| "Holding Them" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: SoutasSister (not signed in) On: November 30, 2006 19:57 CST
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Beautiful. Quite emotional and still in character for my favorite couple. I liked the details about Inuyasha's feelings and how you wrote everything from his perspective. I enjoyed this very much. :)
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Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: razorbladesinner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was such a beautiful story! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I liked how you made Inuyasha act...it was soo sweet! I can't wait for more of your stories in the future. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: C.A. (not signed in) On: November 30, 2006 15:04 CST
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That was just beautiful. It actually made my eyes water a little bit. It was wonderfully writtten and I could piture them sitting there holding the newborn baby. Excellent.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, that was just beautiful. This really is a wonderfully written piece of work; and I agree, you should be proud of it. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Title: endearingly beautiful
Reviewed By: playing with demons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 10:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was utterly beautiful...fantastic
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Reviewed By: kareemachan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 09:55 CST
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Very, very sweet. Not maudlin, saccharine-type sweet, but just a lovely look at a situation every parent experiences and remembers. You get inside a characters' mind as beautifully in this piece of writing as in your other ones. Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this fic. I was wondering if you could do something with Sesshoumaru? Being that he never really shows any emoyions on the outside. What would it be like to see what he's thinking on the inside? Maybe about Rin or a child of his own. He doesn't have to a mate, but you can do what you wnat. The reason I asked is because you did very well with Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Tuatha On: November 30, 2006 07:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So completely lovely.
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: November 30, 2006 06:14 CST
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Very sweet story - it's nice to see the two (three) of them at peace with the world around them.
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Reviewed By: cu-kid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* That was...beautiful. You already know I love your writing style, so I won't say anything about that. How wonderfully unique and fresh this was! I think, as a one-shot, this is poignantly striking in the amount of emotion it contains -and all from just one character's POV. Once again, you have managed to bring a smile to my face with a story that is simply...beautiful. ~cu-kid
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 00:50 CST
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So sweet! I almost cried there.. oh! you are an exelent writer!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: November 30, 2006 00:06 CST
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wonderful, sweet, compassionate. capturing that indescribable feeling that parents try to explain to others when they hold their children for the first time. warmth for a chilly evening.
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Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really should be proud of this. It's beautiful. Really well done and I think you captured Inuyasha's personality in a situation like this perfectly. This is just lovely and truly touching.
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Reviewed By: UsakoSerenity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is beautiful, no other words can describe it. You have every right to be proud. Any woman who reads this will sigh and want to be a mother and every mother will look at her kids and agree :)
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