| "Walking Through Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: YangofYin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! You're back! ^_^ This is going to be really good! Here's hoping Inuyasha can see past a naked Kikyo! I believe he can. *lol* I just read the newest chapter too. I'm not going to hold my breath that she stay's dead. We'll see, though it seems to be the real thing. Can't wait for the next..anything you put out!! Yang
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Reviewed By: wackywisher On: July 10, 2006 17:38 CDT
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Oh my, Kikyo certainly is a sneeky miko! Poor Kags, I hope she lives!!! If it was a choice between Kag and Kikyo, my coins go to Kags!!!
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Title: keep going!
Reviewed By: anime RuLeS u all [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT WORK!! though i hate kikyo this is a really good fan fic so far and i can't wait till you add the new chapter! geep up the fabulous job!!!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 08, 2006 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LW, I have read your work before and all of your stories seem to be very high quality to me. I was thrilled to see that you were doing a new IxK tale. (My favorite pair because the characters work so well together in any story.) You went straight for the heart of the reader in this chapter one; and what an e-vil cliffy at the end. Lead on oh talented one. I am here for the duration of the ride. Thank you for sharing! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 18:23 CDT
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I can't belive in it!!! I was thinking about a plot much like this. I'm no author ( i'm brazilian, so I would write in portuguese, but I don't have time or experience for this). I was wondering about Kagome death after the final battle (she would give up her soul to Kikyou so inuyasha would not go to hell and be happy with the miko) and Kikyou becoming alive. But Inuasha would wither without the girl and so Kikyou wold use the jewel to restore de girl's soul (just a summary of my imaginary story) So now I'm very happy to find a plot so similar. I can't wait to read more, my dear. Go ahead!! I'm sure it will be great! A warm hug from Brazil, Lere
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Reviewed By: Tiasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a wonderful start! I have always enjoyed your stories and I am extremely happy to see that you are working on another one. :) I can't wait to read the rest.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 15:03 CDT
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Lara, please tell me the 'IxK' in your summary means Inuyasha/Kagome and not Inuyasha/Kikyou. I love reading anything you write, but Inu/Kik is pushing it for me. ^_^ Anyway, great first chapter. I think you have Inuyasha and Kagome in character pretty well. I like it so far and I hope to see your update soon. :)
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