| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 09:39 PDT
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Wow, so much in one chappie! Cain can sure manipulate any situation, ne? Hmm, maybe there's some top secret info, or something about Jillian's parents, on the bio-chip... Hope we'll find out soon, 'cause suspense is killing me. ~leeksandmisosoup~ P.S. Another family reunion chappie coming up? Like in P5 when Morio, Mikio, Bas, and Gunsie were goofing off with Isabelle? I'll cross my fingers.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 08:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: haha
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 19:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha go gavin..by the way, the whole door thing...yea its hott!! great chapter!! cant wait til thursday!!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 19:07 PDT
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That Jillian just full of suprises Haha. Anyway looking foward to next post and finfing out what they were looking for.
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 18:18 PDT
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Yay! Gavvie saved the day! And I think Eli is a girly name... Great fight scene, though. Can't wait for next chappie!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 17:06 PDT
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WOOOOO!! Kicked some serious ass! Wonderful. I love to see them fight. Jilli is so cute. Wonderful chapter. :D
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 16:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ALRIGHT!!! GO GAVIN!!! GO CAIN!!! It's great to have them in action. This was a absolutely GREAT chapter. Jilli is just too much...after all that and she gets aroused too...LOL. Heck with that description of his manliness (demonliness?) I'd get aroused too.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 15:11 PDT
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Hmm...I wonder how many more hero points Gavin gets for that lol. Yes! Cain in action; always wanted to see him actually fight someone, since Cal was a coward; loved it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 11:45 PDT
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Another awesome chapter. Who can blame Jilli for getting hot with Gavin going all macho in front of her. I'm really excited for Desideratum!!!! Thank you for updating that Sue!!!
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Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 10:49 PDT
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YEAH!!!!! Cain kicked A$$!!! WOOT!!! lol. Anyways thanks for updating desideratum again. I've been wondering if that one would ever continue. Thanks for writing all your stories. Ja ne, Andrew
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 21:13 PDT
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I'm expressing my frustration and other rainbow of emotions in an impressive variety of illogical words varying in volume from both ends of the spectrum. Yes, this story has gotten THAT good. (Not that I'm surprised by that.) And I'm stuttering so much, I sound like Gavin! W-I-Sue!!! Yep. I really hate your cliffhangers. But then again, the line between love and hate is barely discernible. Much love. Caitlin
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, this story is great. I absolutely love it, especially since now Gavin gets to strut his stuff. Use the force, Gavvie! ^_^
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 19:02 PDT
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Woah! Let's just hope Gavin gets outta there unharmed, er... not harmed much and that InuYasha and Cain hurry up and get there. We all know Evan will live to die another day, lol. I was wondering, in Evan's Purity story, will it explain why Evan's the way he is? You know, his bad boy, dope-smokin', name-changin', asshole (slightly) personality? 'Cause I suddenly remembered when Bas accused Evan of deserting the family and whatnot. Anywho, I'll be happy when Gavin and Jillian get out of there and have had all twenty or more pups! ///leeksandmisosoup///
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. Yay finally a chapter with fighting in it. Woot. I hope Gavin kicks Eli's ass. Muahahahhahaha! *ahem*
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 14:46 PDT
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Action! Yes, love it! Man, I can't wait to read this next fight coming up! Wonderful work, Sue!!!!!
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