trunks is starting to like Minako...interesting...and what does that mean, he's going to leave for good if he helps Minako...very very interesting... anyway, great chap! ^-^
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Title: Me!!!
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the fic! Minako is so determined. I like that. And Trunks blushes alot *hugs* that's cute. Vegeta ALWAYS thinks he's so 'smart' huh? I always like the parts when Goten thinks Trunks and Minako are gonna do something perverted. It's funny. Keep the GREAT fic going, please! ^-^
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Title: it's me again
Reviewed By: Idris Dag-Ellams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ha Vegeta is soo mean and Minako is so clueless "Whats handsome" she's so cute keep on going with the story!
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Minako is so clueless. So it's a love triangle thingy? I love those. I've been meanig to ask, is Kasumi just putting up a fake act? Just curious, cuz she seems phony to me. Anyway, it was a great chap!
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Title: I'M SUCH AN IDIOT.
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 18:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry, I meant chap 18.
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Title: Back again
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a nice ending to chap 8. I liked how it was, when Bulma was in a "flashback" phase. Ok, now I'm off to go see what minako looks like!!!^^
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Title: oooooh.....
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Trunks in trouble? what's gonna happen? WHAT?? Answer me, dammit!! Please!!! I must know or I will DIE!!!! Ok, my rant is over. Anyway, uh, great chap...
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Title: Continue!!!
Reviewed By: Animeheart(Not logged in right now) On: March 18, 2006 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the next 4 chaps (Yes, my computer crashed.) You are such a great writer! It's really funny too! Please update soon! ^^
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