| "Relationships" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2002 08:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Cute fic, I 100% approve! I'm looking forward to seeing the drama unfold once everyone arrives and the boys try to give the ol' parental units the slip....~EM |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 31, 2002 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, boys will be boys. Good chap. Btw, could you write a chapter on Veggie Weggie? We all know what an anti-social person he is, and I'd like to see his reaction to another "blasted human get together". Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 31, 2002 03:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Roshi is just plain hopeless!! |
Reviewed By: dark_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2002 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
rofl....that was a funny chapter ~dark_angel |
Reviewed By: dark_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2002 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha...Roshi is such a hentai....i can't wait for everyone to arrive at the picnic. be sure to update soon. Ja ne! ~dark_angel |
Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Curse you to hell for not finishing! *begins to bash her head into monitor* Damn it damn it damn it! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2002 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
rolmbo, Well, I didn't see THAT coming! Roshi. lol, I even remember that 'panty' scene with Bulma they tried to say was a 'stomach' scene on Toonami. lol Yeah, right.
Your brother's reading these? EEP! And here I thought I was only embarressing myself in front of you!
Give your brother my humblest apologies. It was actually Gohan's--um personality, that caused me to like Chibi Trunks. Chibi Trunks sharing my opinions of Gohan made me respect the little tike (well, that and the fact that he's so Vegeta-ish, and the whole he kicks butt thing, etc)
Poor Roshi. I like how Vegeta just looks at him...That's so what I would do. ChiChi, though. I did see that one coming...btw, does Veg know about the panty scene?
Oh, hey! You reminded me of something! Go look in the fanfics. There's one where Vegeta does catch onto Roshi's 'attraction' to Bulma...funny. heehee.
(sigh) gonna go finish the fic! So many fics to read though!
On with the next! Goten Trunks? |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! Look at me! I'm back into the reviewing spirit! teehee, I just finished a very descriptive fight scene for Veg in one of RPG's and I'm so--thrilled. I got to kick some elven butt! (sigh) Too bad Veg's evil in this...
Anyways, I like this! Still! M/T? (sigh) If you must...at least it's better than T/P, but still....I always saw Goten/Marron and Pan/Ubuu or something like that... Anyways, do continue, this looking good. Next one is Goku? Goten? Gohan? Wait, it's funny, not dorky right? Scratch Gohan. lol
(sigh) I'm going to say, I WANT VEGETA! (no, you hentai, not that way! I DO NOT like him that way believe it or not. He's too bulky. I'm picky about chests and stuff and while his arms are perfect, his chest is too big...he's got bigger boobs than me. :( roflmbo nevermind. One reason why I like Shakira's song if you get the reference...anyways)
Keep it up. (blushing becuase of what she's typed...) There, now you have something to get me on... loins.... |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2002 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I "think" I liked it and I "think" you should contiune it. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2002 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What do you think I'm going to say? Of course it's gfood! I love your take so far! Looking from Yamcha's pov is not only challengeing, but rare.
Hey, you trying to be like me and tackle more than one fic at a time? lol, it's fun!
BTW, just so you know. I reread one of my own stories and came across a word used quite seriously and roflmbo. I can't even go food shopping without lol and scaring people. So, you aren't the only person stuck on 'loins'. lol You're never going to get past that one with me! lol
Continue! Pwease! |
Reviewed By: storm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2002 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! |
Reviewed By: KC writer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2002 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nifty. Nice seeing a non-bastard Vegeta for a change. :) KC |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 31, 2002 03:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey JB, looks like I missed this one when you first put it up (must've been when I was in the hospital-don't ask). Good chapter. I like Yamucha's pov on how he screwed up his chances with Bulma. You know what they say "ya snooze, ya lose. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 21, 2002 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO!!! Thankyouthankyouthankyou!! I was waiting for Veggie's pov and you delivered. You got his attitude pegged 100% (it's almost like you know him). Definitely worth the wait. Great jop JB! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 31, 2002 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
18's pov seems bittersweet, who can blame her. I think she and Krillan are so cute together and good for each other. |
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