| "A Story Retold" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Name Game On: September 09, 2002 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I see is your own biased point of view with regards to the character( Miaka and Yui). Writer like you will never learn when to get rid of your own biased point of view. |
Reviewed By: AniDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2002 12:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
*twitches* Must.... Have... More..... This is getting really good! I wanna know what happens neeeeeext! |
Reviewed By: AniDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 20:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wai! Wai! Wai! This is getting good! ^^ I love how Yui named her daughter Yuiren. I hope you write more soon! |
Reviewed By: AniDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good! Except just to informe you, it's Taka, not Tama. (Tama is actually the name of Mitsukake's cat...) And also, Taiitsukun, not Tytskun. BUT other then that and a few spelling/grammar/typo errors, the fic's great! Very original concept! I can't wait to read more! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Katrina Kadabra [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 10:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
*tee-hee* Okay, I get the hint. I'm glad you guys are enjoying it,though, and I want to apologize for such long pauses in between each chapter. In truth, I have actually written a lot more to this story than what you see here, but I don't write the chapters in order all the time, thus there can be long delays when I go to post the chapters in their chronological order. But thanks so much for being patient with me. I hope you find this story worth your while when it's finally done. |
Reviewed By: Trool On: June 18, 2002 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's not fair. You said this didn't end in a clifhanger..... Ohh well. You need more...much more. Really good so far though. Once the intro part got done everything just felt very good. I really got into the story. YAY. But you got to write more soon. |
Reviewed By: Rika On: May 24, 2002 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
When's the next chapter going to be out?!! |
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