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| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: Inuwhisperer On: January 22, 2008 10:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn good story and very well written. The reader can almost feel the pain and humiliation brought on the major character. I definitely am looking forward to more chapter updates.
| Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 20:09 PST
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phooey, well, sooner or later i had to come to the end of what you had posted. i just hope that you update soon. *stretches neck* let's see now...i read all 26 chapters, excluding the yaoi, including the author notes in less than two days. wow, that's a personal record. *grins* your beta is awesome, so i send my compliments to her as well. great story line, and great plot. i want to know what inuyasha's gonna do. i certainly hope that he doesn't go after uchuu too much, although, knowing him, it's fight first ask questions later. let's hope kagome gets there quickly enough. well, i am sitting on edge waiting for the next update. congrats on all your awards. FL
| Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 18:13 PST
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i wonder how she's gonna live if she sees sesshomaru in her dreams every night? im ok with it. but then again i dont have a friend with a half brother he dispises and am dreaming about him. pity,pity,pity. ~sessh+kagome- i(though sessh said she) dont (sessh said doesnt) need ur pity. ~ tba- wat ever. update soon. ~TBA~ bye!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~TBA~
| Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 10:46 PST
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okay, so we've got a masso-sadist relationship going on here between asuza and iku. *shakes head and shudders* disgustingly freaky. FL
| Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 18:01 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am beginning to think you have a large sadistic streak to keep Sesshoumaru and Kagome is such turmoil for so long. At least Kagome has figured out who her lover probably is, although that brings a whole new set of problems. Of course I could not figure out Sesshoumaru's logic of how he was going to be her anonymous lover and then come to woo her as himself--Sesshoumaru. I guess he could drop hints of conversations or events that only he would know, but couldn't he have worked out a code or something with Kagome in advance. They are still apart and I am pouting. I will have to rely upon Uchuu to get them together as you are becoming unreliable. Jean.
| Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 21:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*screams* How could you just stop there?! T^T Kagome was on the right track, and Uchuu & Co. have finally made it to Inuyasha's Forest. *le sigh* Well, at least the story's gaining speed. Hopefully, we'll get through this confrontation, Uchuu and Kagome's happy reunion and the talk without much incident. ^^ Sooo~ I really hope Kagome comes to some sort of decision about Seeshomaru (preferably one that doesn't make her sick to her stomach and/or go into a hyperventilating fit when she think about him). *beats sneaky writer's block away* Please update when you caa~n. ^^ JA MATA~! ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
| Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 19:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Poor Taikimaru! *hugs him* You are so mean to make him stand through that (he didn't even get to sit)! = [ The lemon was... interesting. The only things I can say are, 1) Hyuuga's a very lucky monkey, and 2) His wives are very patient. In any case... As always, great chapter. Wonder what'll happen when Shippo and Kagome heard over to Sesshomaru's? You wouldn't have them pass through what's-her-name's village so her uncle could cause trouble... would you? >.> Though you would, of course, have Uchuu arrive around the same time and surprisingly greet Kagome. *hint* Well, whatever you decide, I'll be looking forward to the next update. I'm gonna continue catching up now. *wavies* Ja matta! ^^ ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
| Title: Another chapter so soon?!
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 15:36 PST
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Well, I msu say that I was quite pleased to find another chapter up even though I hadn't expected it. As for the story itself... Kagome FINALLY started putting 2 + 2 together, huh? I have to tell you - the relationships between your 4 OC's, Sumiho, Uchuu, Yumiko, and Saburo, are great. Not only are they fabulous OC's, but they go together so well. I'm excited to see the next chapter - I have no doubt that Inuyasha and Kagome will indeed go to battle with Hyuuga. The question remains, how will Kagome react when she finds out that Sesshoumaru will be there? I send many thanks to you and Risa for getting this out so quickly - if she didn't work through her pain we wouldn't have this great chapter on our hands! So thanks, both of you! 'Til next time! ~PB
| Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 14:11 PST
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This is getting even better. I can't wait to read how Sesshoumaru convinces Kagome it was him. Update soon!
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 12:26 PST
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Oh! You updated! Joy! ...I'm sorry that I haven't really been reviewing, but I've been reading all the chapters, and I just can't wait until Sesshomarou and Kagome get back together. Oooh... *squeals*
| Title: How Sad
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 10:54 PST
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I felt so bad for Sesshomaru in this chapter. He seems to be suffering greatly without Kagome and Uchuu is an absolute prince to give him the respect he deserves in recognizing his suffering and giving him consideration. I'm also glad that she's starting to realize that maybe he was the one and her opinion of him is changing somewhat. I'm not sure if my comments were one of the ones that confused you. The story is so layered and complex that a lesser writer usually collapses under the weight of it and abandon the story and it's such a wonderful story that I was only trying to be supportive. I apologize if I confused you.
| Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 22:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am always so delighted to see that you have updated this story and when I read it I am never disappointed. This was an exceptionally good chapter. I am surprised that Kagome is figuring it out so quickly, but I am actually kind of relived. It always bothers me when a character who is obviously intelligent blatantly ignores clues to some mystery and doesn't figure it out until much later than they could have. Hopefully, Kagome having figured out that it is possible, if not highly likely that Sesshoumaru is her lover, things will go smoother and be less traumatic for her and she can began helping Sesshoumaru though his troubles. I feel kind of bad for Yumiko, and I would be supremely pissed if I was her too... I just hope that Sumiho is able to help her and dispel some of the damper that the forced aspect of the marriage has put on Yumiko and Saburo's developing relationship. I was also wondering just how Inuyasha pulled his probably not quite healed carcass away from his friends to go chasing a possible threat nearing the village and why did they let him go alone? I suppose in the next chapter you might hive the rest of the company bursting out behind him, but it did set off my warning bells that it may not be Inuyasha... but Naraku is dead and you never mentioned a shape shifter in the story... so... I guess I'll just wait lol. I really wish sometimes that I kept notes on little facts like that and how things happened somehow connected to may favorite stories. I read so many that it's easy to forget some details in them. For instance I totally forgot what state Sesshoumaru's left arm is in in your story line and now I am going to have to go back to remind myself... but I probably won't forget again. Anyway, I thank you that you write such a wonderful story and choose to share it and I can hardly wait to read more of the results of your genius.
| Reviewed By: angleofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 20:14 PST
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this chap was great! please keep up the amazing story. i can not wait to see how they all act around each other!
| Title: Only you
Reviewed By: sesscat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 10:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only you could have pull that off. That was alot of pleasing going on in that last chapter. Damn King Hyuuga, do you think he got enough? LOL! WOW, that was a great. I felt tried after just read it... :p I hope that Sesshoumaru and Kagome can out do them. I cannot wait the see what happens next. Great job as always...
| Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 11:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It makes sense to send Uchuu as an Ambassador. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens when he sees what Sesshoumaru looks like. As far as the Monkey King is concerned, damn, 16 wives--all at the same time (or nearly). I have to admit I did not think anyone could write such a scene, but you did. Of course logic pops up and I think, wouldn't many of those wives feel lost in the shuffle? Hopefully all Taiyoukais do not require such proof of their power and masculinity. Back to Sesshoumaru, his situation is certainly not improving on a personal front. It's not like he could confide in his ward that he was sexually abused and is having flashbacks. Perhaps he can confide in Uchuu when he shows up, but that would mean revealing a great weakness. The only logical person he should be talking to is Kagome. However, how you are going to get those two back together is beyond me. Since you have not had Kagome recognizing Sesshoumaru's aura as being the same as her lover's and now that she can see again he cannot approach her for a private soft spoken talk, I don't know what you will pull out of the hat. I can't wait to find out. Hopefully you have the chapter all ready to go and will be posting it any day now. Yes? Jean.
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