| "Subjection, Subjugation" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: LOVE IT!!!! On: May 01, 2006 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!! Update really soon.Poor inuyasha:(
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 18:03 CDT
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A revision? It needed no revision!
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Title: A revision?
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What was done different? O_o?
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please update!!! >.< Me wants moree!!
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: April 17, 2006 21:31 CDT
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Kagome has always warned him about being tested on...and now...*cries* Please let him be saved! I am actually crying!
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Reviewed By: SilenceoftheHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inu. Poor, poor little hanyou. Tries to save the world, and now we can't even let him drown in his own blood. I've noticed the lack of warnings, but secretly I'm hoping that maybe big bro will show up to save him. But any way this plays out, this is a great story. Thank you -Silence-
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 21:05 CDT
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poor Inu. evil ayame looking docter!
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Reviewed By: Kitsama Rising [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 18:22 CDT
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Oh jeez... that was slightly disturbing, but I liked it a lot.
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Title: Great work!
Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even if you were just to keep this as a one shot,I really enjoyed reading it...I liked the different angle of this story...Can't explain it,but it had a certain pull..I had to finish it in one setting..(almost making me late for work-lol) You are very talented..Thanks for another great read!!
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Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Insiteful (sp?), disturbing, well written, disturbing..did I mention disturbing? Even so, this is a very good fic and I hope you continue it. Don't mind me if I hope Inu gets saved eventually. Why do I get the feeling something sadistic is going to happen to the cat and fox? *shivers*
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Reviewed By: SilenceoftheHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Poor Inu. I absolutely love the poor little hanyou, and for some twisted reason, I love seeing him in horrendous situations. I justify this sadistic quirk by saying I like to see the broken hanyou put back together again because, let's face it, the boy deserves some serious loving. This chapter is both stylistically beautiful and emotionally engaging. The reader cannot help but empathize with Inuyasha because, in all honesty, this is a likely situation of what humanity would do if we ever got our hands on him. Thank you so much for giving me this gift to improve my day and many more.
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh, this story was so sad but so likely accurate in the event of such a thing occurring. I almost cried! Excellent author, I look forward to more of her work!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely agree with nique. The first chapter was great, completely keeping my blood coursing, infact the reading adrenaline started to make me wonder if my pulse would ever slow. Though it was very angst, I thought you did a *very* good job with it all. Not many people can write such empowering work without sugar-coating it or just flat out gore and guts. Fantastic job, you're a talented writter and this piece makes me want to read what other parts you've written. 10 out of 10.
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Title: subjection
Reviewed By: nique [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
While alot of your fanfics are (how can i put this?) very angsty they're unique and thats what ilike abou this story. it really kept me on the edge of my seat.I don't think anyone else woold have had the guts to write this staory and thats what i like about you. Please continue writing this story and keep up the good work^_^
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