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Reviewed By: sandracddy On: April 01, 2018 16:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much... I loved this story, really. me encanto todo,
me ha hecho reir, llorar, emocionarme, odiar a mustang por
momentos, ha estado genial¡¡ y no puedo
esperar para leer la secuela. me
encanta¡¡ ya que imagino que hara Ed
cuando se entere, seguro que lo mata jajaja y muero por leer el
encuentro entre mustang y winry, cuando el sea Fuhrer... bueno, me
voy a leer la secuela. Gracias nuevamente :')
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Title: my eyes are burning like crazy!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 15:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY HELL MS RYOKO BLUE!!!! fantastic fic!! i luv it soooooo much!! it made me cry so many times and EVERYONE (and i mean EVERYONE) was in character!!! The relationship between Roy and Winry was so well written!! I loved your story. If you want, you could take a look at my stories, but their horrible. I mean, the Fullmetal Alchemist one is going horrible so far, and the Yu Yu Hakusho one is picking up speed. But dang, your fic is really good. I'm starting to read your sequel!! and btw: i laughed so hard at how you ended feel/shame/heal. Ed.....ya gotta love him. :) anyway, thank you so much for writing such a wonderful fanfic and i hope you continue. I hope your writing career goes well - you certainly have the talent for it. But you know what really bothers me? Some fanfic writers (like yourself and Terri Botta and Resmiranda and people like that) are SOOOO much better writers than the crap i see marketed in the general public. Why the hell are they making the big bucks?? *grrrr* Point is, your fic is awesome!! :) bai bai!!
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 06:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just gave a dreamy sigh. This is the 4th or 5th time I'm reading Feel Me, Shame Me, Heal Me. I can't get enough of it! I'd like to thank you again for writing such a fabulous fanfiction.
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Title: God Almight What a Ride!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Alaskanbeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 04:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never had such a ride in my life, running from cold to hot hot hot!! and I mean HOT I didn't know a woman :O} could take so many cold showers, I could not put this story down I stayed up two days and nights I just had to find out what was going to happen. I hope you continue this story and Paaaleze let Roy and Winry stay together, it would be to damn heart breaking for them not to. Just saw your sequel to this story and am off to read it now. Please continue to write you have such a Wonderful talent for it.
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Reviewed By: xxfujixfuuxx On: March 02, 2007 20:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. It stuck an emotion in me. Maybe because I experienced something similar... well not exactly the same but similar with a guy. I just love it! I'm anticipating what you'll write in the sequel. BTW, the sequel is already great!
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 18:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word: "wow!". Though I'm still in almost, well shock I guess you could say, that this whole adventure is over, I'm glad..no that's an understatement, I'm completely thrilled that I've had a chance to experience this story from the beginning. Never before this writing have I read a fic with so much emotion that wasn't lost amidst the scenes of "smut" and whatnot. As I predicted in my earlier review you did indeed close the story wonderfully, providing just enough information for a satisfing ending while still leaving room for a sequel. (Which by the way, I believe to be the greatest literary achievement known to man, because without the sequel crazed fanfic readers, such as myself, would be completely lost at the end of 23 chapter stories such as this one.) Needless to say, I can't wait to see where this is going to go with Ed and Al back in the picture so by all means sequel-away! Thanks for providing me with entertainment in the form of excellent fanfiction for the duration of this story! (I just really can't get over how well and in depth Roy's character seemed to become in just that short amount of time, but anyway...) That very last scene with Roy looking out the window sticks so vividly in my mind and I'm definitely going to have to recomend this to others who share my love for FMA fanfiction! Congrats on a story magnificently depicted!
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Reviewed By: Mitsuyo On: February 23, 2007 22:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyment factor should be 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++infinity~! I loved your fanfic. It's absolutely brilliant. I was so engrossed in the story that I didn't pay attention to my job! (cashier at a restaurant. xD I used a laptop) Anyway, Roy's emotions were wonderfully played out. The episode where Winry got kidnapped was so amazing. The emotions were expressed so...so...real! I felt his blinding anger and this pool of emotions raging on! I love this story~ I don't think i'll ever get tired of it.
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Title: *tear*
Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This IS sad that its coming to an end, though I'm sure you will do a great job of closing it and not leaving us readers hanging! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 14:04 PST
Comment/Review:
Travin is a lucky SOB! Roy could/should have toasted that idiot! But, then Roy would have been no better than the Walkers, so the near death beating is good enough...for now!
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Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer(logged out) On: February 10, 2007 10:13 PST
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travin got off easy. i'm just glad to see that every thing worked out, although, i knew that it would, i just didn't know how... i still say travin got off easy, very easy. he's just lucky roy didn't bar-b-que him. :grins: that would have been nice. bar-b-que him but not enough to kill... just enough to burn him and make him feel pain for the rest of his days.... :grins: anyways, another great chapter. keep up the great work and update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer(logged off) On: February 02, 2007 21:43 PST
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:screams: nooooo!!!! a cliff hanger??? kami, i hate those!!! :sniffles: i'm seriously sitting on the edge of my computer chair. i'm totally hooked on this fic. i can't wait for the next chapter. i hope those scum-bag Walkers get what's coming and due to them! keep up the excellent work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 19:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, so I am literally on the edge of my seat! will Winry get away? will she & Roy be able to keep their secret from getting further exposed? will Travin "get his"? and that sister of his...she could use a good smack! keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: katiesamurai On: February 02, 2007 11:42 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for writing this. It is my most favorite fanfiction ever! I can't wait for what happens next! And the way it's going is awesome! eep!
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Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 21:49 PST
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another beautiful chapter. keep up the great work. can't wait for the next one. update soon.
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 21:30 PST
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Ohh boy. Don't piss Roy off, he go all mocho on your ass little boy.... hehhe. .very cool update. Can't wait for the next! ^_~
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