| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Title: Ch 29
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 06, 2007 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry if I repeat myself, but you do such nice work! It made my evening, to get to read such a well written new chapter. The flow was great as usual. A lot of interesting facts are starting to come together. Where will the story go next? Thank you for such wonderful entertainment, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 19:03 EST
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great update! can't wait to read the next chap!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 18:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww...griffin was so sweet in this chapter! now if he would just be like that around isabella! i loved that chappy and i cant wait until u update : )
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 09:59 EST
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Great chapter! I love Maria, she's funny! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 03:45 EST
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Ahahaha; I love Maria, she's too funny! It is kinda true though; husbands do sometimes give their wives appliances for Christmas presents lol. Hmm....so, when are Attean and Maria going to take this trip to Maine? Lol.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: March 05, 2007 23:28 EST
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I know this ahs nothing to do with this story, but whatever happened to Yukitora, the cat that Kichiro had? This has me very curious.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 20:18 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! I love how Maria thinks that Bitty is fat and has big feet!! (LOL) Griffin should watch what he says around his overprotective "parents". Jewelry huh...I can't wait to see what kind he gets her. Update soon please because I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 19:50 EST
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love the chapter and cant wait for the next one!! (the rest of my review never posted) WHHAAT!!! im soo confused...
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Title: aww
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 19:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that is soooo KAWAIIIIII!!!!! he wants to buy her a gift awww hahaha >_< soorry im in a weird mood right now...lol but as always
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 18:27 EST
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whoa can't wait to see what Griffen ends up buying heehee
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Title: Me too!
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 17:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's my birthday too, and I was so thrilled to get more "Avouchment"! And now the rest of the story is coming back to the surface again! Yeah! Griffin is entirely too cute, especially for an "old" youkai! Always looking forward to more! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Midnight Riddle On: March 05, 2007 16:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My birthday happens to be today, and to come home and have a new chapter of this story uploaded was the best birthday present. Keep up with great work!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chappy! i'm ready for griffin to realize he loves isabella and act on his feeling! i love this story thou. update soon!!
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Title: Bad puppy! LOL
Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 13:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea just like a pup. But I think its adorable that she cares enough to want him to experience the things shes had growing up, family, friends, unconditional love and happiness. Thats the work of a true friend well in her case maybe just maybe more lol
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: February 28, 2007 13:16 EST
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adorable! and also: richard dean anderson is still hot. ;)
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